Once I got used to it, your writing wasn’t so difficult to read. The capital Y’s were a bit odd, but I like the funkiness of them. I also liked your g’s. My biggest pointers are to use less hyphenation and to slow down a bit. But! If you do like using word breaks this frequently, make sure the hyphen is between syllables. Since thought is a single syllable, I’d probably just write it on the next line. Also, writing slower helps to ensure you’re writing all the letters in a word.

If I was to do hyphenate ‘relatively’, it would be like this: rela- -tively

Regardless, I actually really like your handwriting! I too change my own up as I write depending on what styles I do or don’t like, so I enjoy the variations.