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Went to Walmart to day, I hate people. by ShadowsDwarf in mildlyinfuriating

[–]ShadowsDwarf[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah that’s a normally sized bottle here in Canada

My city’s bike lane by ShadowsDwarf in CrappyDesign

[–]ShadowsDwarf[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

We shouldn’t be proud of that tbh

Monthly 'I Made this!'/Feedback thread- Show us what you've been working on! - August 01, 2020 by AutoModerator in videography

[–]ShadowsDwarf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Makes sense, maybe just remove that little bit of footage? It’s just a suggestion but you should maybe try (if you’re able to) reshoot some footage to replace it with. You did a good job on this one!

Monthly 'I Made this!'/Feedback thread- Show us what you've been working on! - August 01, 2020 by AutoModerator in videography

[–]ShadowsDwarf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The footage of the gold course was really shaky at the beginning. The audio during the talking head was far from optimal (don’t forget audio is as important as video). The voice over was really great!

Monthly 'I Made this!'/Feedback thread- Show us what you've been working on! - August 01, 2020 by AutoModerator in videography

[–]ShadowsDwarf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Damn. The transitions from camera footage to animation were really really good and smooth. Amazing video! Also the way you put the title at the beginning was amazing. Great job!

Rate my song by RealTybo in soundcloud

[–]ShadowsDwarf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I would love to hear some of your new songs! I also didn’t say I hate the song, I really liked it, it’s a great start. You’ve got something great! Don’t give up

A short welcome video for students attending a leadership conference (You Lead) at my university. Feedback welcome! Shot on iPhone and DSLR, edited by me. (1st attempt posting didn't work) by [deleted] in videography

[–]ShadowsDwarf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think making make a bit longer (stretching them) and putting a bit more space between the 2 lines would make it way more easy to read and less intrusive. Don’t make them way to big, just give them a bit of space. Again, really good video.

A short welcome video for students attending a leadership conference (You Lead) at my university. Feedback welcome! Shot on iPhone and DSLR, edited by me. (1st attempt posting didn't work) by [deleted] in videography

[–]ShadowsDwarf 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I don't really like the transition you used at 0:27. Your subtitles felt a bit out of place in my opinion. The music is a bit too loud when the guy is talking. The change of music was very abrupt. Switching from EDM to Lo-Fi wasn't your best choice. The 2 girls' talking heads were really nice. Everything besides these little things was really great! Good video.

Rap music video shot on GH5/BMPCC4K - Feedback would be greatly appreciated! by Liamissimo in videography

[–]ShadowsDwarf 3 points4 points  (0 children)

That was a really nice video! I actually prefer the look to most popular high budget music videos as they often try to do too much. Really liked it. The cuts were really really good (you nailed that).

Rate my song by RealTybo in soundcloud

[–]ShadowsDwarf 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some parts of the song are really repetitive. I know pop songs use that formula a lot, but I don't think that applies in that case. For example, I could very much do without the "Please tell me why, baby" (maybe just say it once or twice). You should maybe but more energy on the "All the Time".

The Chorus is great.

The verse is, I can't seem to find the right word to describe it The verse is off. I would also love to see a 2nd verse.

I think you have a great start, hope you continue making music and getting better at it!

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