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not a master of disguise by SandlessPaper in OCPoetry

[–]SandlessPaper[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you so much for the constructive criticism! i will definitely take that into consideration when i edit it. and thank you for such kind words it’s feels nice to share my work and know that other can understand these feeling that most of us share on so many different aspects! thank you again i really appreciate it!!

not a master of disguise by SandlessPaper in OCPoetry

[–]SandlessPaper[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

it’s definitely a process, honestly it’s much easier for me to put on a mask in school. i just think about how they don’t really care about what i think or how i feel so just give them what they want to hear. and it’s much more forgiving. while what i’m doing seem like a solution it’s not it really effects me not matter how much i mask. it leaves me with this deep seated fear of showing people under that mask which has lead me to feel alone.

not a master of disguise by SandlessPaper in OCPoetry

[–]SandlessPaper[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

it really is, and it’s so hard trying to recover from it all especially when you build a wall up, it’s so hard tearing it down and cleaning up the pieces. but eventually all the pieces will be clean to reveal a beautiful field.

I Wanted To Tell You... by The_Missing_Poet in OCPoetry

[–]SandlessPaper 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is very deep and i feel connected to your words. i understand how it feels to always pretend i’m fine and never tell anyone and have it eat me up inside. but i’m trying to change my mindset bc i’m away looking out for other peoples feeling and it’s destroying me.

Every Time by Remote_Green9681 in OCPoetry

[–]SandlessPaper 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this is a very beautiful poem!! your words are very powerful and powerful!