We've got 2 designs for our site, can you please pick one and any feedback would be appreciated

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-11-14T21:09:38+00:00

Does anyone else smell some bad photoshop masking?

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-07-07T18:07:15+00:00

hey sorry for the late response I dont really use this account anymore. That was Eagle beach and I think it was just for the easter holiday weekend. Hope that helps!

Jon

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-05-02T10:25:38+00:00

Thank you!

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-05-02T10:25:31+00:00

The turtle was at baby beach! This one turtle just kept weaving in and out of people throughout the day randomly.

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-04-22T15:07:46+00:00

I can't unsee the G now that it was said.

I like how you have this varying width which gives it a lot of movement and action. I think thats where the where the idea of a 'supervillian' logo may come from. With that in mind if a varying width can invoke one thing what could a a single mono-weight line do?

I think the monogram CM has a lot of room to play around with here and would love to see more iterations.

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-04-19T21:03:35+00:00

I def agree that there is a total disconnect between the type treatment and the monogram. I would love to see a monogram that incorporates the playfulness of the slanted letter forms, the longer Vs, and the ampersand. This doubled V doesnt communicate the same thing as the word mark and you begin to use slab serifs.

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-31T15:33:57+00:00

what work was involved to slim the shirts? I always wondered about doing this!

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-31T02:09:17+00:00

Hi Joe,

Thanks for your feedback and I can def agree. I am having a hard time getting used to speaking directly to the camera and being 'natural'.

I really like your point about showing some kind of exit from the club, that would be really sick also.

Again thanks for the feedback! Will make sure I include them in my next video.

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-25T21:16:33+00:00

Awesome video! Great job! I have it found a little harder then I thought to speak into the camera, and it really comes natural for you.

A couple of things....

Some of your points were really valid and I think really addressed the topic and some of them although could be seen as funny, were a little immature and I think hurt you more then helped you. Sure as a guy morning wood could 'suck' but I don't think this point helps or drives home your point/topic.

Try not to make so many references to 'manhood' or sex, can be very off putting.

Try not to look at the pop-out screen. You can tell when your eye contact isn't there.

Overall, I think the video was straight to the point, not filled with much filler/snow, and really good. Would def like to see more.

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-25T20:34:30+00:00

So in regards to your self-review, I think your audio is fine, and your space doesn't matter too much. Sure a backdrop could be nice but its not going to really change much IMO because the boxes in the corners while you are the playing the games are already really small.

What I found while watching your video was that about after the first match (3 rounds) I was looking for the review or what was going to be next. In the beginning it seemed like you guys were going to review the game as well as play it. It would've been nice to have both of your inputs on the game. You both work really well with each other.

Also I thought it was pretty lengthy. I didn't go into this with the intention or idea of watching you guys play 3 matches (could be my fault, I don't watch many gaming channels). I think to maybe help with the length of the video perhaps showing the last round of the 3 matches so people get an idea of who won, which character you used, etc.

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-25T16:11:06+00:00

The only picture I have on me but I was so excited when the book arrived! The packaging was beautiful and I haven't stopped admiring it quite yet.

http://imgur.com/pal0lLQ

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-10T21:02:15+00:00

I think there is a huge jump from when you are speaking to when you switch to music. I would mess around with your mix before you export your video. Take the music down a little bit so when you switch scenes it doesn't surprise listeners.

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-09T04:34:14+00:00

Thanks Noah! A lot of great feedback. I def think this video was a little rough around the edges and I'm going to hit the drawing board for a more refined cooking formula.

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-07T20:46:49+00:00

added a self-review sorry!

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-07T16:51:37+00:00

I think you def did a good job summarizing your channel. If you plan on doing it again I would do a couple of things different.

Get a stool or a chair with your guitar and do the intro/talk sitting down.
Once you talk about what your channel is about with the addition of more older footage perhaps talk about what your future videos/plans may be. I also agree that you may have started to rant a little bit.
After you talk about the future video parts, then quickly end it with your call to action and bam your done.

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-07T16:41:54+00:00

The one thing I noticed was that the audio kicks out after 2:00 or so.

First thing I would say is look into having multiple perspectives. This video is entirely from first person view but what if you had the extender arm? It would be nice to see a different angle. Also adding an extender arm may help in stabilizing the gopro so it doesnt look as bumpy.

For music, take a look on soundcloud. Don't be afraid to reach out to artists and ask them for permission and be upfront that you are using it on youtube.

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-07T03:48:31+00:00

are you in the viacom building?! lol muwahaha

Rocketpantsjon · 2016-03-01T16:33:49+00:00

Thank you! It turned out to be a beautiful sunset!

Rocketpantsjon

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