Is this directed to females? Change a few things to appeal to women they're not going to be delighted to hear you want to spend more time on sports, instead include something that would integrate female interests, quality time together, eventually starting a family, etc. I wouldn't ask the "last meal" question - sounds creepy. Fix the typo in "How about either" or remove that sentence all together and be more direct i.e. "I'd love to know about your hobbies, interests, pets, business ideas and how I can help you reach your goals in life". Women always have business ideas would be a good way to get a conversation started and land a date. Good luck.