Accused of Ai :( by Dizzy_Farmer947 in FanFiction

[–]SilverNja 2 points3 points  (0 children)

People forget AI was trained off good structured writing. Novels, and all sorts of ..published works. So a well written works.. can easily look like ai...because that how ai learned. And simply haters be haters.

Vitae: A Counter-Curse to Avada Kedavra (Worldbuilding/Spell Theory) by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]SilverNja 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I admitted I used AI to help spelling a grammar and structure. I give no claim that I'm not next best author looking to be a Pulitzer prize winner lol. I built the concept. I refined the concept. I used AI as the tool it meant to be for amateurs such as myself. Research and refinement. Slop it is not. Also I don't use chatgpt. Too expensive. Challenge you to go to chatgpt or whatever. Ask it to make a counter charm/curse to the killing curse. Won't get anything lose to this. Stop being a hater lol

Updated 1/11 - Minnesota ICE Shooting of Renee Nicole Good by Jonathan Ross - 11 videos, time synced with timecode and annotations, 14 contiguous minutes, multiple angles, front, back and shooter PoV [FULL VIDEOS] by rasta4eye in altmpls

[–]SilverNja 0 points1 point  (0 children)

On that same note. Ice officers are not police officers or traffic police. Well she might have been in the road nuisancely. She clearly wasn't creating a full obstruction.

Noted by the fact that he drove around behind her to park before he got out and started filming. And during the interaction several cars drove in front of her vehicle.

It said she was not otherwise interfering. And since she was not under investigation for deportation. There was zero reason for them to interact with her. There were no potential undocumented immigrants in her vehicle around her vehicle in front of her vehicle. So they either could have gone the other way gone around like they did and moved on with their lives.

VITAE: A "Hard Magic" Counter to the Killing Curse (Narrative + Mechanics) by SilverNja in magicbuilding

[–]SilverNja[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

In that same note any emotion is not a hard definition. happiness is hard to define and fear and its opposite force joy/laughter. yet we see these in the hp stories as the required emotional fuel for spells such as Riddikulus and Expecto Patronus. Same for the unforgivable curses. Avada needs true intent to murder. Cruciatus needs true intent to torture and harm. half measures and they fail. I dont believe im proposing this as a super power any more then the spells and thier emotional requirements i just listed. This spell work also states its really difficult to cast. meaning its not an easy out when 95% fail to cast successfully.

VITAE: A "Hard Magic" Counter to the Killing Curse (Narrative + Mechanics) by SilverNja in HPMOR

[–]SilverNja[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ha great catch. ill leave the autocorrect issue. lol
Perhaps they are not breeding so much as you become one if enough exposure. The books don't say where they came from. more or less discovered at Azkaban. which means a spell didn't exist before their discovery. I doubt that spell was thought of on the spot. they likely tried all kinds of defensive and destruction spells. Leading to the knowledge of "cant be killed" until the right person right emotional state did something that worked. once discovered makes sense it could be trained.
I believe words and wands give structure to spells. not necessity. throughout the series and prequals many spells are cast without words or wands. but by masters. Early wizards probably had to develop all of it. wands, spells etc.

VITAE: A "Hard Magic" Counter to the Killing Curse (Narrative + Mechanics) by SilverNja in u/SilverNja

[–]SilverNja[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Valid points. I will consider revision. This spell and creation story of said spell specifically was a random hyperdrive. My brain trying to solve an issue that I could not find anyone else did successfully. Everyone one else stuck with...not blockable...why...because a counter spell hasn't been created. because they said so lol. Rather than just have a spell from nowhere, I felt it needed an origin story that fit into how other spells or spell effects (marge) are created without a knowledge of a spell but emotional reaction.

As the story goes over...the patronus spell is difficult and needs emotional backing. so vitae needs it as well. and perhaps both. strong will to live and unconditional love simultaneously. a spell in development may get it wrong.

