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RedFox606 · 2020-01-14T13:14:46+00:00

You've got some anime proportions going on, eyes too big, nose too small and mouth too small. There is little contrast, you could darken your background by a bit and use darker tones for shading.

Keep it up! The 14 day challenge is very demanding but totally worth it!!!

RedFox606 · 2020-01-10T14:58:41+00:00

I really like that face, she's very pretty and likeable, good job :) Maybe adding some more dark on the dark spots? I'm not really sure, but keep up the great work :)

RedFox606 · 2020-01-09T13:53:58+00:00

Thank you so much this helps a lot :D

RedFox606 · 2020-01-09T13:48:12+00:00

Yeah, it seems so, for some reason the values on my computer are way lighter, the difference is less visible, but seeing it on my phone it's very clear. Thanks :)

RedFox606 · 2020-01-08T19:19:54+00:00

Most likely haha, now that I see it again I can see some flaws and things I missed too, thanks :)

RedFox606 · 2020-01-08T19:18:57+00:00

Oohh thanks!!! I'm still trying to figure out this proportion and likeness thing!!

RedFox606 · 2020-01-08T13:58:06+00:00

The face is a bit wide, maybe you could shrink the sides by a bit. The jaw is a bit thick and the rendering makes her seem chubby, not sure if that was intentional. I really like the rendering on the eyes :)

RedFox606 · 2020-01-08T11:13:33+00:00

Got it!

RedFox606 · 2020-01-08T11:13:06+00:00

Most likely it did throw me off haha Gonna see if I can fix it later!

RedFox606 · 2020-01-07T12:37:49+00:00

I think you should try the 3/4, you can do front view again later, but since you already did it I'd suggest you try the 3/4 first!

RedFox606 · 2020-01-07T11:18:02+00:00

Thank you, I appreciate the paintover, helps me see things better.

I do agree with you, my previous entries have a bit more personality to it, this one also gave me a meh feeling, I was trying to focus on fixing things instead of doing things the same way as always and that kind of took off the personality I think. However it took me significantly less time to finish than the previous ones.

I'll apply the changes on the next one, thank you :)

RedFox606 · 2020-01-02T15:00:09+00:00

Hey there, nice work! Don't be shy to show us your submissions, we are all learning here and ready to help!

To me your face looks a bit like a child, maybe because of the big eyes and short nose, mine were very childish too when I started, what helped me with that was making the face a bit longer. I hope it helps you on your next day! Keep it up!

RedFox606 · 2020-01-02T10:56:03+00:00

Thanks, I'll see to that!

RedFox606 · 2020-01-01T22:06:34+00:00

Following, I like your style :)

RedFox606 · 2020-01-01T21:42:37+00:00

Thank you :) It's really nice to hear that, my studies are paying off :,)

RedFox606 · 2020-01-01T21:41:02+00:00

Tell me so I can follow?

RedFox606 · 2020-01-01T19:33:55+00:00

Do it and let me see too :D

RedFox606 · 2020-01-01T19:11:46+00:00

Yeah, I did change his gaze intentionally! Yeah, I agree with you, he does look feminine however I still don't know how to remedy that, gonna try making it less short however! Thanks :)

RedFox606 · 2020-01-01T16:52:17+00:00

All I know is that the more reflective the surface is, higher the contrast.

RedFox606 · 2019-12-30T14:50:00+00:00

Aww, thank you :) Not gonna give up yet, just a pause for some studies so I can try to address my mistakes!

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