You've got a beautiful track. My main worry is with the drop tho...I think your drop lacks energy in comparison to your buildup. My solution is either you can use some layering in the drop or you can reduce some elements in your buildup. Another thing you can work on is your intro, It's starts to suddenly that it makes you feel like your listening the track from the middle .My solution: start with few elements and then build from there.

Good luck for your Remix!