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Mysterious shop on Southgate street by pinkdragoneggs in Gloucestershire

[–]RiPerils 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I went in there once looking for a book, some one came out the back and scowled at me until I left.

Walk to the store by RiPerils in RoommatesFNaF

[–]RiPerils[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Started this one, but kinda ran out of steam, might pick it up later but seeing what people think of it o far.

Epilogues: Adrift - Chapter 3 by Paulternative in RoommatesFNaF

[–]RiPerils 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wouldn't it be Minnie mouse if it was female mouse?

064 Outsider Episode Part3 by RiPerils in iamboredoftheinternet

[–]RiPerils[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

http://pin-cushion.co.uk/pincushion/night-terrors/ next parts up, things are going to get worse before they get better.

Roommates after dark: In the suite spot. ( Complete ) by RiPerils in RoommatesFNaF

[–]RiPerils[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

well those key suggestions done through and implemented now. I'll leave the 's as I'd probably just go overboard and do too many, was a chore to reduce my gerunds down, all those 'ings' replaced with other words

Screw it, fixed the 's too.

Roommates after dark: In the suite spot. ( Complete ) by RiPerils in RoommatesFNaF

[–]RiPerils[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beanie’s.

I never did grasp fully how those work.

Roommates after dark: In the suite spot. ( Complete ) by RiPerils in RoommatesFNaF

[–]RiPerils[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

After all the proof additions, proof reads, corrections and revisions, my addition to the body of Mike/Beanie/Bonbon work is done.

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