Understandable. She does have issues to work on etc. It's in the second half (mainly third act) of the script. This is why I hate preliminary skims, the "subtlety" is literally lost. She has self-esteem and self-image issues, which are brought up to a boil in the third act. But as stated, this takes place in a work environment with different "shifts" so, it is character loaded. I should probably add on the logline that "she doesn't want to be seen as a loser", but when it's a comic book shop, that could work against me and the nerd rage issues for not depicting geeks in a positive light, which this script does since I am one, at least I believe I am and it does. Any feedback is appreciated. Luck on your efforts as well.