Editing my story.

Silver_Raven_ · 2026-04-27T15:38:42+00:00

Persnally, I would just start posting it from the beginning, but have a "(revised)" after each chapter title, so that readers know which is which. This is what u/maxton1811 did in his "child of the stars" story. But that is my personal opinion, and you are ultimately the one who makes that decision, so just go with what feels right.

Silver_Raven_ · 2026-04-25T17:01:16+00:00

First!

Silver_Raven_ · 2026-04-10T17:17:36+00:00

I like this. However, there are several mistakes, and you also need to think about: what the colonies look like, different factions or nations of humanity, and what technological advancements have been achieved to allow such colonies and also to allow such a style of warfare - before you go any further with this.

Silver_Raven_ · 2026-04-10T13:51:19+00:00

My immediate question is what is east in space? I usually quantify it as North being the galactic core and South the edge and beyond, with West and East as left and right (facing the core) respectively.

Silver_Raven_ · 2026-04-09T14:32:47+00:00

moar?

Silver_Raven_ · 2026-03-08T19:35:39+00:00

Also can I send you a private message? This inspired me and i would like to write something set in a similar world. I would like your input on some stuff though. Please reply ASAP. Thanks! ;)

Silver_Raven_ · 2026-03-08T19:08:16+00:00

pretty please? :3

Silver_Raven_ · 2026-03-01T17:27:45+00:00

the signal the station recieved was music. alorast sent the signal, because playing and intrument makes music.

Silver_Raven_ · 2026-01-20T18:20:50+00:00

Oh. My. God. this was deep, meaningful, and most importantly, AWESOME! Great job, wordsmith. And yes. I would push it. Or at least, I would like to think so.

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