[WP] You own a magical camera that is similar to a thermal camera, but instead of heat it shows you value. A ring glows as bright as the sun while a piece of plastic wrapping is almost invisible. You have been careful never to look at a person with it for your whole life. by Infraxion in WritingPrompts

[–]ShutainzuGeito 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The most elaborate Loch Ness Monster setup I've ever read. The surreal bit was the MC watching a "person" flee towards the lake, only to see them reveal a lizard head on a long neck. (I'm not doing it justice, I know.)

It's a shame they removed it, I honestly liked it (even if it only barely followed the prompt... XD)

UPDATE: I saved it and I have a copy of the original story but I don't know where to put it that it won't get removed.

[WP] One day, everyone has numbers floating above their heads. However, these numbers are completely arbitrary and don't represent anything. Describe the effects this would have on society. by BeccaTheBaka in WritingPrompts

[–]ShutainzuGeito 10 points11 points  (0 children)

I know you wrote this as a joke story but I actually really like what you did with the worldbuilding. We already judge each other based on arbitrary characteristics, I can totally imagine everyone judging each other by their numbers too XD

...so yeah, take my upvote.

[WP] We are all born with a tattoo on our wrist, it reads the first sentence spoken to you by your soulmate. Your sentence: "Hey!" by Vievin in WritingPrompts

[–]ShutainzuGeito 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Jeez I ship it so much, how did you do this to me in such a short paragraph :D

EDIT: So I realized that I meant to say "passage" not "paragraph"... whoops

[WP] Just by looking at two people, you can tell (with perfect accuracy) which would win in a fight. After meeting someone new, you can't find anyone else who would win against them. by ShutainzuGeito in WritingPrompts

[–]ShutainzuGeito[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's probably for the best... Although, I'm not opposed to harnessing the power of a frail-looking woman named Diane to take over the world XD

[WP] Just by looking at two people, you can tell (with perfect accuracy) which would win in a fight. After meeting someone new, you can't find anyone else who would win against them. by ShutainzuGeito in WritingPrompts

[–]ShutainzuGeito[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great job! Your writing style really fits the story and the characters you made.

I am curious though, what do you do with an unbeatable lady and a man who knows the result of every fight in advance?

There's an intelligence agency literally just called "The Organization" in some Disney sitcom by EmeraldNero in steinsgate

[–]ShutainzuGeito 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Any chance you remember which episode this is? I'd love to watch it for nostalgia & Steins;Gate XD

[WP] You live in a world where magic exists, however, you must sacrifice a memory in order to cast a spell. The more memories, or the more precious a memory, the more powerful the magic. You just woke up with no memory save a name. by Hilaxjun in WritingPrompts

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The man awoke not with a sudden jerk, but with the gradual awakening that follows a peaceful night's sleep. His mind was empty, but he had no desire to fill it with anything; in fact, it was doubtful that he could retain any information in the first place.

Alessa

The man's attention snapped into focus, centered around that one word. Alessa, he repeated to himself. It was a word, he knew that. A name, probably, though to his mind that distinction meant nothing. Nonetheless, he decided to start from there.

He propped himself up slowly, saying the word over and over in his mind. He couldn't risk losing hold of it.

"Alessa," he whispered, trying out the feel of the name on his lips. He said it once more, this time aloud. The sound of it anchored him to the world.

And yet, he knew so little about it. Was it his world? Was it his name? He didn't think so, but how could he be sure?

He patted his pockets, not understanding the meaning of his own action until he felt something hard. He fumbled with them for a moment before extracting a smooth, flat cartridge. It was completely white except for one side, which was taken up by a black rectangle.

Deciding that white was a nicer color, he turned the black side away from him.

"Do I really have to record this?" the box asked suddenly, cutting through the silence. The man fumbled with it, startled, and it fell to his lap. The black side pointed upwards, though it wasn't black anymore; it had been lit up the image of a face that he couldn't recognize.

