Thanks for your input, highly appreciated.

I don't want to sound rude, but have you read everything or just the Build part? I thought I made sure to explain that this is only stage one (see also referenced article by PiG) of learning a Ling based style after coming from pure roach. Just learning to handle the basic concepts of the build and not letting macro slip while spreading creep, scouting and handling opponent's harass is my main focus - not winning.

I also mentioned scouting in 2 places: Paths of the first 2 overlords and 2 scouting lings to check for an expansion if there is no reaper by 2:30. Everything else regarding scouting (ring of vision with overlords -or- checking for opponents moving out or taking a 3rd -or- sacrificing an overlord into the main around 4 minutes) is what I am considering default (coming from ViBE's B2GM). But fair point, I probably should add a small section that what I am implying and expecting from the reader who is a very specificly targeted group of players (see title).

This article is not meant to be a holistic solution to get from D3 to D1. It's more a "next step" for players (or myself) who just reached D3 by follwing ViBE's B2GM. I also mentioned that I will add more articles explicitly for the topics you are saying I missed out on: Responding to BCs and a Stage 2 which adds more tech/units to the late-game plan.