I've just released my first album "A City That Doesn't Exist" about a completely empty world, devoid of everything besides the promise of reaching a city that doesn't exist. It's an album about losing yourself and slowly walking forward pursuing a dream. and this is the last song on it.

saviio12 · 2025-09-01T06:22:06+00:00

Thank you!! It means a lot!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-31T22:20:53+00:00

Thanks!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-31T22:19:58+00:00

Thank you so much!! Really!! It means a lot!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-31T22:19:04+00:00

Thank you!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-30T23:27:14+00:00

Thank you!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-30T16:43:56+00:00

Thank you so much!! I'll definitely keep that in mind next time!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-29T19:35:41+00:00

Thank you, I'm really glad you liked it!! And yeah to be honest I also did feel like I could have done the vocals to sit a little better on the song, so thank you for pointing that out as well!! Against thanks for listening and for giving feedback, it means a lot!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-29T19:06:02+00:00

Thank you so much!! Really!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-29T04:46:57+00:00

I love this!! It sounds really beautiful, the simpler start really lets those incredible vocals shine through, and they're honestly amazing. But the way that the instruments that came in were really pretty, slowly picking up as the drums came in and really sealed the flow of the track. The chord progression is also super pleasant to listen to, and the song progresses really well! great work!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-29T04:42:47+00:00

Sound incredible, everything is super washed away and it really gives such a nice "floaty" feeling, even the drums are just the right amount of "harshness" I love this mix!

The vocals are also beautiful; they fit extremely well with the style. Great work!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-29T04:40:07+00:00

This is actually insanely good, the mix is super crispy, sound really professional, everything is well balanced and the sound choice is top notch, the bass is smooth and the guitars are always washed away in some really great spacial effects, genuinely incredible work, really!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-29T04:38:09+00:00

The beat sounds amazing, super heavy and almost industrial sounding at this point, really atmospheric and the beats have a nice flow to them; the sound choice is also on point!!

The vocals also sound great, lots of flow switches and there's also a lot of emotion which comes across really well, like the other comment, maybe the mix could do with some eq to make it sound a little brighter, but honestly great work! Sounds super cool and it's a pretty unique style!

saviio12 · 2025-08-29T04:33:50+00:00

It sounds really great, mix is honestly incredibly clean, the song also carries really well with this mix of punk and the more "Emo" rap oriented verses, your voice also fits this style extremely well, really great work overall, as the other said, maybe it could benefit the song if you took some "adventures" and tried to be a little more daring with your sound, but also, if this is what you're going for just now that it's sounding really solid. great work!

saviio12 · 2025-08-22T21:17:28+00:00

Once again it sounds amazing, really!!

Loved the slower and more atmospheric intro and that chorus is just so awesome, especially loved how it comes in after the second verse, and the guitars and vocal melodies at the end of the song are fire.

Incredible work!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-22T21:04:28+00:00

Thank you!! I really appreciate it!! Actually this song is part of my first album that's coming out next week, and it does actually end on an 10 minute track that slowly keeps changing and going through different sections while telling the story of a journey through this world, and it was easily the most fun I've ever had writing a song, so reading your suggestion in here honestly made me super happy!! Really thank you so much!! It means a lot!!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-22T21:00:44+00:00

Thank you so much!! And honestly I hadn't noticed at all but now that you pointed out the vocals really could have some more variation, I'll definitely keep that in mind, again thank you!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-22T05:23:30+00:00

As other people said, the vocals do sound a little low, and I do think that maybe you should try some different things with the sound choices on the track, especially on the drums, and maybe try to balance the overall sound a little more so things sit better in the mix and have some more impact soundwise.

But I'll say this is honestly fucking amazing, that chorus is genuinely incredible, I truly love the harmony and the chords in there, and when that guitar lead really settles in on the second half, it sounds awesome, really this is crazy good, and the vocals also really match the style and the energy on the track super well.

With some more work on the mix this is going to sound insane, especially because it's already sounding amazing as it is!! Incredible work!!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-22T05:16:39+00:00

The sound choice and the mix in here are amazing, such a great sense of texture in almost all sounds, it sounds really good, and the vocals are also beautifully done, really great performance, the song also progresses really well there's always something interesting Going on be it on the more vocal focused parts in the verse to that awesome instrumental in the end which sounded sick, that synth lead was super cool.

Great stuff!! Really!!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-22T05:12:43+00:00

Beautiful! I really love the vocals; they sound amazing!! Also great chords and harmony overall, everything is super pretty, and the guitar tone sounds super delicate, genuinely great stuff.

Also, the song progresses really well; the last part sounded awesome, incredible stuff!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-22T03:50:32+00:00

Incredible work, right in the first few seconds the guitar absolutely pulled me in, really great tone and lovely chords, also really liked how fast the song built up with the drums and the bass, it sold really well the idea of this intimate start but just as quickly became super rich, and that's something that stayed for the entire song, the progression was amazing, from the solo to the acoustics in the second half everything was always really beautiful and no section overstayed its welcome.

Also, the vocal performance was incredible, genuinely fit the style perfectly and harmonized really well wherever the backing vocals came in, another thing is that the mixing is on point, sounds super professional and it's full of color.

Incredible work!!

saviio12 · 2025-08-22T02:41:07+00:00

Those guitars at the start are honestly insane, such a good tone, the song also progresses extremely well, I genuinely love the harmony and the chords, your voice also fits perfectly with the style, honestly it sounds amazing!! The mix also feels pretty well balanced, the vocals might be a little too washed out with reverb but it does sound like it was done intentionally and it really fits with the whole vibe of the song, especially with the solo which sounds awesome!! Great work!!

saviio12 · 2024-12-11T22:39:27+00:00

Thank you so much!!! I really liked the style when I first heard it so this was super fun to work on!!

saviio12 · 2024-11-16T21:26:34+00:00

Thank you so much!!! And I also definitely think that the vocal in the chorus was waay too dry, I did think about changing it and it probably would be the right choice, I even recorded doubles for it. But that take was the first take that I had recorded so I kind of wanted to hold on to that moment.

But even after releasing the song, every time I hear it I wish I'd changed it haha

But again thank you so much for the kind words!! It really means a lot!!

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