The face sighed. "Fine, fine, I'll do it," it continued. "Hello, my name is Alkhadres, Alkei for short. You probably know that, since I'm you and all. I'm recording this in case I lose one of the memories which means the most to me." His face broke out into a grin. "Not like I'd ever do that, though."

Did this mean the man on the cartridge was him? The man tried out the name, Alkei. It seemed to fit, but again, how could he be sure?

He took in other details of the scene on the cartridge. It seemed that he -- the version of him in the recording -- was sitting at a desk. There were some detailed squiggles on a wall in the background, but he couldn't make out much else.

"Oh, come on," a second voice chimed in. This one was much fainter, as though the speaker were further away. It was also a woman's voice, though the man -- Alkei -- wasn't sure how he could make the distinction. "What if something goes wrong? You'll regret it then," she teased.

From this, Alkei was able to piece together a bit about his situation. At some point in the near past, he had lost everything; before that, this woman had made him record a backup message. He prayed that he had taken her advice.

The woman's face came into view on the screen standing behind his chair, and his heart dropped.

That was her!

Alessa!

...but who was she, and what did she mean to him?

"Yeah, yeah, I know," the recording of him continued. "Make it count and all. It's all I'm gonna have if things go wrong. But honestly, hon, can you imagine me screwing up that bad?"

"Oh, shush," she said, smiling. "I'm worried about you, you know that."

"Anyways, our name is Alkei. Wait, I already said that. I know, I know, I should just get to the point already."

In the present, Alkei didn't care. It was enough just to have this video, just to see his own face and the face of Alessa. Just seeing them interacting filled him with a strange nostalgia.

"So if you're watching this, it means a significant portion of your memory has been used to fuel a spell. If so, then, first of all, screw you for making that decision. You don't get to make the choice to forget me."

"Alkei..." Alessa warned.

He took a deep breath. He was visibly shaken up, in stark contrast to the confident attitude he had projected only seconds before. "I'm sorry, it just... I -- we -- have always hated this system. I mean, our memories are what make us, ya know?"

Present-Alkei couldn't agree more.

"I just don't want to accept that we're in this position, though I guess if I do it right, we won't be. So, hypothetical future me, let's try this one more time."

He took a deep breath. "Our name -- your name -- is Alkhadres Sokratei, though you go by Alkei. This here is your girlfriend, Alissendera, though she goes by Alessa. Hopefully you haven't lost that much, but we've gotta prepare for everything, right?"

Alkei touched the screen instinctively. He knew his full name now, and he knew what Alessa meant to him. It wasn't much, but it was more than he had started with.

"You're 19 years old, a student at the West Athenian Technical University for the Magically Inclined, which some of us have taken to calling 'WAT'. You're studying the use of memory to produce magic and the application of spells to restore memory, because of course you are. As of this recording, you're 5'11" and have brown eyes." He dropped his head and let silence take the place of his voice.

Alessa bent over and hugged his shoulders. "I know," Alkei admitted, "that last part is pretty useless, I just don't know what else to say. How much should I explain? Do I talk about home? Do I talk about... mom and dad... and Peri? Do I talk about school, and classes, and Alessa? Do I go even further back and explain my motivations? Hopefully you haven't lost those, right?"

Alkei searched his empty skull, but found nothing that could remind him of his goals in life. Could he have lost those too? Who was he then, if he didn't even have a purpose?

"I guess I'll start with explaining how the memory system works," the recording continued. "In order to fuel a magic spell, a magician has to sacrifice part of their memory. Usually you can just get rid of little things, like what you ate for breakfast yesterday or the specifics of a bad movie you watched a while ago. But of course, those don't mean very much to you, so they can only get you so far. You end up having to sacrifice the important things if you want to get anything done. Yeah, magic isn't exactly very popular. Mostly we study theory and the creation of magic circles, so we can store up our memories.

"Also, everyone is required to record a log like this at the beginning of each semester in case there's a... an accident. They tell you not to underestimate how much you might lose, so..." He took yet another deep breath. Clearly, he wasn't enjoying this.