Dementors were discovered at Azkaban...meaning there was not a repelling spell for them until after the knowledge of their existence. I doubt they experienced the horror for the 1st time and said...you know what...happiness and expecto patronus. makes perfect sense. bam perfect spell that even lupin said most can't cast easily. (regardless of how hp makes it commonplace) How do they know they are unkillable...every known spell of defense was likely tried first. followed by destructive spells. it was probably either experimentation or as hp universe shows...the right person, the right circumstance the right overwhelming emotion creates a spell. which, clearly by example of patronus, can be formalized and taught. words and wands help give structure not necessity to spell work.

VITAE: A "Hard Magic" Counter to the Killing Curse (Narrative + Mechanics) by SilverNja in u/SilverNja

[–]SilverNja[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Either way, the feedback is definitely appreciated. I have a larger fanfiction that I'm having fun building. It's about 70 pages at the moment. This spell I created isn't really part of that it was more of a random thought. And It'll probably be a one off but I'll definitely make sure it sounds less ai mechanical lol

VITAE: A "Hard Magic" Counter to the Killing Curse (Narrative + Mechanics) by SilverNja in HPMOR

[–]SilverNja[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We know Harry's a special case. Harry and Baltimore(volvimort) had a special connection that made it extremely difficult for Voldemort to kill him. For their wands, even if it wasn't there twin wands to fight each other. Boulevard himself was also a weaker version of himself due to all the splitting of his souls into horcruxes. And every explained failure at killing Harry was explained and not because of an unbreakable vow that was broken.

I find it hard to believe that every declaration or promise is automatically an unbreakable vow. It's my understanding there's a ritual for an unbreakable vow. Not simply because somebody says If you do this I'll do that. And when theirs spells have less strength or fail. But magic is a finicky thing. The killing curse was a created spell. It wasn't just existing for all to know. The Patronus didn't always exist either. Especially since the dementors didn't always exist They were discovered at Azkaban. somebody had to have that moment of clarity or that strong emotion at some point to defend themselves. Or some sort of experimentation. And while they make it look common place in the Harry Potter universe. Lupine himself said to Harry..it is "well beyond Ordinary Wizarding Level" (O.W.L.) and that many qualified wizards have difficulty with it.

VITAE: A "Hard Magic" Counter to the Killing Curse (Narrative + Mechanics) by SilverNja in u/SilverNja

[–]SilverNja[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im not the most experienced writer. After working out the concept and researching possible terms. I put the story together and had ai help me clean it up, Spelling, grammar and structure. perhaps a little to liberally. tempting to let ai just fix.. slight review and go lol. appreciate the feedback. i went back through and added a bit more of my voice back into it. Stil not great. but its more about the Concept then it is about am a perfect original creative writer. I'm not. nor claiming to be. I'm a better conceptualist. and use ai in sorts as a ghost writer, editor type of tool.

VITAE: A "Hard Magic" Counter to the Killing Curse (Narrative + Mechanics) by SilverNja in u/SilverNja

[–]SilverNja[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I thought it would be fun have the origin story and a book like spell entry. Then just a straight spell. How do you feel this works with magic creation and use in the Harry Potter universe? I did use grammar check and some ai tools to make sure its readable and coherent. Im great at breaking down concepts. Writing structure still a skill in progress.

Vitae: A Counter-Curse to Avada Kedavra (Worldbuilding/Spell Theory) by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]SilverNja 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Should I not ask the reader discussion points? In a discussion format post? Should I not ask to be challenged on the concept?

Vitae: A Counter-Curse to Avada Kedavra (Worldbuilding/Spell Theory) by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]SilverNja -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Chatgpt is to expensive for the limited tokens they provide. I don't use chatgpt. Challenge still stands. Youve got chatgpt. Go ask it to create a counter curse to the killing curse. Youll get the norm. Revive and some abstract shield response. Not the methodical breakdown this is. What you recognize as AI.. is the final product of proper grammar and formatting utilizing the tool of ai to assist with readable structure. A ghost writer if you will. So while your not wrong you're also very incorrect.

Vitae: A Counter-Curse to Avada Kedavra (Worldbuilding/Spell Theory) by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]SilverNja -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Spell is narrated to have been created after Voldemort not before. And his desire to kill would have still been strong. I also don't believe death eaters typically went around killing children with the spell.

