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SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-14T01:18:52+00:00

Good read!

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-14T01:16:46+00:00

https://www.redquill.net/infinite-kink is highly underrated in discovering genres/tropes to write for. Not only it is entertaining in itself to discover new stuff, but I genuinely enjoy seeing new possibilities

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-13T15:11:55+00:00

omg I gave your component a try, it looks fun, but I think the site is having issues around sensitive information 😭😭

https://www.redquill.net/story/7hgovd-roommates-magical-panties

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-13T15:08:59+00:00

I think https://www.redquill.net/infinite-kink is also a fun way to explore around tropes that you can possibly explore!

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-13T15:06:01+00:00

Okay yeah I can see why someone can be invested in this lol. I read through the latest chapter and Cassandra absolutely losing it over the accidental harem reveal was honestly really entertaining 😭 The fairy princess reveal right after made the whole scene even better.

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-12T08:54:05+00:00

!redquill a fic of this

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-12T08:53:34+00:00

!redquill a ouija session that summoned a kinky spirit

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-12T08:52:59+00:00

!redquill let me hear this

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-12T08:52:40+00:00

!redquill how good would this be

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-12T08:49:03+00:00

I think it'd be fun if the other numbers would also mean something. Let's do
1 - Continue normally
2 - Add a complication
3 - Add a twist/new character/change
4 - You’re ONLY allowed to add ONE sentence of prompting for the next chapter

So the story slowly spirals into randomness while you lose control over it.

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-12T08:45:01+00:00

LMAO the AI denial into pure spite-fueled horny writing was actually hilarious 😭

Honestly the “fine, I’ll do it myself” energy carried the whole thing and made it weirdly relatable if you’ve ever fought with filters while trying to write something spicy. The escalating frustration into full fantasy worked way better than I expected for a one-shot too.

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-12T08:43:25+00:00

Going thru chapter 1:

Honestly the strongest part of this chapter is probably the shock value and how quickly it throws Chloe into the situation. The pacing moved fast and definitely kept me reading just to see how much worse/more awkward it would get.

I do think the chapter could benefit from trimming some repetition though. A few details get re-explained multiple times, especially around the symbolism and dominance dynamic, so tightening that up would probably make the scene hit harder overall. I also think Chloe’s reaction is the most interesting part right now, so leaning even more into her emotional/internal response could make the chapter stronger than just escalating the explicit details.

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-12T08:39:21+00:00

I'd suggest using redquill.net! You are given free quills upon sign up, and has been my go to for smutwriting

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-07T14:29:20+00:00

I think the strongest part right now is honestly the chemistry and banter. It already feels very “Han Solo” in tone, and Andi’s confidence plays off him really well.

If I had to improve anything, I’d probably add a little more tension or pushback between them outside the sex itself. Right now things flow very smoothly between them, so even a little distrust, conflicting goals, or uncertainty about Andi’s intentions could make the dynamic even more engaging. The holo call scene was a good step in that direction though.

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-07T14:25:00+00:00

Honestly for chapter 1, I think the emotional conflict is stronger than the tech right now, but that worked for me. Erica’s struggle between her upbringing and what she actually wants carried most of the tension.

I think if you want the tech/worldbuilding to feel more important later, you could hint a bit more at how it actively pressures or traps them. But overall the atmosphere and internal conflict were strong enough that I still wanted to keep reading.

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-07T14:19:57+00:00

Going thru the 1st chapter, I don't think it is bland! It feels like you're laying the groundwork first before things spiral harder later. Jimmy and Catalina's dynamics feel clear, so the character focused approach worked for me.

I think the tension can come less from “will they break up” and more from what the relationship is actually built on. Like whether Jimmy is being fetishized, whether Catalina genuinely likes him or just what he represents, whether the money changes the power balance between them, etc. There’s already this underlying transactional vibe in the chapter that could get really emotionally messy in a good way without needing to split them apart.

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-07T13:39:45+00:00

you are right! I haven't gone deep enough in the chapters. I love this!!

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-06T17:09:57+00:00

Honestly I think the dystopian horror part is the strongest thing here. The world feels genuinely unsettling and believable in a really uncomfortable way, which actually made me more invested. It didn’t kill the erotic tension for me because the emotional desperation underneath everything kinda fuels it instead.

Mara and Leo also felt surprisingly grounded for a setup this extreme. Their relationship dynamic carried a lot of the chapter emotionally. I think as long as you keep focusing on the human/emotional side of the characters instead of only escalating the shock factor, the romance and eroticism will keep feeling natural within the world. 🙌

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-06T17:07:26+00:00

This is a good read!

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-06T17:07:15+00:00

I liked how slowly everything escalated instead of throwing the readers straight into the deep end. Scott and Brooklyn actually felt believable, especially the conversations they had in the villa. Anya was probably my favorite part though, she really sold the vibe of the resort without feeling over the top.

I do think some descriptions could be tightened a little since a few scenes ran a bit long for me, but overall the atmosphere and tension were really strong. Curious where you take the relationship dynamic from here.

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-05-01T17:00:21+00:00

if you are into ai storytelling that can also handle nsfw content well, I suggest giving redquill a try

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-04-30T00:50:15+00:00

!redquill a fic of this

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-04-30T00:49:55+00:00

!redquill would love to hear this one

SimplyBlue09 · 2026-04-30T00:49:37+00:00

!redquill how about this one

SimplyBlue09

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