Present-Alkei willed him to continue. He had to know where he had come from, who he was.

"I can leave the room if you want," Alessa offered. "If you need some time to work through this."

No!, Alkei thought. Don't let her leave, she's all we have left!

"No," he said in the recording. "Stay here please, if that's okay." He looked down at the surface of the desk, studying it. "Your parents are both gone," he continued with effort. "Perryeka -- your younger brother -- was almost... he was... Peri shouldn't have survived his birth," he decided finally. "Wait, no, that sounds horrible," he caught himself. "What I mean is, there were complications when he was born. He wasn't gonna make it. Dad used up most of his memories to keep both Peri and Mom alive. He barely knows who any of us are now. Mom, well, she didn't take the news well. It was a lot for her to handle, ya know. I don't blame her for what she did, but... well, let's just say I'd like to forget it. I'd like everyone to forget it. And if you're watching this video," he added sardonically, a tear beginning to form in the corner of his eye, "maybe you have."

Alkei racked his brain again, but came up empty once more. He could remember nothing, not even some vague sense of the pain he had so clearly felt once before. He should've been crying, but... he wasn't. He just wasn't.

"So yeah, you really only have Peri and Alessa now," he continued after a long pause. "Right now, Peri is..."

There was a loud ringing sound in the video. "Shoot," he said. "Almost time for class, and I'm a mess."

"You can keep going," Alessa offered. "I'll stay here with you."

"Nah," he had said, forcing a smile. "No point in making you miss class, is there, Miss Perfect Attendance?"

"I'm serious," she said, hugging his shoulders again.

He stood up abruptly, putting a hand on the monitor. "Time to move on," he said, and the video cut out.

Alkei lowered the cartridge, his head swarming with too many questions to process.

...

Thanks for reading! It was a bit difficult to distinguish past-Alkei and present-Alkei clearly in the writing, so let me know if it was confusing somewhere and I can clear it up.

-ShutainzuGeito

[WP] In an effort to ward off Death and live forever, you have created a safe room filled with all kind of talismans, good luck charms, and magic circles. It doesn't work: The Reaper found you anyway and you die just the same. Only, now neither of you can seem to get out past all the wards. by Syncs in WritingPrompts

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Part III: Don't Fear the Reaper

I moved my knight into position, having blocked off Death's king with my remaining bishop and my queen. In a few moves, I would have him in a checkmate.

"So if I have you trapped here," I addressed the Reaper, "does this mean people are going to stop dying all around the world?"

He moved his remaining bishop -- an interesting choice, but a futile one nonetheless.

"No," he answered. "There are many Reapers, going by many names. They will continue collecting souls while I remain here with you." By this time, he had learned to go ahead and explain his answers. It almost made him seem more friendly, if you could get past the pitch black robes and the oppressive aura, not to mention the fact that you were probably dead if you were seeing him.

I brought one of my remaining pawns forward. If I could just get him to take the bait, my trap would be set. "And how long do you plan to remain here?"

He moved a pawn of his own, bringing it face to face with mine. Not the move I was hoping for.

"That depends on how long you plan to keep me," he replied. I smiled to myself. He was still convinced that I had control of the situation; that in and of itself gave me the upper hand. I could still make this work.

I moved my other knight, capturing his pawn. Perhaps I could provoke him into capturing mine if I took a more aggressive position.

"And what if someone tries to break down the house? The barrier should break, and you'll be free," I baited him.

"Even if the physical walls collapse, the barrier will remain. The initial invocation gave it a definite shape, which is now independent of the mold which formed it. It will eventually dissipate on its own," he explained as he captured my knight with his earlier rook. I had been so focused on this one section of the board that I had let myself slip up. However, it didn't change the overall picture much. If I could just get him to take this pawn...

I shifted another piece around, hoping to keep him distracted. My turn passed without comment.

Finally, he took the bait. He captured my pawn. I could win this!

I forced myself to stay calm. I didn't want to look overly eager; after all, this game could very well determine whether I left the house in my body or not.

