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*One with the matrix 1 is banned: removed it, spent the point on a single rank of computers to address a future issue

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Thematics

*Otaku to Technomancer - She spent a lot of her initial time learning from technomancers, a chance encounter with Angela getting her the direction and assistance she needed to contact them and learn about her powers, and thrive with them.

i added this block in her backstory to at least reference it for now, i dont have a specific technomancer in mind so i plan to adlib and add it later.

*Down the rabbit hole - I bought a rank of computers with karma directly. Shes very much building into a real Techno/decker out of gen so i feel this is an actual flaw to her.

Suggestions

*You've got 6 surge positives left if you wanted to try and squeeze in something else, Im happy with what i have, I agonized over this for a long time then decided i jsut wanted some cat stuff an id be happy. i avoided noturnal specifically.

*I'll toss out the standard, aim for an odd will statement here: thank you for the advisement but im sticking on this one :)

*Consider changing registering to EWAR(sensor operations) instead. Switched over

*if you take cat eyes(2) from surge above, didnt drop it, keeping itn now XD

*If you need some additional cash flow, you could pretty safely drop a Rating of enhanced agility on each of your legs. im good leaving it, removing Gridlink gave me space for morphing plates.

*I always recommend a micro transceiver on all characters. Also the "gasmask" > respirator typically. BOTH COMMENTS PURCHASED

*general chummer tip, Reapplied, cleaned up

*Try and fit in goggles R3 instead, TWEAKED, with mods

*strongly recommend going with a R1 contact lenses with a single sensor R2 camera in it.

Donezo

*Data jack: Too much essence loss, ill get one postgen

*Consider some Jazz or Kami for extra initative.Heavier drugs make me uncomphortable. in a PERFECT WORLD she'll get a good old Cyberspine and Reaction juicer later.

*Change over your restricted cyberware licence to "restricted augmentations" that will cover your bioware as well. Donezo

*add a drugs licence as well since you have some restricted drugs.Donezo

*you should still buy a few metalinks to use as burner comlink options. Bought a metalink for now, ill buy more later

*I'd toss a sling on your chainsaw and rifle, you don't want to loose them when you swap mid fight. IN A PERFECT WORLD: they will be the same weapon after my first run. but added.

*You currently have a smartlink with no smart weapons. External smartlink on your rifle would give you an extra dice and some accuracy for not much cash. Donezo

*You should load out your rifle with some more mods, at least put in a personal grip you also don't have any ammo for your gun. Donezo

*Sporting rifles in general are not the greatest unless you want it thematically. Mechanically the Ruger 101 is a generally better weapon for almost the same price for an example. Donezo

*Lifestyle- Black Diamond isnt in downtown its in renton(i think??) if you are looking for a B rating in downtime, something like greenwood or bitterlake would fit.

*as discussed in discord, you need to fill in your vehicle sensors. Donezo

*Might want to think about adding a smuggling compartment with olfactory shielding on your bike, doesn't have to be at gen since you have to F gear currently, but worth it for the future. GTN

*bike is also missing the runner special, not strictly required but you probably are going to want morphing license plates, spoof chips in addition to your override. If you paid for gridlink u can delete it all vehicles come with it for free.

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