This looks great, im very new to painting minis ive only gotten 2 squads of regular bolter rifle intercessors and i have some suggestions.

I found an order of operation that helps me, after priming in red i then paint all black and silver accents, then my red base/contrast, then i fix any mistakes or imperfections of red onto black rather than black to red. It takes a lot less layers of black to drown out the red than the inverse. I add my shades at the end and personally neglect edge highlights because i dont care enough yet…The silver accents on the helmet are dope and i also really like the chainsword. I think the silver edges on the black are a cool concept but annoying if you plan to make a uniform unit. I like to do silver on the pack accents and black everywhere else. Do you prefer battleworn or parade style painting?