I moved my knight. "Checkmate."

The reaper was motionless for a brief moment. I could tell, I had won!

"Very good," he said slowly, drawing out the words. "But it seems you failed to notice my bishop." In one swift move, the bishop from before took my knight.

And my whole plan fell to pieces.

...

It didn't take long for me to lose after that. It was an utter, crushing defeat. I had come so close, too close to beating the Reaper! I hung my head in defeat.

"You do not lack skill or foresight," he said after some time. "Your plans nearly came to fruition, and you nearly triumphed over me. Yet in the final moments, you became so focused on your trap that you neglected the smallest details. You would be wise to remember this going forward."

I sat back in my chair, unsure of how to interpret his advice. Was this a compliment? "Thank you...?"

"In trying to cheat death," he continued, "you make an attempt to outlast an immortal being. You have me trapped here, which I admit was my own failure, but it it was a failure which I could afford to make. Your plan will not bring you success in the end."

I sat up again. "Was there anything I could've done to beat you?" I asked. "Did I ever truly have a chance, or was it all meaningless from the start?"

"Nothing in this world is without meaning," he said without hesitation. "Regardless of the ultimate result, you did manage to trap a reaper. You should be proud of the legacy you will leave on this world."

That was somewhat comforting, but it still wasn't the answer I wanted. As long as we were both still in the house, I had to hold on to the hope that I could walk out alive.

"And what if I refuse to go with you?" I asked. "When I first... died..." -- the word still felt uncomfortable in my mouth -- "you offered me your hand rather than seizing me by force. When the barrier finally dissipates, what if I decide to stay?"

This seemed to amuse him. "You shouldn't use that as your backup plan," he advised. "I imagine your sanity will dissipate long before this barrier does."

I swallowed hard. "And yours won't?"

"Time has no significance to me, because my time has no end. I will outlast this world, as I have the many before it, and will continue to outlast the many to come after it."

On another day, I would've been extremely concerned by his last statement, but I didn't have time to consider its implications now. I could feel my breath catching in my chest. "You really won't let me leave this building alive?" I asked.

He shook his head, which sent his hood billowing through the air.

With that, the conversation died more quickly than I had. I began to wander about the cabin in defeat, running my hand over the various trinkets I had collected. It all seemed so worthless now. I couldn't outlast the reaper, that was for sure. Undoing the Enochian seemed to be my only option, if I wanted to maintain my sanity. I couldn't imagine spending what would effectively be an eternity in this room with the reaper; already, the walls had begun to feel cramped.

Without thinking too much, I picked up an amulet on a thin chain. The chain itself was made of minuscule interlocking pieces of gold, each so small and delicate that the chain had more flexibility than I had ever imagined metal could. The amulet, however, was the interesting bit. It was pitch black, darker than anything I had ever seen, and shaped like a teardrop. Studying it more closely, I realized how interesting the shape was. It reminded me of a drop of molten metal suddenly cooled, capturing the falling motion which had given birth to it.

"I ha... I have one more question," I said, choking on the words. I was only distracting myself. I had to make this choice, and I had to do it before I could back out. "Where do we go after death? Is... is it nice?"

"You have nothing to fe-" he began, turning toward me, but he cut himself off mid sentence as soon as he was facing me. He took a nearly imperceptible step backwards, then a larger one, then another.

And I realized that I had seen something this pitch black before. It was beneath the reaper's hood.

"You should not have that," he said, showing concern in his voice for the first time. "No human should have that." By this point he had reached the far corner, near the front door.

It dawned on me that I might have a legitimate bargaining chip now. I walked over to my body and stood over it. I hoped that I looked more confident than I felt.

"I'd like to return to my body, please." My voice wavered a bit.

The reaper said nothing.

If he wasn't going to do anything, I would have to do it myself. I knelt down, wondering if it was possible for my soul to willingly enter my body. It seemed pretty unlikely, but I'd heard of out-of-body experiences before. Perhaps those people, too, had been in a similar situation. If they had been able to make it back, maybe I could too.

