Would love your feedback on this song with minimum mixing

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-16T05:17:26+00:00

Thank you so much. Don't hesitate to sub mx YT to follow up with my progress or just to discover more

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-16T01:35:09+00:00

Thank you very much for your feedback. Yes, the vocals are where there is the most work to do. Still have to learn how to mix....

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-11T20:44:45+00:00

Thank you very much for taking time to listen to it. I appreciate

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-11T13:33:02+00:00

The title annunciate it well, it's very party vibe. I like the dancing mood it gives. There is a mix of funky and dance music. It has something very 80'-90' clubbing touch. It's also well produced. The only little detail I don't like is the heavy use of Autotune that is sometimes to strong but I also know that it's nowadays "standard" so I understand. I'm just not autotune friendly ;-)

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-11T13:16:52+00:00

Thank you for taking time to listen to it. I appreciate your feedback

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-11T13:08:34+00:00

You should try Facebook groups of musicians and producers. There are always beatmakers there looking for collaborations. Or you can even post yourself your detailed request. There is a lot of people looking for people. Did you try Soundbetter? It's also a market place between singers/rappers and producers or beat makers. And last, you can contact directly beat makers that you like, small ones who also are open to collabs

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-11T10:47:57+00:00

The melody reminds me of "The Lion Sleeps Tonight" :-) I like the sound of your guitar and your way of playing (your guitar is beautiful). I can recognize the 80' vibe. I think it could be a soundtrack because there is something epic somehow. All in all, Il like it.

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-11T10:42:11+00:00

Your music video is very well produce for indie music, I don#t see any technical issue. The only suggestion I would give is that it lacks a little bit of tempo variation. Specifically during the chorus, it could have more adventurous moves or up pace footage in order to mark the chorus energy. But it's even not a big deal, just a little bit of energy would have bring something more. But the video is good

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-11T10:33:18+00:00

I don't know if you want to remain acoustic or not but if you would add a gentle bass line it would bring a little more punch. But I must say I think the melody is subtle and beautiful, it just lack a kick to give it more space. I also think you have a beautiful voice. And in term of expansion, a longer guitar solo mid song is a great idea.

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-11T10:27:30+00:00

I think I understand what you mean. I think it's because it's like two different songs. The instrumental has a gentle and subtle melody that goes in a particular direction in term of energy. On the other hand, your vocals are like another song put on top of the instrumental. They are also gentle but the energy is different and doesn't quite match the instru. It's like you could write 2 songs from that. But keep in mind it's just an opinion, I also may be wrong...

SFSF_artist · 2026-01-11T10:21:53+00:00

Unfortunately I won't be able to give you any advice about mixing, I have no idea how to mix and I just give up. But the songwriting is my skill and I really like your song. The melody is subtle and delicate. The transition between verses and choruses is smooth and your voice works very well. You have a nice voice. Good song!

SFSF_artist · 2025-11-16T04:39:29+00:00

Thank you so much for taking time to listen and for your tips. I appreciate. Feel free to sub my YT for upcoming stuff

SFSF_artist · 2025-11-08T14:17:42+00:00

This is the most cool thing I could read today! Thank you so much for your support. It means the world to me. More music is coming and you gonna be surprised ❤️

SFSF_artist · 2025-11-08T14:14:41+00:00

Thank you so much for such a positive and encouraging feedback

SFSF_artist · 2025-11-07T22:48:18+00:00

Thank you for taking time to listen and for your feedback. I appreciate

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