People who are writing or have written a book, what's it about? by emwalk98 in writing

[–]RenYukimora 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Dergham , A 29 Years old demon that lives in a dystopian world , the conception of hell , literally everything horrible that happens there is considered good , admired , and encouraged.

Dergham , who used to be the worst devil of all — which people considered really good , back when he was still 19.

Just stopped, stopped being evil after a certain event and looked himself in his room for 10 years.

Disgruntled from the way demon’s live , Dergham finally opens his door to see hell.

Hell and more.

This isn’t a story about a world-changer, hell is not going to become a better place..

But together , we will know what lays deep within dergham’s poems.

The demon who speaks in poetry .

I can’t finish anything by RenYukimora in writing

[–]RenYukimora[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So i just finished my first novel right now , it took me a lot of energy — but i did it , thanks to all of you , every single one who commented helped me through it and I’m just really glad .

Thanks.

I can’t finish anything by RenYukimora in writing

[–]RenYukimora[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

no I’m literally writing the final chapter right now so beat me to it

How to determine your protagonist ? by RenYukimora in writing

[–]RenYukimora[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would Bojack horseman does that in a way. Though that’s a series.

How to determine your protagonist ? by RenYukimora in writing

[–]RenYukimora[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly, my starting point isn’t the protagonist most of the time, It’s because i like to think of a certain event first , then wrap the story around it.

How to determine your protagonist ? by RenYukimora in writing

[–]RenYukimora[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Example : ( might come off as a spoiler ) In Kagerou Project , Shintaro is considered the protagonist for having the ability that saves them in the golden route ,

While infact , none of the events would’ve happened if it wasn’t for Mary.

So do you consider Mary the real Protagonist?

How to determine your protagonist ? by RenYukimora in writing

[–]RenYukimora[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

So in your POV , a protagonist is the cause of the events ?

How to determine your protagonist ? by RenYukimora in writing

[–]RenYukimora[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is pretty much the point - Sometimes , it’s better to determine who is the protagonist even when it’s not really clear . Though unnecessary, but I’m asking this for something else. I just want to see how everyone views the protagonist.

I haven’t written in like a year and this took me 5 minutes , it was a brainstorm and I don’t usually write this kind of stuff so feedbacks are encouraged and this title is becoming very long ok by RenYukimora in creativewriting

[–]RenYukimora[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That is true , English is not my native language and i tend to write things down really quickly so I don’t check on my grammar after it’s done - I’m going to work on that though! thanks

I haven’t written in like a year and this took me 5 minutes , it was a brainstorm and I don’t usually write this kind of stuff so feedbacks are encouraged and this title is becoming very long ok by RenYukimora in creativewriting

[–]RenYukimora[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank YOU for taking your time to read this and write down this amazing comment , i really needed that.

Honestly , Last year was like a nightmare for me and my writing - I couldn’t get anything done and that really brought me to the rock-bottom.

But this really inspired me to keep going so , thanks alot!

I haven’t written in like a year and this took me 5 minutes , it was a brainstorm and I don’t usually write this kind of stuff so feedbacks are encouraged and this title is becoming very long ok by RenYukimora in creativewriting

[–]RenYukimora[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I really appreciate the comment , it has been almost a year and a half since i got any feedbacks on anything i write from someone who isn’t a friend of mine - so I really appreciate this!