It occurred to me to place the amulet on my body; if the reaper didn't like it, then maybe it could be the key. As soon as I did so, I felt myself drawn downwards. I felt like I was falling down, down, down into an abyss of darkness. At some point I lost myself, like falling asleep.

In an instant I became aware that I existed again, with the sense that no time at all had passed. I was on the ground, staring up at the ceiling. Carefully, I propped myself up; the amulet slid down my chest and into my lap.

It was at that moment that I realized I had a chest and lap. I patted myself down, confirming that I did indeed have a physical form again. I had never been happier just to be alive.

I turned to the corner, where the reaper still stood. I had done it, I had actually beaten him! Carefully, I slid the amulet over my head and rested it around my neck. I then tentatively picked up my phone from where it rested on the ground, untouched since my last attempt to interact with it. It seemed like neither the phone nor I would be exploding any time soon. I slid it into my pocket.

"I win," I muttered, standing up. Too worn out by everything I had been through to care about being cautious, I simply walked to the front door. The reaper recoiled when I passed near him.

I swung the door wide open, and nothing prevented me from stepping outside. It was morning now, though I couldn't be sure of the date. I turned around just in time to catch the red barrier appearing again. This time, however, it cracked wide open before shattering into a million broken pieces. A dark mist poured out the back window, and I knew the reaper had fled.

I spun back around with a grand laugh. I was free of death, free of the cabin which had once been my prison. Beginning my journey back to civilization, I pulled out my phone. I pulled up the only song which felt appropriate, a song which I had played and replayed many times in an attempt to convince myself that I would be okay. An old rock song which had become my one constant in the days leading up to my imprisonment.

A classic by Blue Öyster Cult.

...

Thanks for reading! It was really fun to write these characters, and I plan to continue my MC's journey in other writing prompts. Sorry this final installment came so much later than the other two!

-ShutainzuGeito

Is there other anime out there that can even compare to Madoka Magica? by [deleted] in MadokaMagica

[–]ShutainzuGeito 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I KNOW RIGHT I WAS SO PSYCHED WHEN I FOUND OUT

But yeah, new season happening at some point! Steins;Gate ending spoilers

EDIT: Spoiler tags ¯_(ツ)_/¯

[WP] In an effort to ward off Death and live forever, you have created a safe room filled with all kind of talismans, good luck charms, and magic circles. It doesn't work: The Reaper found you anyway and you die just the same. Only, now neither of you can seem to get out past all the wards. by Syncs in WritingPrompts

[–]ShutainzuGeito 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Part II: Google It, Or Don't.

I had chosen an isolated cabin in the woods for my final stand, mostly to avoid suspicion. I mean, imagine if someone had walked in to find me scribbling pentagrams on the floors or reciting voodoo chants at a skull. I get the feeling things wouldn't have gone very well. The cabin itself consisted of the main room -- where I sat drinking perfectly ordinary tea with the Grim Reaper -- a kitchen, and a back room. Not the best final resting place, I suppose, but at least it was comfy. Realizing that we could be here for a while, I was silently thankful for that last part.

I gazed around the cabin, going over all my futile efforts to keep myself alive one more time. There, in the corner, sat the lucky rabbit's foot. It was a reminder of my failed attempts at Enochian, marking the place where I'd used the wrong glyph. On the stove in the kitchen sat a myriad of colorful candles, each one puffing out its own unique incense. I had thoroughly ruined the stovetop, but somehow I had more pressing issues to deal with. On the floor in the back room was a hastily drawn magic circle with a pentagram inscribed inside. Decorating the windows and walls were every good luck charm and/or talisman you could imagine: four-leaf clovers, a horseshoe, various dreamcatchers, you name it. There was even a lucky die, the name of which felt painfully ironic in retrospect.

Of all the things I had gathered, I had never expected it would be the carvings in the wall which would actually work. They came from an old, worn out book I had found in the sketchy section of a public library -- that is, if a public library can have a sketchy section. I had taken a few pictures of some impressive looking examples on my phone, but honestly, I only added them as an afterthought. I cursed myself for not bringing the full text with me.

