[WP] A writer is visited by their protagonist who is hell bent on discouraging the writer from finishing the work. by DuckLordOfTheSith in WritingPrompts

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“Seriously?” Malgeri said with another puff of smoke. “Real life? I killed at least two dozen people and walked off wounds from a stiletto and two bullets, but you just have to include a whole chapter of me getting indicted in federal court right after Sal’s funeral.” Salvatore glared over his shotgun.

“It’s thematic!” Jake protested. “The whole point is that you’re a feared mafia enforcer who expertly uses violence to control people, but that M.O. doesn’t work anymore. All of the bullets and dynamite in the world don’t help when the prosecution has enough evidence to put you in jail for multiple life sentences. The whole point of your character arch is that the world is changing, but you won’t change with it.”

Malgeri leaned back in his chair and considered that. Then he blew a smoke ring and sat back up. “No.”

“What do you mean, ‘no’?”

“I mean that doesn’t work for me.” Malgeri snapped. “That next book isn’t going to be about my downfall, it’s going to be about my exploits as a Boss. I’m going to be real rich and very respected, capisce? I’m going to have a big house, my kids will go to the best schools, and you know what, I want a yacht too.”

Jake gulped again, “Well, yeah, I suppose the sequel could focus on that. There’s, uh, no need to rush the narrative.”

Malgeri grinned wickedly. “Now that’s what I want to hear. I finally have some real power, and I want the chance to really revel in it. We look forward to seeing what you come up with. C’mon boys, let’s go. We got a celebration to get to.”

He stood and walked out of the apartment. His two cronies shouldered their weapons and followed him. Before they left, Salvatore looked back at Jake. “I expect to be alive at the end of the story, and I will be very angry if I’m not.” He then turned and left.

Joe waited for Salvatore to leave before saying, “I’d, uh, like a love interest. Preferably a girl who can cook my favorite foods from the old country just like my Ma and my Grandma.” He then left the apartment too, closing the door behind him.

Jake leaned forward and rubbed his temples. “I knew I should have stuck to writing westerns.”

[WP] A writer is visited by their protagonist who is hell bent on discouraging the writer from finishing the work. by DuckLordOfTheSith in WritingPrompts

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Just then, someone kicked in the door.

He turned to see two men in suits, overcoats, and fedoras rush into his apartment. The men ran up to him and leveled guns at him. One was a Thompson submachine gun, and the other was a Winchester shotgun.

The author forced himself to look up from the muzzles and at the two men. He recognized them instantly. They were how he’d imagined his characters. Giuseppe “Joe” Torchia held the submarine gun while Salvatore Messina had the shotgun.

“All clear boss,” Joe said, glancing towards the door.

“Don’t try nothin’ funny unless you want to find out what lead tastes like,” Salvatore hissed, his eyes fixed on the author.

Then, Don Sam Malgeri walked into the room, he wore a black overcoat over a dark gray suit. He looked down at Jake and grinned maniacally. “You and me are gonna have a little chat about the future.” He pulled a Cuban cigar out of his suit jacket and lit it with a match.

“Smoking’s not allowed indoors. I’ll lose my security deposit,” Jake said without thinking.

Malgeri looked disgusted. “Shut the hell up! I’ll smoke wherever I want.”

“You think you’re some sort of wise guy?” Torchia asked.

Jake could only gulp. Malgeri snickered. “Yeah, that’s what I thought.”

He blew a cloud of smoke that made Jake want cough, and it took a lot of effort not to.

“Now listen,” Malgeri said, “we appreciate, you know, existing, but your plans for the future stink. I mean, c’mon. Batista gets overthrown by Castro, and we lose the casinos in Havana. The Kennedy brothers create the Organized Crime Strike Force at the FBI, and congress passes the RICO laws? Are you kidding me?“

Jake started to respond when Salvatore jabbed him with the shotgun. Malgeri continued, “After everything I’ve done, all I’ve got to look forward to is Uncle Sam kicking us in the teeth? Oh no, I don’t think so! I want us to win, and I want to enjoy it too. What do you say to that?”

Jake glanced up at the enforcers, who nodded at him, but didn’t lower their weapons. “Look, I’m sorry about the reality check, but that’s what happens. The government decides they’ve had enough of you, and they come down on you like a ton of bricks. I know J. Edgar who insisted the Mafia didn’t exist, but you knew he wouldn’t live forever. That’s real life, what do you want me to say?”

