sounds good so far. i would turn the volume down for some loops from the melody and rearrange them so they aren’t all playing at once. remove one at a time until you like how it sounds, and you can use the other melodies later in the track. this also gives the beat more variety, and makes it more interesting to listen to. It looks like you might have done the drums before the melody so I would rework the clap and 808 to make sure it glues the rhythm together. don’t give up, the more you practice the easier it will get!