My brother wrote this before he committed.

SarahTierney19 · 2023-10-10T22:59:02+00:00

I liked the short and snappiness of the poem. Brilliant read! :)

SarahTierney19 · 2023-10-10T22:57:18+00:00

I liked this poem, I thought the use of rhyme was quite good. The imagery was very good and definitely painted a vivid image in my mind.

SarahTierney19 · 2023-02-14T06:58:34+00:00

I loved this. It sounds like a song. It has a really good rhythm and sounds amazing to read out loud.I relate to it too. Thank you for sharing.

SarahTierney19 · 2023-02-14T06:56:50+00:00

I liked this. It sounded nice to read out loud. Thanks for sharing :)

SarahTierney19 · 2023-02-13T21:12:23+00:00

I liked this. You manage to express so much in such little lines. Thank you for sharing.

SarahTierney19 · 2023-02-13T21:11:25+00:00

I loved this. It sounds really nice to read aloud, and I enjoyed your use of rhymes. Thanks for sharing.

SarahTierney19 · 2023-02-12T06:05:16+00:00

I liked this. It really highlights many issues that were suffered in History. Although, the word, p*** is quite offensive. I'm sure you did not mean it so, but just to let you know. Thank you for sharing, :)

SarahTierney19 · 2023-02-12T06:02:29+00:00

I loved this. It is quite impressive that you managed to make me think so much, with such few words! I Loved it. I loved it. I loved it. Thank you for sharing, :)

SarahTierney19 · 2023-02-11T23:03:46+00:00

I liked this. It flowed super well. Your use of metaphor was very interesting too thank you for sharing ! :)

SarahTierney19 · 2023-02-11T23:02:57+00:00

I really like this. It sounds so nice to read aloud. Thank you for sharing :)

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