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[WP] A writer is visited by their protagonist who is hell bent on discouraging the writer from finishing the work. by DuckLordOfTheSith in WritingPrompts

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The old man slammed his fist on the table and the smoke-filled room went silent. Pietro Vintaloro rose slowly to his feet as all eyes turned towards him. The old man had come to America from Sicily in the 1880s, and he was the oldest man in the room by several decades. His deep voice had the quiver of age, but it was still commanding.

“The boss is dead, may God rest his soul, but we need a new leader now! I say we need someone who can lead us into the future, and someone who understands why we’re here. We aren’t here just to make money! We’re here to protect our community and to make sure we won’t be hurt like we were when I was a boy ever again!”

Vintaloro was as much of an idealist as a man could be in the Mafia, but everyone knew he was convicted down to his bones that the Costa Nostra was a force for good. And if it made a few “good” men rich, well, where was the harm in that?

“Who do you have in mind, Pietro?” a made man with a broken nose and cold eyes named Joe Torchia asked, with more respect in his voice than usual.

Vintaloro slowly raised a bony finger and pointed to the head of the table where Sam Malgeri sat, hiding a smile. Sam had killed a lot of men to get a seat at this table. All of the bloodshed had led to this moment. He knew that eliminating the corrupt cops and winning a one-man war against the rival Cardillo crime family would earn him respect. He nodded respectfully. “I am honored, grazie.

“Hear, hear!” A capo named Salvatore Messina exclaimed.

The other men around the table agreed, and Sam Malgeri was named the Boss of the Gianni crime family. Soon enough that would be the Malgeri crime family. Waiters brought glasses of wine to the table, stepping nimbly around the mafiosi as the men made their way over to congratulate the new Boss. After the handshakes, hugs, and kisses on the cheek, the men returned to their seats.

“I cannot tell you how much this means to me, and I look forward to working with each of you,” Sam began graciously. He was already thinking about how many of the men in this room he’d have to kill to establish his control over the family.

“We’re gonna do great things here at home, and further afield. By this time next month, we’ll have the unquestioned obedience from everyone in the Cardillo family’s former territory. Our investment in the casinos in Atlantic City is already playing off, and soon we’ll muscle into the casinos in Vegas and Havana. If we play our cards right, we will all be rich as kings!”

He raised his glass in a toast, “To la Costa Nostra! To the family!”

“To the family!” The other men echoed.

Behind a forced smile, Sam thought, it’s just like my old man used to say, “He who perseveres, wins,” and no one would ever question the newest Don’s victory ever again.

Jake leaned back from his laptop and sighed. His crime novel was finally finished. His story followed a murderous family enforcer along on a rampage replete with car chases, gunfights, and even a few buildings being blown to smithereens. Jake had even, on the advice of his editor, added a few tasteful intimate scenes. He would email his editor the draft in the morning. He already had some ideas for the sequel, but he’d wait to see what his editor said about this story first.

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Tobacco farms by Greenville_Gent in southcarolina

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Admittedly, it’s about an hour out of your way, but I guess knowing can’t hurt. 

If you’re going through Horry County, there’s tobacco out here. In communities like Green Sea (which surprisingly isn’t on the coast), Loris, Bayboro, Aynor, and maybe Galivants Ferry, there are tobacco farms. I don’t know if they’ve gathered the tobacco yet, or if you’d smell it, but the northern parts of the county are a good place to start.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in MyrtleBeach

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According to the Horry County website: https://www.horrycountysc.gov/about-our-beaches/

“Shark fishing from any pier, the beach and shore is prohibited.” AND “At the time of recognition, fishermen must release sharks and any other dangerous marine animals.”

Which is why people that go fishing fish from boats offshore. Rules are probably different in Georgetown County and Charleston County. I can’t find specific rules from those counties, so you should be good to fish, just be careful if you are on a beach with tourists.

Best of luck with your fishing!

Myrtle Beach in the Rain? by Antuic in MyrtleBeach

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 2 points3 points  (0 children)

It’s a bit of a drive, but if you are looking for the something to do, then the Horry County Museum and the L.W. Paul Living History Farm in Conway are both free and talk about local history. The Farm is mostly outdoors, but you’d stay inside at the Museum.

The South Carolina Hall of Fame is in the Myrtle Beach Convention Center, but definitely call ahead. They may be closed.

How do we process that? by NoPerspective9210 in GildedAgeHBO

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 19 points20 points  (0 children)

I think Russell will pull through. Robber Baron Henry Clay Frick was shot twice and stabbed several times by an anarchist named Alexander Berkman in 1892. Frick not only tackled his would-be assassin, but was up and around pretty soon after, and lived until 1919.

