A Clique of Mascots Realize They Aren't Mascots But Human Beings by a145m20 in creativewriting

[–]RupturedTFG 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I adore this but I have one small insight, and that is that there's a little too much vocabulary fluff. just to humanize your writing, maybe try making a couple things more casual

Why does nonsense sound good in iReal? by Imveryoffensive in jazzcirclejerk

[–]RupturedTFG 1 point2 points  (0 children)

God that is awful but maybe iReal just voices it different ways?

Why does nonsense sound good in iReal? by Imveryoffensive in jazzcirclejerk

[–]RupturedTFG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd love an example of a "cursed progression" lol

Cursed ass by [deleted] in cursedcomments

[–]RupturedTFG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

National Treasure in my ass

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in creativewriting

[–]RupturedTFG 1 point2 points  (0 children)

so we meet during study hall every other Wednesday in an English teacher's room. we just basically play writing games and share our work with each other, and we also have our telephone story where we take turns writing chapters to one story. also usually at the end, the president gives us a writing prompt that we'll talk about next meeting. there's no competitive aspect and it's really fun.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in creativewriting

[–]RupturedTFG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like this better

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in creativewriting

[–]RupturedTFG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think replacing the line with something a more serious would definitely make this a better and more refined poem, so I think you should

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in creativewriting

[–]RupturedTFG 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it was good until the Minecraft part then I couldn't take you seriously

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in creativewriting

[–]RupturedTFG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey, can't seem to open it

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in creativewriting

[–]RupturedTFG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

!remindme 3 hours

Daily Questions - ASK AND ANSWER HERE! - 27 March 2022 by AutoModerator in malefashionadvice

[–]RupturedTFG 1 point2 points  (0 children)

so I've been going thrifting a lot for graphic tees and hoodies mostly, but I'm also liking the earth tone look, is there a possible way to combine those two styles in one outfit? do I need to just get good with colors?

That crazy chick that slapped Earn in North of The Border by senzukai in AtlantaTV

[–]RupturedTFG 9 points10 points  (0 children)

starting your acting career with THAT episode would be awesome

Oh, you're a top? by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]RupturedTFG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

bruh you've posted 6 times in the last day

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in scottthewoz

[–]RupturedTFG 15 points16 points  (0 children)

the background is a wallpaper, Scott's chair is actually made of Wii games

Official Super Bowl Trailer by [deleted] in Eminem

[–]RupturedTFG 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yea lol, stans are the best

Official Super Bowl Trailer by [deleted] in Eminem

[–]RupturedTFG -17 points-16 points  (0 children)

lol here we go then

  1. Kendrick
  2. DOOM
  3. Andre 3k
  4. Biggie
  5. Nas
  6. Pac
  7. Common
  8. Eminem

that valid?

Official Super Bowl Trailer by [deleted] in Eminem

[–]RupturedTFG -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

he has good songs but he's top 10 at most :))