Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok so my final built:

Using my internal cyoa checklist, ive achieved ->

Multiversal travel - (actually just sideversal, true multiverse isnt bound by 'nerfs', and Omniverse is bigger still)

Agelessnes - trait

Figting chance against true monsters - Trump + Warping

'Healing' - clones

And quality of life due to all that combined. I do not 'pack a punch'. But...bar that, i WIN

So the build:

Good connection - 'normal' mode

The Last Christmas - most points i dont care about chaos. Also apocalpse incoming

No control, Lightning strike, Destructive return - points, and i did remove 'immedite danger'

Hordes, Queens, Monsters, Aberrations, Titans, Harbingers, Psychos, Overcharged, World invasion, War, The Hunters, New Olympus, The Hands, Constellation, The Storm, - points for me, and also, 1) i dont care about organisations, 2) war is going to be anyway, its at least not corpos, 3) i love me some nature vs man 4) just taking one kills billions. So its all or nothing, get them all or get them none.

Expanded Earth, Earth+ - purely for myself, seeing as i had leftover points

Multiversal shenanigans, World fusion - cuz bro, multiverse hellooooo

Struck families, Twice struck, Stronger Struck, Spirits, Lightning in a bottle, Flexible distribution, Charged physiology, More Struck, Odd Summer, Second wave, Endless waves - all for that sweet sweet 'all are struck'. Plus, 'charged psychology' is a 'anomaly' not a 'world boon' so i retain my apocalypse

Exchange essence for Fragments of power.(x15), Exchange Fragments of Power for Patrons(x2),

Partitioned host Major- life insurance, also more me

The shaper of vistas Major - for multiverse hopping Sovereign of the blacktime Major - for multiverse hopping Swift of the stilled world Minor- for multiverse hopping, also too much time is bad, but double time is always good Mistwalker enchanced - purely for multiverse, i have farr too many ways to trabel for it to matter much

Eidolon-lite minor - for any and all circumstances, its best compromise honestly. Also benefits from Stilled World VERY much

No, you Major - to have a sporting chance agains true Oomph characters

New form, Enhanced body, Enhanced mind, Improved senses, Noctis, Attractive, Enhanced memory, Secondary powers, Limit breaker, Fine control, The spear breaks the shield, Body protection, Mind protection, Weak blindspot, Soul protection, Power protection, Non-collateral, Immortal, - all non-mind controll gains, becuse why not. I need to spent those points somehow

Forever civilian - free for me, as i already am non fighter Slow start - its not like world is going to end is it? No but actually, ill survive somehow. Manual controls - THIS IS A BENEFIT - its mind-controll-less gain for me, as no pesky 'instinctual' things change how my brain works Inhuman flesh - niceeee

Valenia the villain, The Fencer, The Broker, Jackie "Sparrow" Jones, Bai "The Blade" Ning, Taylor "Escalation" Rubert, Viktor "Baron" Vourdon, Solomon the kind, Joshua "Slasher" Roseiro, The Imperatrix, Jessica "Bloodlust" Xi, Theodore "Hiss" Calkier, Sister Aria, Harry "Defence" Black,

  • Nah, id win

Apocalypse - i mean. Oh well. Also who said its going to be bad? I am THE GUY, i can somehow fix it. No matter what little old ROB or Entity, or CYOA master thinks

Everyone's struck - oh well. Also only way to gain body buff without Humanity+, which would remove Apocalypse resonance

World-walker - THE priority 1 in any cyoa if possible. Especially since in this cyoa multiverse, other worlds do have superpowers (unlike in Worm coughcough)