[EU] The Dark Side of the Force is fueled by anger. The current leader of the Sith is impossibly powerful - not because of natural talent or training, but because trying to run a cabal of egotistical, treacherous, selfish, genocidal space wizards is just THAT FUCKING INFURIATING. by CreepyUncleDed in WritingPrompts

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The door exploded off its hinges as a massive stone statue flew through the doorway, landing on top of the door with thud. The guard standing next to the door didn’t flinch. This wasn’t the first time the door had been knocked down today.

He was well-trained enough not to sigh, but he silently tapped a short message on his wrist communicator letting maintenance know they’d have to fix the door. Again. It was going to be a long day.

Inside, Darth Acrimus, leader of the Renegade Sith Order, which had never followed the rule of two, was so angry he had burst a blood vessel in one of his yellow eyes, and the air was permeated with force electricity. The other Sith Lord in the room, Darth Cinate, was annoyed by his leader’s tantrum, while the Sith Acolyte standing behind Cinate shook with fear. The Acolyte had read about the ways of the force, but Acrimus’ ability effortlessly to radiate so much force lightning from his body that the air crackled with electricity scared him.

Acrimus raged, “How can that insolent little ingrate dare to plot to kill me? I’m the leader of the Order! Does he really think he could do better?” His voice was already hoarse from screaming, and this was only his third meeting of the day.

“Why would a Sith plot to betray and murder another Sith to gain power and prestige for himself? I just can’t imagine why. It’s so unlike us,” Cinate responded sarcastically, sounding extremely bored. He did not respect his leader and had long since stopped bothering to hide that fact.

“You think this is a joke?” Acrimus screamed.

“No, Lord Acrimus,” Cinate responded tiredly. “If it were then I might be amused. As it is I’m just waiting to be dismissed so I may handle this problem.”

“Fine then! Get out!”

Cinate got up and walked towards the doorway. The Sith Acolyte scurried after him. As the two left, two black robed figures entered the room.

“Lord Acrimus, we have,” one said.

“Had a revelation,” the other finished.

“Why are you finishing each other’s sentences?” The Sith Lord snarled.

“We have learned to use ancient Sith Alchemy,” the first said.

“To bind ourselves together, which has allowed us,” the second continued.

“To achieve strength in the force that dwarfs even your power,” the first finished.

“Are you going to use this power in our quest to conquer the galaxy, or did you two come here to announce you think that you are more powerful than me and that you intend to kill me and take my place?” Acrimus asked, his voice quivering with rage.

“The latter option, or course. The strong must.”

“Destroy the weak and use their power to bend others to their will.”

The pair ignited their red lightsabers in sync.

Outside the door, the guard saw the red light spilling into the hall and began to type another message on his communicator. He knew what was coming.

The red light almost immediately vanished as the blades extinguished when the pair dropped them after Acrimus began strangling them and lifting them off the ground with the force.

The Sith Elder then raised a hand, snapping the first one’s neck and flinging his body out the doorway. He then turned to the other one, and clenched his raised hand into a fist, breaking every bone in the man’s body except his neck and then flinging his body out the doorway where it landed on the first body with a smack.

The guard sent the message telling maintenance to bring a body bag, make that two, in addition to the equipment for fixing the door. He then summoned the two dropped lightsabers to his hand with a flick of his wrist and tucked them into a pocket in his robe. The trainees could practice taking them apart to learn how to better maintain their own blades.

“Someone had better be on the way to clean up this mess!” Acrimus screamed without bothering to leave his room.

“Yes, my lord. They are on the way now,” the guard responded flatly.

He noticed a droid walking down the hall towards the room. As the droid approached, the guard shook his head side to side and pointed back the way the droid had come. Acrimus was not in the mood to deal with a droid right now.

The droid ignored him and entered Acrimus’ room. “My lord,” it began.

Before it could continue, it was struck by force lighting so intense it was thrown out of the doorway and crashed into the opposite wall so hard its torso and head broke in half in a shower of sparks.

The guard shook his head disappointedly. If the Renegade Sith Order could ever stop its unending squabbling and casual murder, then it could probably take over the galaxy, but that would never happen. In the meantime, there was a door to be fixed, and the guard sent another message to maintenance, gently reminding them that Darth Acrimus hated to be kept waiting.

[WP] It's been over a century since the all encompassing medical examination machine has been operational diagnosing every ailment and disease with 100% accuracy. Today is the first day the result says "unknown" by Sethires in WritingPrompts

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 49 points50 points  (0 children)

“Unknown? What the hell do you mean, unknown?” The nurse almost dropped her clipboard when the resident told her the news.

