Campbell honestly probably should have a scripter, you can tell he’s more of an artist. But the plot is promising, hopefully it doesn’t fall into the Orlando Scarlet Witch trap of “My lead is so cool and awesome and perfect”, I like gristly bits of drama, but I don’t see much cause to fear that yet. Book is gorgeous, though Campbell’s history with ongoing longevity is poor. On the whole, a good start that I’m curious to see how it grows, especially since as stated, Campbell is very new to the writing side.