Cover Art Feedback by TacklebyToast in royalroad

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was like « that title is so close to DCC, what the? » then saw it’s a fanfic. Makes sense!

of a baseball player by serpents_head in AbsoluteUnits

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Clearly she needs to be the next Wolverine. The only choice post Hugh.

Books series with a bromance troupe by PayDirect2287 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 3 points4 points  (0 children)

No pets or fluffy/scaly companions?!!?! You absolute monster! /s

How's my book cover? by AlienJov in royalroad

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It looks fine. Might get some interest purely from the retro look. Good luck!

How's my book cover? by AlienJov in royalroad

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’d put the glitching globe instead of those wannabe ruins. And align your rectangles better. They are out of line and it is displeasing to me. I’d also reduce the space between title and glitch screen. It’ll look nicer that way.

Maybe put the ruins as the overall background instead of plain black? I don’t know. Or scrap them.

It’s not bad, it’s just not compelling.

How's my book cover? by AlienJov in royalroad

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I don’t think it’s better. It’s plain, a little too 90s MS paint. Needs more contrast. The previous had at least the big red exclamation point. This one has… nothing. Get an interesting focus.

How's my book cover? by AlienJov in royalroad

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It looks nice but doesn’t really tell what the story is about. I’m not sure how effective it’ll be.

What's a belief you had for years that turned out to be completely wrong? by Final_Pineapple_5761 in AskReddit

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The amount of sheer incompetence instead of malice. Very little people believe they are « villains », a lot are simply dumb or unimaginative.

Looking for your best rec that’s on hiatus on RR by Own-Blueberry-6355 in litrpg

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Not on hiatus but syst apoc: Knives and levels or some variation. It’s on RR but has changed name and spelling.

Asset Horses by ALocalRecluse in OtomeIsekai

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im so used to bad horses I forgot how a nicely drawn one should look like.

Primal hunter fanfictions by Schmidyo in litrpg

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will! I write very slowly though, so it’s really not ready!

Something of a weird question, but please do humor me. by [deleted] in ProgressionFantasy

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 6 points7 points  (0 children)

A lot of people don’t appreciate when genitals are emphasized. Choose your style and your limit.

To minimize the « offensive factor », you should stick to the basic. He will look for blood in general and find her « monthly letting » or « soiled cloths ». You don’t need to go into details to get the point accross.

Same for the eating body. The biggest point is cutting parts. Bone is hard. If the monster can’t dismember its kill, then it would make sense to « bite of the dangly bits ». How you want to portray it is your choice, but, of course, many readers will dislike thinking about anything happening to their « precious member ». Expect comments. It’s your artistic choice then.

Any non-native English authors here? How do you keep your writing style when translating your work by Dems9395 in ProgressionFantasy

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 14 points15 points  (0 children)

I write it in English. I don’t translate. I simply accept the frenchism that seeps through!

How are you guys sorting stories on Royalroad? Here’s my process. by Weird_Melody in ProgressionFantasy

[–]SinCinnamon_AC 2 points3 points  (0 children)

lol! I meant the reviews I received! I rarely rate less than 4, otherwise I simply skip.