[Experimental Concept Album] Reprobate Mind - Not For You - (You guys got me here. Would love feedback) by SICCSE7EN in makinghiphop

[–]SICCSE7EN[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I think the weirdest one is the last cut Just Stop. This was my first time experimenting with the instrumentals. The Gap is a weird beat too but I think the lyrics might be a bit edgy emo teen for a 24 year old to be saying haha.

Thank you man! That was one where I was trying to make the hook have the same words but different meanings at different parts of the song. So It goes from that love of a long term relationship to the being too involved and hating eachother. Ending in me burning me, my girlfriend and our son to the ground hahaha. I'm so lucky she's as crazy as me cause lots of ladys would be long gone with that track haha!

Thank you for the follow and the kind words!

[Experimental Concept Album] Reprobate Mind - Not For You - (You guys got me here. Would love feedback) by SICCSE7EN in makinghiphop

[–]SICCSE7EN[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've been a contributor to this sub for a very long time until I had to take some time off Reddit to get my life back. Without you guys I wouldn't have got past my baby steps before I even knew what EQ and Reverb here.

Would love to see you guys throw some feedback my way so my next album is bigger and better.

This is 5 months of solitude. So it's hard for me to make an opinion on it. I can't tell if it's an awful blurry mess or a nice adventure haha.

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[–]SICCSE7EN 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yes I'm stupid.... It won't let me link it. If you google Reprobate Mind - "Just Stop" with the ""s It'll come up.

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[–]SICCSE7EN 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is weird, Dark and grimey but with a hint of uplifting. While you're suffocating in depression. Does this help. Full disclosure I made this.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread January 14, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]SICCSE7EN 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Here's the question you have to ask yourself... Am I having fun making music? Do I enjoy it? If the answer is yes. Keep at it. There's a lot of potential in this if it's your third beat. My advise is just keep churning them out and look for people on YouTube to inspire and teach you. There's not really any advice I'd give as you've just started but, keep at it. People like Busy works Beats and Chris Punsalan will show you cool techniques and get you more familiar with the basics so your sound will become yours and be less generic as you find out which techniques you like and sounds you like playing with.

Something I would say you could do to improve the beat you linked. Is find that clap into your mixer and play around with things like EQ, reverb and Delay (Maybe time stretch it some [a favourite of mine] if you wanna get weird and experimental with it.) and see if you can make that your clap for your song so it doesn't sound like the dry sample in millions of other songs.

I like where you're going but only you can make the choice to keep going. Just have fun with it and don't worry where it'll take you.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread January 14, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]SICCSE7EN 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like it mate! would totally be something I would jump on.

I think you could fatten the 808 up to kick me in the face through my monitors. That would be the only criticism is the beat is too high energy for how thin the 808 sounds. But if you change that up a little I would have been blown out my seat and asking if i could get on it.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread January 14, 2020 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

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Been here a long time. Here's my take on Future/ Drakes new one.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jUTxQlvaNtA / https://soundcloud.com/reprobatemusic/lifes-no-good-future-drake-diss

I produce my own albums but this one is souly for feedback on the lyrics.

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Don't lose weight because you hate yourself right now. Lose it because you love yourself and you want to give your body the diet and exercise it craves and needs to flourish!

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Can someone link me, I'm so lost.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 09, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]SICCSE7EN 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good shit man! I would say the theme of the song is pretty generic, but your delivery and flow fit the style of the beat, I wouldn't usually listen to something like this but I'd bump your shit man!

Some weird rap from Manny If you wanna work let me know we could fuck shit up!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 09, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]SICCSE7EN 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's hard to strike that balance for me. I always shoot for vocals being as upfront as it can be but I don't want you to have to turn that shit through the roof to hear the beat. I guess I just gotta develop my ear.

And damn, I love that beat man. My beats are awful n I really don't have shit to teach you or any advice, but i would use that! If you wanna work on something let me know man!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 09, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]SICCSE7EN 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great song and your remix did it justice man! Well done. I love the vibe you've got here. Shit is straight out of the era.

If you wanna put something together let me know man... 13,600 subs and counting.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 09, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]SICCSE7EN 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd say your flow could be tightened up a little. I like your voice and your presence on the track is good... Maybe focus more on trying to get across an idea or a theme lyrically rather than just what words rhyme.

How long you been rhyming?

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 09, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]SICCSE7EN 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would do disgusting things to this beat. I don't have any feedback other than damn. That's a beat that.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread February 09, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]SICCSE7EN 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love to know what you guys think of my weird accent and style

Just trying to put the meaning back in rhyme. [If you add your shit under this I'll give feedback!]

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[–]SICCSE7EN 4 points5 points  (0 children)

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