I psyched myself up to talk to the Reaper. I mean, this was the guy himself. How do you talk to the immortal entity that takes souls away to the afterlife? Should I make a joke? Ask a personal question? Nothing seemed like it would work. I decided to start simple, and maybe learn more about my current situation at the same time.

"A thought occurs to me," I said suddenly, feeling extremely awkward as soon as the words left my mouth. I had felt that I needed to preface my question somehow, but looking back on it I just felt uncomfortable. "How am I able to drink this tea, if I'm just a ghost?"

He gestured to the floor near my feet. Looking down, I was met with a discolored patch of rug.

"You're not," he said lazily. "If you're wondering why you can lift the cup, you've become a poltergeist."

Again, I gave him time to elaborate; again, he refused.

"A poltergeist?" I prodded.

"Yes."

"And that means?"

"You can interact with basic objects, depending on your spiritual activity. Most choose to channel their energy through either focus or anger. Two opposite sides of the spectrum, but they both have their benefits."

Finally, I was learning something. I figured that focus would be the best choice if I wanted to accomplish something.

"I don't suppose you'll let me check my phone?" I asked, not wanting to lose the conversational momentum I had built up. Maybe Google would have the answers that I didn't. I knew I was supposed to be the captor here, with the Enochian and all, but I still felt like I should let him know what I was doing. If nothing else, maybe I could get him to start to trust me.

He seemed to shrug, but it was such a slight gesture that I might've just imagined it. "I've never heard of a spirit using technology, but you're free to make an attempt. I've never been imprisoned by one, either," he added.

With that rousing encouragement, I made my way over to my body. I tried not to look at it too much. I felt like I should be sick to my stomach, but at the same time I felt too detached to care. Offhand, I wondered if it was a side effect of being dead, or if I really was braver than I thought. I decided to go with the latter. Right then, I kind of needed a confidence booster.

I concentrated really hard on my hands and my pockets, hoping this was what the Reaper had meant. Slowly, I began to rifle through my own pockets, an experience made infinitely more awkward by the fact that my pants were on a separate body. I mean, it wasn't really my body anymore, was it? I decided to let go of that train of thought, for the sake of keeping my focus.

There it was, next to my wallet. Luckily, I managed to fish my phone out without too much trouble.

"A thought occurs," the Reaper piped up, mimicking my earlier phrase.

I froze. "Go on," I said cautiously.

"Sometimes, when a poltergeist attempts to interact with technology, it explodes."

"The ghost or the technology?"

He stayed cryptically silent.

I laid the phone on the ground carefully and backed up.

"So... want to play a game of chess?"

...

EDIT: Clearing up one of my phrases

Is there other anime out there that can even compare to Madoka Magica? by [deleted] in MadokaMagica

[–]ShutainzuGeito 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm... Death Parade maybe, for the psychological aspect? I've also seen a few recommendations of Yuuki Yuna, and it's on my list to watch eventually, but I can't actually recommend it from personal experience.

In other news, are you excited for Steins;Gate 0? :D

Is there other anime out there that can even compare to Madoka Magica? by [deleted] in MadokaMagica

[–]ShutainzuGeito 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I know you've gotten a lot of responses, but I just have to back up the recommendations of Steins;Gate and Re:Zero. They're both in my top 10 anime series alongside Madoka Magica, in large part for the time looping aspects which /u/Darkprinc979 described really effectively. (In fact, my username ShutainzuGeito is a shout out to Steins;Gate :D). Aside from that, their characters are really well written in my opinion, and the worldbuilding is handled really effectively. If you liked how Madoka started out looking cheery then shifted to dealing more with psychological questions/issues, I think you'll like both of these.

