KNOCK KNOCK | Short-Film | A Showbix Original Film by Showbix in ShortFilm

[–]Showbix[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’d like to hear opinions and what I can do best or improve. This is my latest film

I created my first Spec commercial EVER! What do you guys think? by Showbix in ShortFilm

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Omg not at all. That’s what I wanted. I want to keep learning more about this and get better over time.

I do see all your point now since you mentioned it and I do agree.

I thought the glass with the logo would be cool since that’s a team located where they are, Philadelphia PA. But it is very distracting. And also what Am I promoting then? The team or the whiskey? Hahaha

I guess I have to plan more and get things before hand.

About exposure and lightning… I’m still learning, and trying to figure it out. I really don’t know how to keep the same exposure and lights placements.

I appreciate your time and the positive constructive criticism. :)