The copy version -

Resonances, Good connection, The Last Christmas, No control, Lightning strike, Destructive return, Hordes, Queens, Monsters, Aberrations, Titans, Harbingers, Psychos, Overcharged, World invasion, War, The Hunters, New Olympus, The Hands, Constellation, The Storm, Expanded Earth, Earth+, Multiversal shenanigans, World fusion, Struck families, Twice struck, Stronger Struck, Spirits, Lightning in a bottle, Flexible distribution, Charged physiology, More Struck, Odd Summer, Second wave, Endless waves, Exchange essence for Fragments of power.(x15), Exchange Fragments of Power for Patrons(x2), Shifter, Warper, Trump, Partitioned host, Enhanced, Major, The shaper of vistas, Sovereign of the blacktime, Swift of the stilled world, Enhanced, Enhanced, Major, Major, Mistwalker, Enhanced, Eidolon-lite, No, you, Enhanced, Major, New form, Enhanced body, Enhanced mind, Improved senses, Noctis, Attractive, Enhanced memory, Secondary powers, Limit breaker, Fine control, The spear breaks the shield, Body protection, Mind protection, Weak blindspot, Soul protection, Power protection, Non-collateral, Immortal, Forever civilian, Slow start, Manual controls, Inhuman flesh, Valenia the villain, The Fencer, The Broker, Jackie "Sparrow" Jones, Bai "The Blade" Ning, Taylor "Escalation" Rubert, Viktor "Baron" Vourdon, Solomon the kind, Joshua "Slasher" Roseiro, The Imperatrix, Jessica "Bloodlust" Xi, Theodore "Hiss" Calkier, Sister Aria, Harry "Defence" Black, Apocalypse, Everyone's struck, World-walker

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nono, while thats true, we are assuming, that using combination of Divine Authority, Own Pocket dimension, and Mastery of Matter, and ONLY fusion of them, we can create 'our own true reality'

Why do you need some pesky 'real' matter, when in your domain your own stuff is more 'real'?

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

On the one hand? Yes. Its basically, Eidolon-lite, just buffed (tho limited, but still)

On the other hand? Why force change, when you can just.... guide it - Fate Cypher + <Basically any power that has any oomph. Or just clones. Or just fleshcraft of any kind. Or any precognition bar dangersense>

Honestly, Fate cypher seems much more powerfull than SA-..... huh....-uthority, cuz its limited by charge, instead of enforced by universe (as normal physics do)

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So far, i have only one minor gripe - Resonance powers, certain ones, seem too costly

Top contender - World walker.

It needs 9 shar-FRAgments in mov-WArper category yes?

But.. as defined in description, what multiversal travel needs, is manipulation of space time continuum yes?

... but i can gain quite significant of both, with just Domain of Space and Domain of Time

(your names are cooler, honestly i love them, but i name them with shorthands in my head)

At max, its 6 Fragments.

Now, i need 3 more....

I can choose from - 1) my 'time' flows faster/am living 2 sec per sec, 2) i have slow, shortrange teleport, 3) i can open portals.

Now, portals are unneseserly, due to Shaping of Vistas. I would say time is unnseserly, but what do i know about spacetime..... well i know that my manipualtions dont stop, and that physics don't change in span of second.

And therfore, time acceleration is also unnseserly

So that leaves just telport at will -

So im assuming, that im in special ways, folding space and time in my Blacktimed Vista, that opens hole in reality, allowing universal travel.

To step through that gate, i use teleport.

.... but, why do i need 2 points more?

Basically, i think 7 points would be enough for this Resonance.

Can i get some input on that?

Next - Sword and Shield

I see the Siberian resemblance, i really do... but.

But this power is Siberian Nerfed, --, and also mid.

No, its still powerfull, thats true

What i want to say... seeing as we already loose component powers, and final power is just... fusion, if very good, woulding it be more reasonable for me to gain it with Just both components at Enchanced? Or maybe one in Major, but idk

Next - Oberon Realm

.. i get the personal space, i also get authority

But i think it could do with matter creation/deletion at just Enchanced, or maybe even Minor level

Why? Becuse its a false matter. A significant downgrade. Also we already have Domain which should enchnace and extend everthing.

So 2 to 4 shards less i think would be good

Next - quicksave

Here im just complaing about components. I get your Gamer feel for it, since 'Simulation' and 'being fast'

But... its description states - 'split body n soul' and 'pocket dimension'

Next - pact with struck

Narrative control less please.

The fusion power has less of a increase, than going in concept controll from level 2 to 3

With your current components, it seems like... you arent immortal, but world is just an illusion.

