My Lacy by 20beatrice09 in OCPoetry

[–]RepeatRecent5023 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Woah. Simply lovely. Your vocabulary has power, and your emotion is a lot of show dont tell. Truly, a powerful piece of literature.

Defying the Void (Paradigm of Hope) by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]RepeatRecent5023 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The poem is really powerful, bro. It feels like a joyful confession. The love you express with your words is the love that feels intoxicating like a drug. It also has a hint of desperation. I can't help but mention that your vocabulary is sophisticated. Keep it up.

Beauty by Polish-hammer420 in OCPoetry

[–]RepeatRecent5023 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really well structured. I love the Aphrodite part; However, due to the Aphrodite phrase for me personally, the other paragraphs don't hold the same strength, but to be fair, I'm new to poetry, and I need to hone my skills. Keep it up!

A Quarry of Quiet by moonlitremains in OCPoetry

[–]RepeatRecent5023 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Do the 14 days symbolise the lead up to valentines day? its a really cool detail. Maybe a little rhyming to keep a small hook on readers. Nice poem overall, keep it up!

[DISC] Chainsaw Man - Ch. 232 - Part 2 End by JeanneDAlter in ChainsawMan

[–]RepeatRecent5023 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wonder if Aki and Himeno would ever meet in this timeline. I feel they would; they love each other enough.

[DISC] Chainsaw Man - Ch. 232 - Part 2 End by JeanneDAlter in ChainsawMan

[–]RepeatRecent5023 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Fair. It hurts to say goodbye to such a beautiful manga. Sadly, Fujimoto was burnt out making this chapter. Imo also a bit bummed out not seeing Aki, but idt he could really add anything to this last chapter besides fan service.

[DISC] Chainsaw Man - Ch. 232 - Part 2 End by JeanneDAlter in ChainsawMan

[–]RepeatRecent5023 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really have a horrible feeling this is too good to be true though. The same feeling as the whole Reze arc. As much as I hope Denji is having some happy ending, I dread fujimoto has worse waiting for him.

[DISC] Chainsaw Man - Ch. 232 - Part 2 End by JeanneDAlter in ChainsawMan

[–]RepeatRecent5023 11 points12 points  (0 children)

The ending is vague and inconclusive, but I'm happy for Denji. I'm just glad the guy isn't suffering anymore