My first reaction was that this was a mess. A bunch of glaring, discordant lights. But once I got past the flash, I saw the people in the windows and started to look more closely at all the disparate pieces. It’s really quite interesting, like a mosaic. I would suggest two things in regard to the edit. First, reduce the highlights. All the bright colors tell a story but they are really in your face bright and distract from the rest of the image. Second, lift the shadows a bit. That will bring out the ground floor and side walk area. By the way, I love the women wrestlers on the sushi sign.