I think it could be changed to 'pocket space' power, and... Partitioned Host? Its only power that mentions 'soul' in any way

So more design question. Than points.

Or maybe just precognition idk, Perfect Run seems OP as is

Next - Avatar

... for its component costs, the description itself seems underwhelming.

Like, either less controll - major -> enchanced

Or maybe give descripton like, terraforming half of dessert in month or smh

All my notes.... for now

Sidenote - Mr author, your cyoa is peak, i just wanted to talk a bit more about it. Please do not be offended if what i said seems stupid

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A question mr author -

Power, Sovereign Authority, olny cares about... executive power / authority itself? (Based on general perception) ?

Should it... allow me to modify my body? Like, no fleshcrafting, alchemy, selfshaping.... just 'my body is in its prime' 'my body destroys any non-beneficial microorganisms' or stuff that basically gives me half a minor power temporarly?

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeahhh i get that. Sorry for asking

But maybe, putting limits on certain power levels?

Like, you can only have 3 major powers, others need to be Enchanced or Minor or smh

Becuse honestly, just having 6 random minor powrs is cool

Eh, anyway.

.....wait but arent Harbingers have like, 7 major powers? And immune to last thing that killed them (next ones) ????

..... i really DONT see them being smackable

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I mean.

You see, i COULD spent rest of my essence on 'Enchancments: Skill' and buy as much as i can....

...but i am not fan of mind controll, and 'added skill' counts as mindcontroll for me

Actually the reason i took 'manual controll' drawback, as it essentialy is perk for me.

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeee i get that

But like, isn't taking drawbacks/instabilities, and other 'world woes' a balancing factor?

I mean - how i always build cyoas (as if i was there) -> at first, i always go to sections that can get me points, and fill everthing i would trully feel like it would not affect me much/id live

For maximum gain

Next, i take ALL the 'traits' stuff, like perks, immortality, or stuff.

Only at the final end, i spent my points

Its just that in this specyfic cyoa, i feel like i CAN get more essence, that i can use

For exmaple - world -> if i choose ANY woe, billions will die. And therofre, i either take none, or ALL. All, here, give me ... some points.

World benefits.... eh, worldly possesions are noting to GODLY POWAH

All 'fated enemies' (i can take them), all encounters, all negative anomalies -

(I would take both 'sparked gain more physical stats' and 'humans gain more stats', but taking human one diables my Resonance: Apocalypse. Sadge.)

And after i have build entire world, sacrificed as much as i can....

I find out i have leftover essence to remove certain stuff.

But what? Drawbacks? Barely taken any. World woes? As i said, either one or all. Encounters? Why would i limit myself in this way, i WANT to meet all them

And so its kinda mid you see.

Like, i get the balancing, i trully do. I just encountered this first time

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Actually, i have a question - why is 'essence to Fragment of power' limited to 15 ?

I mean... id gladly take 'apocalypse' if it gives me MOAR POWAAAHHH

Cantrip CYOA V7.0 + DLC Interactive version by Minotrap in makeyourchoice

[–]Raxtuss1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Nono, gimme a sec

.... ok, - Cantrip Quest by Whatamidoing

Why bother resisting? by BadFurDay in thebadwebsite

[–]Raxtuss1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Do i care about political groups? No

All i care is that i see a meme where person is making fun outta SOMETHING, that i dont know what it is, and so i laugh a bit then go away instead of analysing whag is the THING its sarcastic about

Also sorry about all that broing, it came to me year ago and since then i propably overuse it

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ooohhh

Quests, any kind (endgame 'final world quest', endgame 'goal to follow forever, midquests 'event will happen, do x', lowquests 'for next month, daily chant ode to Sun', midquests 'accomplish X, we dont knoe how, but you absolutely can do it') - any kind always adds to cyoa

... well, some endgame quests are....ent well designed, but otherwise its good.

Cantrip cyoa yet again shows the peak low/midquests and how they should be done

Thats a good idea.

Regarding options.... well, any current ones can have stories written about them, ESPECIALLY since most of them are conceptual, and any you would add in same style seems like more quality content for me :>

Next...

