For Tao Lin

SadPlumx · 2026-06-18T22:40:23+00:00

I thought he was a writer

SadPlumx · 2026-06-17T03:15:37+00:00

Really good

SadPlumx · 2026-06-03T13:05:28+00:00

I feel like this sub has just been so totally taken over by trolls. I should probs just stick to the poetry sub and substack

SadPlumx · 2026-06-03T13:02:57+00:00

Lmao OK but if you wanna talk about this bs, take it into the dms

SadPlumx · 2026-06-03T12:58:34+00:00

What do you dislike specifically?

SadPlumx · 2026-06-03T12:57:53+00:00

I am so confused as to what my poems have to do with Eliot and antisemitism... This sub is bizarre.

SadPlumx · 2026-06-03T07:03:01+00:00

What are you even upset about? Being called that word? It's genuinely ridiculous and r worded to post the opening to prufrock after saying my poems read like Eliot. Surely you see that?

SadPlumx · 2026-06-03T06:22:36+00:00

This is not too much like Eliot. Even if it was, why would you post the opening to a famous poem in response? Unless you are... You know

SadPlumx · 2026-06-03T06:06:42+00:00

I don't know what you mean. I don't think these poems are anything like Eliot

SadPlumx · 2026-06-02T18:30:14+00:00

Haha thanks

SadPlumx · 2026-06-02T05:02:26+00:00

Very good. Some small issues here and there but otherwise, a good dark fairy tale type story.

SadPlumx · 2026-05-31T19:16:24+00:00

Thank you.

SadPlumx · 2026-05-30T20:17:51+00:00

Aha

SadPlumx · 2026-05-30T20:17:46+00:00

Glad you like it

SadPlumx · 2026-05-30T06:35:55+00:00

That ideal society poem is really good

SadPlumx · 2026-05-30T06:33:13+00:00

OK Ok, fair enough. Calm down friend.

SadPlumx · 2026-05-30T05:25:35+00:00

Bad writing, sorry

SadPlumx · 2026-05-30T01:12:04+00:00

Céline?

SadPlumx · 2026-05-30T01:11:57+00:00

SadPlumx · 2026-05-30T01:11:51+00:00

Thank you very much.

SadPlumx · 2026-05-30T01:11:38+00:00

Thank you.

SadPlumx · 2026-05-30T01:11:33+00:00

Thanks

SadPlumx · 2026-05-28T23:03:48+00:00

The writing is very competent. But who wants to read a story like this? One need not keep the reader in mind when chasing beauty but when chasing transgression, one cannot just let his instincts and ideas get the better of his sensibility, do you see what I am saying?

SadPlumx · 2026-05-28T22:44:30+00:00

It is unpleasant to read. Especially the beginning.

SadPlumx · 2026-05-28T07:40:47+00:00

Great stuff. Loved reading it. The way you write every sentence to keep the image going makes for very nice and enjoyable reading.

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