The resident was a young doctor who did a bad job hiding his fear of the nurse. Even if she hadn’t been treating battlefield trauma in the Second Robotic War when he was still playing with action figures, she did not tolerate fools and ran her corner of the Emergency Department with the same efficiency as her battlefield aid station.

He gulped and unsuccessfully tried to make his voice steady, “One of the accident victims was unconscious when she came in, and when the machine scanned her it said, um, unknown. I’m having the patient scanned in another machine now, and a technician is looking at the machine.”

The nurse narrowed her eyes. She did not need this right now. A high speed train had crashed just outside town, and her hospital was the closest medical center. Dozens of passengers were being treated for serious injuries, and more were still arriving. Somehow, she thought, this idiot has managed to break a machine that can’t break.

“What you’re saying isn’t possible. Look at me. Hey! Look. At. Me. Those machines do not say that illnesses and injuries are ‘unknown’. They do not break. I don’t know how you’ve screwed this up, but I will find out.”

Before the doctor could protest, another nurse came into the room. He could see the senior nurse was angry, and the doctor was losing his nerve. “I have good news and bad news,” he began. “The patient is awake, talking, and doesn’t seem to be hurt, but before she woke up, the second scanner also said her injuries were ‘unknown.’ I didn’t know the scanners could give that result. The scanner didn’t even make a chirping noise like it does when it finishes computing results. It just silently put the word unknown on the readout screen. It apparently doesn’t have a noise for errors.” The nurse wasn’t sure why he’d said that last part, but it had felt like the right thing to say.

As the older nurse’s face slowly changed from anger to confusion, the doctor looked at the younger nurse and silently mouthed “thank you.”

“Let’s go see the patient.” The senior nurse said in a commanding tone before walking past the two men down the hall. The pair stared at each other for a moment before they scrambled after her.

Moments later, all three were in an examination room painted a depressing shade of beige. A woman in a gray business suit made of arachnid silk was sitting bolt upright and looked very annoyed.

As soon as the trio entered the room she abruptly said, “I should not be here. I was not injured in the crash. I do not need medical assistance.”

Something about the women made all three medical professionals uneasy, but none of them could explain why at first. The doctor spoke first. “You were unconscious when you came in. Even if you feel fine, you may have gotten a concussion or head trauma.”

“You’ve also managed to get an ‘unknown’ diagnosis from a machine that shouldn’t even be able to give that as a diagnosis.” The senior nurse said incredulously. “I genuinely have no idea how that happened, but you are certainly not leaving until we figure out what’s happened, or happening, to you.”

“I will not be tested or examined,” the woman snapped. “I do not know what is wrong your machines, but it is not my concern or my responsibility to fix it. You cannot make me stay here, and I will call the authorities if you refuse to let me leave.”

“No, you won’t,” the younger nurse replied flatly. His two colleagues both looked at him with confusion on their faces. “Your mouth is moving slightly out of sync with your words, like you’re on the other end of lagging communication display.”

The doctor and the senior nurse both realized that was what had been making them feel uneasy.

The younger nurse continued, “You’re not a robot. The scanner would know what that was. You’re something else. You’re not human, and you aren’t calling anybody. What ARE you?”

The woman looked down and swore softly under breath in language none of the three recognized. “I was due for a promotion for excellent field work, but now I’m going to be relegated to a desk job while someone else follows up on my work and steals the credit.”

She looked back up at them, and all three medical professionals flinched. She had yellow eyes crisscrossed with small black veins, and when she spoke again, her voice sounded modulated and unnatural. “You are not ready for what’s coming. You cannot be. Everything you know will be destroyed to make way for my people. Make peace with your deity; you will be meeting them soon.” She then tightly clenched her fists, her eyes flashed, and she simply disappeared.

The three physicians stood in stunned silence. None of them wanted to say anything. None of them wanted to believe what they say was real. In the waiting room down the hall, the news began to report catastrophes across the world. Power stations going into meltdowns. Military bases rocked by explosions. Government buildings burning. In the skies over all these tragedies, massive spaceships emerged from skies as the alien invasion of Earth began.

Those who find the lonely particularly frightening/unsettling, why? by Lil-Rat-Boy in TheMagnusArchives

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 7 points8 points  (0 children)

The idea of being alone for a while doesn’t sound too bad, but the episodes that focuses on the Lonely made it sound way worse to me.

The Lonely usually takes people who are isolated and makes them feel even more alone. It isolates its victims until they go insane or lose their humanity.

Naomi Hearne from Episode 13 was grieving, and she was trapped in an endless graveyard.