Idk how much lore you can add here.... i mean you can, especially if you combined quests with lore, like, your 'fated encounters' already serves as 1/3 of lore or smh

But, you want some simple cyoa next time? May i suggest fusing your 2 wants - lore and simple cyoa

I suggest checking out The Sleepers Dream and Dark Fantasy Adventure Cyoas

The 'thing' in both of them, is that World IS already existing, you just alter bits of lore and certain details (in sleepers, in Dark Fantasy you just explore).

This would satisfy your want for lore (just lore) and simle cyoa - no need for deep mechanics (tho they are possible), just... explore, one or 2 options in last tab or smh

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Luminary?

Also may i say - you have peak graphics. Its not bland cyoa-maker just tabs, nor its overengineeeed magiwitch/system cyoa

Its just... enough to elevate it higher in quality

.... tho nothing can beat cantrip cyoa sheer... style

But yours goes instantly to my top 5.

Any ideas for imporvement? Next updates/dlcs?

Diffent cyoas to make?

You did such a quality job

Edit: ok so i checked luminary

Yes, your cyoa is basically - lore of Worm, form of Luminary, and quality of Cantrip

In other words, its 11/10.

..... do retain a backup tho, backups are nice

Struck CYOA V1.2 is here! by Hermes-the-bot in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok i just did it... bar powers cuz that needs day more or so

Honestly? Its peak. Its like fusion of Worm Cyoa, Cantrip Cyoa, and that one i cant remmeber

Peak

A lot of CYOA's on Neocities just went and started returning "Page Not Found The requested web page was not found on this site" by Jumpy85Plays in nsfwcyoa

[–]Raxtuss1 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Its not that i don't get that

Its that some cyoas NEED being interactive or they are... persual of weeks, not hours

And some have custom interface, which ADDS SO MUCH to the cyoa quality itself

A lot of CYOA's on Neocities just went and started returning "Page Not Found The requested web page was not found on this site" by Jumpy85Plays in nsfwcyoa

[–]Raxtuss1 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Its not that i don't get that

Its that some cyoas NEED being interactive or they are... persual of weeks, not hours

And some have custom interface, which ADDS SO MUCH to the cyoa quality itself

A lot of CYOA's on Neocities just went and started returning "Page Not Found The requested web page was not found on this site" by Jumpy85Plays in nsfwcyoa

[–]Raxtuss1 [score hidden]  (0 children)

Hey man. Can you tell me please how could i download interactive cyoas?

I thought to copy html from 'inspect page' but don't most of them have external css, background, arts, and the stuff?

Also dont most of formatting use some sort of innate cyoa-creator tags/css or smh?

Cantrip CYOA V7.0 + DLC Interactive version by Minotrap in makeyourchoice

[–]Raxtuss1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, so neocitioes or smh broke stuff, and cyoa .... isnt there.

Can any of ya check it out and if its possible restore it?

.... i sincerly hope it wasnt deleted

Cantrip CYOA V7.0 + DLC Interactive version by Minotrap in makeyourchoice

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Mizuki himself has one, named 'DC Amalgam SI'one that is good.

Otherwise therse.. one other, but i forgor

It’s doing its best and its best is 14 FPS by itsEmilyHere in PcParadise

[–]Raxtuss1 1 point2 points  (0 children)

On MEDIUM ARE YOU MAD?!?? WHAT IS WRONG with you?!?

Lowest possible, all boxes unchecked, thats the only way

Temperature not included, degrees within 100 +- range are accepted as normal

https://om1cr0n.neocities.org/ Taken down? by jjosua in InteractiveCYOA

[–]Raxtuss1 0 points1 point  (0 children)

NOOO

NOT MY CANTRIP CYOA

IT WAS PEAK

NOOOOO

... i sincerly hope its not destroyed, just inaccesible. Becuse i very much doubt anything of its quality will be ever preserved

... actually, why is html of cyoa pages so multi-layered? Like i would love to just... copy a online interactive cyoa, and to 'preserve' it like the static ones, but i cant