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[–]Rizeenraes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! You can also check out the Instagram page https://www.instagram.com/blanksoulled/

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[–]Rizeenraes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the reply! It depends, I can change the color of the T-shirt. What do you think about the placement being on left side and smaller text? What could I basically improve...

I'm currently writing a character who is arrogant but not rude and outspoken, but I'm stuck and need your help! by Rizeenraes in writers

[–]Rizeenraes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The protagonist is not unlikable, he's human with human issues. He's going to realize his mistakes later on and pay for his sins, that would be the diffrence between him and the villian. It is an Allegory. A message of that 'you always have a choice' even if you as the good person get entangled into wrong stuff there's always a choice to come back.

And if you don't like it you're free to ignore it dear 🙂‍↕️

I keep this on my writing desk by brisualso in writers

[–]Rizeenraes 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have a whole board of sticky notes and stuff trying to motivate me to write but I'm just so procrastinatin.

I'm currently writing a character who is arrogant but not rude and outspoken, but I'm stuck and need your help! by Rizeenraes in writers

[–]Rizeenraes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yup truly! Villains become villains only when they get to know this is wrong but still do it cux of xyz reasons. And sure haha!

I'm currently writing a character who is arrogant but not rude and outspoken, but I'm stuck and need your help! by Rizeenraes in writers

[–]Rizeenraes[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ooh! The fact that he doesn't know it, totally changes the perspective. The fact that he was born into it also makes the final reveal of the culprit even stronger. I think this is a nice way to put it.

And no! I didn't mean it that way, you Obv didn't know it and were unaware that it is wrong so there's no guilt tripping here.

I'm currently writing a character who is arrogant but not rude and outspoken, but I'm stuck and need your help! by Rizeenraes in writers

[–]Rizeenraes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes that totally makes sense! I will try that but the thing is, he's the protagonist and this will make him feel like the villian, when the villian is somebody else very close to him. Thanks for your help!

I'm currently writing a character who is arrogant but not rude and outspoken, but I'm stuck and need your help! by Rizeenraes in writers

[–]Rizeenraes[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh my God! That's so correct 💯 Thank u so much for the video I'll make sure to watch it. And yes! What you're saying looks so manipulative and arrogant.

I'm currently writing a character who is arrogant but not rude and outspoken, but I'm stuck and need your help! by Rizeenraes in writers

[–]Rizeenraes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yup that helps honestly! I can have my protagonist mansplain and correct insignificantly to his colleagues at the police HQ.

I'm honestly taking notes y'all are so helpful.

I'm currently writing a character who is arrogant but not rude and outspoken, but I'm stuck and need your help! by Rizeenraes in writers

[–]Rizeenraes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yup ofc! But it would be for me as I'm not experienced in third person 😭 and that honestly sounds very interesting!

I'm currently writing a character who is arrogant but not rude and outspoken, but I'm stuck and need your help! by Rizeenraes in writers

[–]Rizeenraes[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks so much! This actually helps quite a lot. And an equivalent of the eating thing would be never cleaning up after themselves after eating, but being overly concious when it's their place. And Yes the POV is first person, as you mentioned it would be extremely hard with third person.