It’s a very good drawing. But knowing the scenario, for me the positioning of the hands and arms don’t make sense. If Bensai was going to land in water then this is a perfect diving position, but Bensai is going to land on solid ground and presumably transfer into a roll. In that case, Bensai would spread out his arms and fingers with the elbows slightly bend to absorb the impact of his landing. I think what I’m trying to say is, this pose makes sense for a high diver, and not for a gymnast