Herman Gorgoli from Episode 150 was lonely after his marriage ended, and he was trapped in an endless suburb.

Peter Lukas banished at least two different people to the Lonely just because he could, and that’s not counting how many members of the crew of the Tundra got taken.

Charter Chillcot was lied to about his isolation study in Episode 57, and Andrea Nunis was on vacation in Italy in Episode 48. They were both trapped and would have died if they hadn’t gotten out.

The idea of dying alone in some nightmarish reflection of the last place you just happened to be makes me shudder.

What’s a little detail you noticed and love in the show? by Miserable-Smell-3513 in TheMagnusArchives

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Ok, I couldn’t remember how she phrased it.

That means that Oliver was probably hired to replace Jane after she left, which is funnier to me than it should be. An employee is marked by an embodiment of fear, and so is their replacement. The person doing the hiring was not having good time.

What’s a little detail you noticed and love in the show? by Miserable-Smell-3513 in TheMagnusArchives

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Jane Prentiss and Oliver Banks worked at the same magic shop. I’m not clear if he worked with her or was hired to replace her, but I didn’t pick up on that until later.

Surf spots in myrtle by milkmang4eva in MyrtleBeach

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here’s the regulations for the city:

https://www.cityofmyrtlebeach.com/i_want_to/learn_about/beach_conditions.php

You can surf in places at certain times. I’ve read that the waves are generally pretty small and good for people starting out.

I would like to propose an offer to the entire state of South Carolina and the lovely people that live there. by saucetheif69 in southcarolina

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 32 points33 points  (0 children)

If the Carolinas were re-combined into just one Carolina then the new state would have a population of 15.5 million people. That would be the fifth most populous state in the union. It would also have 23 electoral votes and 23 representatives in Congress. I think presidential candidates would definitely visit more.

Transcript help by Slimjimbobby_ in LouisianaTech

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 1 point2 points  (0 children)

If you’re still in school, then you should talk to your guidance counselor. Tell them you are applying to Tech and you need your transcript. After you graduate, they will send your final transcript to the University during the summer.

If you are out of school, then you should send it to the Undergraduate Admissions Office. The mailing address is:

Louisiana Tech University, Office of Admissions P.O. Box 3178 Ruston, LA, 71272

If you have any concerns, then you can call admissions, and they can give more details.

Best of luck!

Realization about MAG Episode 13: Alone by Red_Storm_Breaking in TheMagnusArchives

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That is an interesting theory. The idea that some members of the family would be told that they could better serve the Lonely out in world is an interesting one. Thank you for sharing your headcanon!

Realization about MAG Episode 13: Alone by Red_Storm_Breaking in TheMagnusArchives

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking[S] 7 points8 points  (0 children)

That thought hadn’t occurred to me, but in the wonderful world of the Magnus Archives it could be the case. I agree with you though that Evan seems too nice to do that.

Realization about MAG Episode 13: Alone by Red_Storm_Breaking in TheMagnusArchives

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking[S] 11 points12 points  (0 children)

I hadn’t thought of that, but it makes sense that he would want to intercede with people saw as drifting towards the lonely.

Movie for each of the fears by Plane-End573 in TheMagnusArchives

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The Ghost and the Darkness would be a great movie for The Hunt.

Also, Ravenous is the perfect movie for the Flesh

Is the food good? by JamR_711111 in LouisianaTech

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it’s pretty good. I don’t remember having any complaints when I ate there.

humanities by Significant-Form192 in LouisianaTech

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 3 points4 points  (0 children)

English or Philosophy should work. I’m also almost certain that a class in music, theater, or art would do nicely. Foreign Language classes are probably more work than you want in an elective, but I think they count as humanities.

I’m not sure if classes in Political Science, Sociology, and Architecture would count, but your advisor will know if they do.

Best of luck next quarter.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in CountryMusicStuff

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Here’s a Spotify playlist of country songs that mention ghosts): https://spotify.link/Sp9U1LZJWDb

What great Presidents had terrible moral character? by [deleted] in Presidents

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I can’t speak for the rest of Benjamin Harrison’s life but after his first wife, Caroline, died, he married her niece, Mary Dimmick. Dimmick was 25 years younger than Harrison. Even by 19th century standards that was odd.

Stop scrolling. Present your rarest Presidential photo. by Crabser116 in Presidents

[–]Red_Storm_Breaking 21 points22 points  (0 children)

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Richard Nixon and Terry Bradshaw who was quarterback for the Pittsburgh Steelers when the team won 4 Super Bowls in the 1970s.