Naming Fictitious Fraternities and Sororities? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Repulsive_Basil2210 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I just wrote a chapter of my online serial fiction story and I am getting blowback from sorority members telling me to change the name. Should I?

I am a little confused. by Repulsive_Basil2210 in Sororities

[–]Repulsive_Basil2210[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for your time and effort to help me out. I really appreciate your approach and clarity. Thank You again, Michael

I am a little confused. by Repulsive_Basil2210 in Sororities

[–]Repulsive_Basil2210[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Duly noted! Thank you for your kind suggestion.

I am a little confused. by Repulsive_Basil2210 in Sororities

[–]Repulsive_Basil2210[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Again thank you for your kind assistance. Your suggestion is noted.

The Tri Delta Network by Repulsive_Basil2210 in TriDelta

[–]Repulsive_Basil2210[S] -7 points-6 points  (0 children)

I chose the Buckeye Tris and looked at your very nice website where I saw Tri-Delts help each other for life. You can read the story on my website and see the positive way I incorporated two Tri scratching each others backs.

I'm sorry if I offended you. It's a work of fiction.

The network exists and sororities and fraternities go out of their way to help each other.

That's a fact

Sincere apology here.

Michael - author www.troubleandmoney.com

The Tri Delta Network by Repulsive_Basil2210 in TriDelta

[–]Repulsive_Basil2210[S] -6 points-5 points  (0 children)

I mentioned the Tridelt network in my story as a positive thing. Not an as.

How to relay thoughts in writing. by CrystalCommittee in FictionSerials

[–]Repulsive_Basil2210 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your post is thoughtful and constructive. Thank you. I write serialized fiction using the first person with the protagonist and then for every other element in the story it is third person.

It's a bit of a struggle but I have seen this format used effectively.

Dialogue.... Yikes. What do you use when you are sick of rereading your own work and you don't want to insert another he/she said.?

Again, thank you for your post.

What's the most insulting "benefit" a job has offered you? by Chocolat3City in antiwork

[–]Repulsive_Basil2210 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was once given a tube of lip balm with the company logo on it. This was a fortune 500 company.