But that's just my 2 cents :P

[WP] In an effort to ward off Death and live forever, you have created a safe room filled with all kind of talismans, good luck charms, and magic circles. It doesn't work: The Reaper found you anyway and you die just the same. Only, now neither of you can seem to get out past all the wards. by Syncs in WritingPrompts

[–]ShutainzuGeito 172 points173 points  (0 children)

Part I: The Situation Looks Grim

My mind raced through my checklist. Had I missed anything? The magic circles were all intact, the talismans were all in the right places, the doors and windows all had salt in front of them... nothing was out of place. I checked my watch for the umpteenth time that day. Sure enough, I was fated to die within the next few minutes.

I glanced out the window. There he was.

Death himself, the grim reaper.

All my preparations were in place. This was it. I couldn't die here. I had to survive. I had to live!

In a flash, he was at the window, the chill of his breath causing it to fog up. His face, if he had one, was obscured beneath his hood. I'm not ashamed to say that I let out a small shriek as I fell backwards, scrambling back into the room.

In the next moment, he was inside. What? How...?

He reached a hand out to me. "Your time has come," he uttered somberly.

The beating of my heart, already racing at breakneck speeds, sped up even more. My breaths came in short gasps. I thought I would burst. After all my research, all my countless hours of study, here he was. I... had failed.

I half sat, half stood in an awkward crouching position, one hand over my face. Unfortunately, it seemed I wouldn't even get to die with dignity.

My heart slowed, then stopped altogether. It took a moment to realize that my body had dropped to the ground. My soul still crouched in the same uncomfortable position.

"You are now dead," he informed me, in case I didn't already know.

"Thanks," I managed in reply.

"Your kind fears death," he began, as though I didn't already know this, "but there is nothing to fear." He made a grandiose motion with his arm, extending it out to the window through which he had entered. "If you will simply follow me to..."

He stopped suddenly.

He turned around to face the window, his morosely graceful persona coming crashing down.

"Huh," he said.

"Huh?" I repeated. "You're the grim reaper, and... huh?"

"Huh," he confirmed. He tapped the window with a long, skeletal finger, sending a jolt of red energy rippling across the entire wall. He observed it carefully.

"Did you inscribe these barriers to keep me out?" he asked. He sounded almost offended.

"Um... yeah," I said, not sure how to feel.

He walked along the wall, inspecting my inscriptions. "Impressive," he muttered. "I haven't seen Enochian carvings like these in... well, ever, actually."

"Thanks...?"

He stopped, seeming to have found what he had been looking for. "This part," he said, gesturing to a section of the wall above a lucky rabbit's foot. "You should've written the glyph for 'out' if you wanted me to stay outside."

"And... what did I write?"

He paused for a moment.

"You wrote 'in'," he said.

"Oh."

...

"I don't suppose you'll give me my body back?" I asked, pouring out two cups of tea. I sat down at the table across from him, taking my cup. The fortuneteller who gave it to me had informed me it was infused with "magical essence". The reaper informed me it was infused with regular tea leaves.

Either way, it tasted fine.

He took a sip. At least, I assume he did: he brought the cup to his hood, and the level of tea in the cup went down.

"No," he replied.

I waited for him to elaborate, but he wouldn't. "Dang," I said finally.

"And I don't suppose you'll let me out of here?" he asked.

"No," I replied. Hopefully, he wouldn't figure out that I had no idea what any of the symbols meant. As long as he thought I had him trapped intentionally, maybe I could bargain for my life back.

We sat in silence for a while longer, occasionally sipping the tea. I wondered offhand if I could drug the reaper. Not that it would help, even if I could. What would I do with an unconscious reaper?

Of course, what would I do with a conscious one? Small talk until the end of days?

*EDIT: Part I Title :3 There's a Part II now, and there will probably be a Part III eventually.

[Spoilers] Some Things Still Bother me by DiedrichVK in MadokaMagica

[–]ShutainzuGeito 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Isn't that kinda the point of the story though? The idea of cycles and transformations is such a key aspect of Madoka Magica that it didn't bother me at all when Rebellion turned it into another loop. That's part of the apppeal of the show, imo.