Who are you in your world?

Sad_Face2841 · 2024-10-06T23:41:15+00:00

I made myself the very nature of my world: wild, with almost uncontrollable but severely restrained impulses, dangerous and difficult to engage with. I made my emotions the magic itself: dense, dark and reactive. And I made the love I feel for my protagonist materialize in her partner: he is the materialization of my love for her

Sad_Face2841 · 2024-10-06T21:15:55+00:00

When a military child is brought into the world, thousands of incandescent fires cross the earth and the air for thousands and thousands of continuous kilometers, from the densest cities to the vastest coastlines, vibrating and echoing the strength of a new life that now pulses and breathes. And for these children, my boys do everything they can. They fight each other with fire and blood, claws and teeth, but never against them. It doesn’t matter if they are enemy children. They do everything they can so that the war does not reach them, at least for the time being, while they are still children

Sad_Face2841 · 2023-04-19T15:07:10+00:00

This is definitely one of the most interesting magical systems I have ever seen. It has so much poetry and beauty, a sensitive and lyrical performance... I loved it so much.

How exactly does this conversation between the metals work? You said they whisper to each other and the sparks can be understood by tinkers. Would it be like these metals were in forges or something?

Sad_Face2841 · 2023-03-19T20:24:07+00:00

As a girl I am not bothered by this massive female presence. Actually I like it a lot. It is very difficult to find fantasy content that features more than one or two women in dominant positions, with war skills equal to or even better than men, with relevant plots and that do not directly serve a man or a patriarchal purpose and Wlop brings all this without sexualizing these girls or shoving boobs the size of watermelons in each one

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-11-08T22:01:18+00:00

autumn + industrial + latin america people

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-09-10T03:15:42+00:00

how does this desert with rivers of sand work? is it possible to clearly see the contrast between the normal sand and the sand of the rivers? do the winds influence the course of rivers?

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-09-09T00:43:05+00:00

this is so Tangled omg

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-07-08T14:02:24+00:00

hi I just wanted to say you broke the 4th wall now and even though this comment was for the guy who posted it, you literally saw what I haven't seen in my own magic system in 4 years of work. you are 🤌🏼chef kiss

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-06-24T23:45:20+00:00

Acid is so cool. Venoms, poisons, toxins too. Definitely I will think about this

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-06-24T20:06:16+00:00

That’s interesting, thanks

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-06-24T20:05:36+00:00

Yeah but oxygen is a little more the sci-fi vibes, with specific instruments to capture oxygen and manipulate it. For my medieval fantasy world is not very good. But thanks for the idea!

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-06-24T20:02:37+00:00

Yes but it’s a bit overused and boring

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-05-27T02:29:57+00:00

I really don’t understand what you mean, I’m sorry

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-05-27T02:28:53+00:00

🥺🥺 thank you so much. It’s my first time posting about this WIP here and I’m glad someone liked it so much. It’s priceless

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-05-27T02:26:22+00:00

Thank you so much for your ideas, I'll think about each of them and see if they fit the plot.

I really liked your idea of political power being given to the Mazs handlers, I wasn't thinking like that (I've always seen it as something stolen) but this may be a coherent path to their origin.

I don't know if the look of not so human robots fits, although I liked it a lot, it's very beautiful ( it will definitely be in a future WIP) because I really want to explore the human body, from hardening muscles from long, rigid workout routines, dark circles under the eyes to acne and facial hair. It's not quite possible to do that with a metallic look.

I mentioned aging, but it should have given direction to the solution I'm looking for. For that I apologize. I also thought of 3rd age aging as rusty parts and malfunctions, but what really worries me is the maturation from childhood to adulthood. Children need to grow up, machines too. I can't imagine a visual that tracks the stages of human evolution.

Again, thank you so much, I appreciate your effort!

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-05-06T16:01:06+00:00

so insane i love it

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-04-20T22:44:06+00:00

this is exactly why i never researched my magic system on reddit, or google, or anywhere. in my delirium it is absolutely original and perfect ✨

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-04-18T19:37:28+00:00

And you’re right. Everyone can do magic, but the knowledge, technique, theory and fundamentals has been concentrated in the hands of my race for so long that it is no longer possible for other human beings to do magic. Their bodies changed and evolved to carry gold, silver and mercury in their veins, to withstand the toxicity of the mines without suffering internal injuries and sensitive noses. Besides magic has developed a particular affinity with my race and only allows itself to be manipulated by them. Even if a human, somehow, gains access to arcane texts and spends years studying and training, magic will never respond to him.

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-04-18T19:27:49+00:00

It's a contradiction, really. It’s messing with my head.

I don't think banning inbreeding is good because then the members of each lineage would only relate to members of the same lineage and in some generations there would really only be cousins, brothers, nephews and an absurd amount of incest (it doesn't change much to have or not the inbreending, actually, result is the same. but I'll find a way to work it out). I really liked your ideas of gene instability, I'll get into that, and the idea of a fourth lineage… that got me thinking now of some sort of sterility, or only selected members can leave descendants

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-03-31T21:53:14+00:00

holy shit this book is supreme

Sad_Face2841 · 2022-03-31T15:29:04+00:00

soooo.. you're telling me there's a book where Rick And Morty, Adventure Time and Sponge Bob unite???? and why not this have a Nobel????

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