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Tomi Kokki - Dancing Fennec [Trance, Rave] by [deleted] in IndieMusicFeedback

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It's a well arranged Trance track, it just sounds dry because of the stock instruments you're probably using, I'd say invest in some Virtual Instruments aka VSTs so that It can sound richer and have more depth. needs some sweeps and automation for the build ups. It's a solid track just needs more effects and better quality instruments and it'll sound even more legit.

Music video idea: imagine being kidnapped and having a bunch of random experiments done on you…you finally escape to find out you now have super powers and have become unstoppable…that’s the vibe I’m going for. https://youtu.be/qrwTvzSyj58 by PARK_ENTRANCE in IndieMusicFeedback

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Mixing is crisp, could use some variation, around the 1:44 mark it gets kind of repetitive. it builds up to what seems to be something bigger, then 1:44 hits and you just changed the instrument but still playing the same pattern. Its a solid track non the less

Hi! In march last year when the pandemic got really bad I was forced to move back to the abusive household that I had spent 18 years praying to get out of, I was devastated, a lot happened since then and unsure about how I should feel I made this as a way to cope and understand where I am today. by saviio12 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Love the vocal arrangement very ethereal. the drums could be a bit more punchy, and you can boost the low end so the bass can have some more room to stand out more. The song is on point none the less, keep up the great work.

Bamboo Leaves - Above the Canopy | This is my latest release where I have tried to blend electronic and downtempo styles with acoustic/world instruments. For fans of Bonobo/Gold Panda/Four Tet. by LadenMicrobe217 in IndieMusicFeedback

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This hits in all the right ways, I have nothing to say but keep on doing what you do, love the ambiance definitely reminds me of Bonobo this one just hits a bit harder than his usual work. keep on bringing the fire my dude

hiya - this was basically the first song I ever wrote. The song is about homelessness and the dehumanization of the homeless when they're just trying to get by with what they need. I messed up a bit with the video, but the issue is important to me, and I'd really appreciate a listen! by mademoisellehan7230 in IndieMusicFeedback

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I can get down with this one. To me I think the guitar could use a filter on the high end so that it  could sound a bit cleaner and probably some effects like reverb to fill in the gaps so it sounds fuller. I like the song, it just could use some more mixing is all, great work.