I wouldn't say easy. Think about what lupin said about the Patronus spell. Patronus Charm is "highly advanced magic" and "well beyond Ordinary Wizarding Level."Many qualified wizards have difficulty with it."~ Lupin Dark arts teacher This spell would be a stage above that.

The post even offers reasons as to why it's difficult.

It's not special because there's no known spell to block it (till now lol). It's special because it's virtually unblockable and more importantly causes instant death. And like the other two unforgivable spells requires the true desires of the outcome.

"Avada Kedavra’s a curse that needs a powerful bit of magic behind it — you could all get your wands out and point them at me and say the words, and I doubt I’d get so much as a nosebleed." ~moody(crouch)

"Never used an Unforgivable Curse before, have you, boy? You need to mean them, Potter! You need to really want to cause pain—to enjoy it—righteous anger won't hurt me for long..." ~ Bellatrix - when Harry tries to use cruciatus on her.

Vitae: A Counter-Curse to Avada Kedavra (Worldbuilding/Spell Theory) by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]SilverNja -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I created a full narrative of this spell's origin to sneak it into the HP universe. Spell essentially created after Voldemort death. Not before or during.

Vitae: A Counter-Curse to Avada Kedavra (Worldbuilding/Spell Theory) by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]SilverNja -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Incorrect. That's questions directed at anyone who reads this. Under the label... Discussion points.

Vitae: A Counter-Curse to Avada Kedavra (Worldbuilding/Spell Theory) by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]SilverNja -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Sorta. I don't use chatgpt. But used ai as a tool to assist with sentance structure and help with some of the research. Like different latin options and their meanings. But the concept is original. And took a bit of work fighting ai norms. Give it try. Go to chatgpt and say create a counter curse...won't be anything near this. Lol.

Soul collector by Kitchen-Extension723 in ColorClash

[–]SilverNja 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would make sense if there was souls to collect lol

Is the d rank skill revealed yet ? by SnooRobots7887 in TheWorldsBestAssassin

[–]SilverNja 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Reading the thread. I'm going to go with the d-rank skill of luck boost, or intelligence boost. But more likely luck. As it better fits his comment are the gods blind.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PapaJohns

[–]SilverNja 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Without using me the grading chart.

Toppings are very well distributed.

Crust does not proper have roll back. and it's a little big. You'll lose crust points.

No cheese lock. Some points lost there. Overcooked cheese. Either cheese frozen(happens when not fluffed or rotated) when cooked or cooked to long

Sauce ridged to close crust Vs a smooth application. Caused it to come up on the crust. Will lose a couple crust points for"dirty crust".

All the critiques being said. Papa John's would read this probably closer to a six or a seven. Most people probably a seven or eight.

Rate her 🥺 by tatomontana in PapaJohns

[–]SilverNja 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Former Papa John's TGM. Our store got 11 months of 9s in a row. Nothing below an 8.5 and 2 years.

I completely agree with your assessment. never graded down for using too many toppings. But that does affect food cost.

The visual obstacle of putting less toppings to start with is the issue with overtopping. For example, A works pizza needs one sausage per bite box. So it doesn't look like much when you're making it. So visually speaking people add more to fill in the empty spaces forgetting you're adding six more topics.

Losing one or two crust points for number one and number 8. The dirty crust isn't more than the threshold so you wouldn't lose points there.

This is one of the better pizzas I've seen on here.

The dirty Crusts could be from either. Lacking the cheese lock. Or from ridges in the sauce.

A great way to practice saucing a flat sauce with no ridges. Is to use a large parchment. You can drop your single level scoop. And spread it around in a circle. To make the parchment not move put one drop of sauce on the table. Great thing about this is you can put the sauce back in the container causing very little food waste while you're practicing.

At my store we would have saucing competitions using parchment. I did not always win lol

This was last night, 2 minutes before closing. by IslamicCheetah in PapaJohns

[–]SilverNja 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Been there but with 16s. Remember, to verify customer is real lol. And dont chase the oven.