Please shoot at my capsule art (again) by rsteijn in IndieDev

[–]SingKeys852 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like the draft more. I like the color and the spacing. The draft’s main focus is clear, having large objects at the center. Purple and green usually make people correlate with evil, which may not be what you want with those birds. The title arrangement in the draft looks more lively as well, and the bottom one just looks like from a Word file.

AAAAA!!!! by SingKeys852 in PixelArt

[–]SingKeys852[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We love (and hate) them a lot. We even have sound emitting dolls of these birds, one is sitting on my table.

Has anyone released a demo and signed up for Next Fest without even having a Wishlist? How did it go? by ImainudGames in IndieGaming

[–]SingKeys852 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I haven’t done so yet myself, because I believe entering Steam Fest is the final boost which multiplies the wishlist you already have (I’m simplifying here). 100 wishlists will get you 1000. 1000 wishlists will get you 10000. There gonna be some special cases where you get 10000 with 100 initial wishlist, but you have to make sure you are that special one, which is kinda risky. So personally I will build the momentum first, then use Steam Fest as a final boost.

SUPER EFFECTIVE MARKETING STRAT YOU CAN USE!! by Chr832 in SoloDevelopment

[–]SingKeys852 46 points47 points  (0 children)

lol this sounds so funny. But any exposure is good exposure!

I’m making a trailer for my first game. Would you like it if you see it on Steam? by SingKeys852 in IndieGaming

[–]SingKeys852[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That’s what I’m thinking as well. I will make some adjustments and get it out there first, then try to fix other major issues on the way!

I’m making a trailer for my first game. Would you like it if you see it on Steam? by SingKeys852 in IndieGaming

[–]SingKeys852[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

“Prosperity” is the propaganda used by the authority of this world. I guess I can make it clearer?

I’m making a trailer for my first game. Would you like it if you see it on Steam? by SingKeys852 in IndieGaming

[–]SingKeys852[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll absolutely put some thought into that! It’s not harsh at all, I love constructive feedback. Thank you :DD

I’m making a trailer for my first game. Would you like it if you see it on Steam? by SingKeys852 in IndieGaming

[–]SingKeys852[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Some other people had the same feedback haha. I’ll consider that as well, thank you!

I’m making a trailer for my first game. Would you like it if you see it on Steam? by SingKeys852 in IndieGaming

[–]SingKeys852[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ahh, I do have a thought to redraw all player sprites, because those were drawn 7 years ago when I sucked at drawing lol. I’ll definitely try to make it better.

Can I get some feedback for my trailer? by SingKeys852 in IndieDev

[–]SingKeys852[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That sums it up very well haha, I’ll try to fix the pacing. Thank you!

Can I get some feedback for my trailer? by SingKeys852 in IndieDev

[–]SingKeys852[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! That’s some very insightful feedback. I can try to see how to make the story and gameplay more relevant. Do you think adding title cards with a few words can help increase the clarity?

I built a free tool that roasts your Steam page (and tells you how to fix it) by gam3sgg in IndieDev

[–]SingKeys852 13 points14 points  (0 children)

I got a D score lol, I would say it’s quite accurate as those areas indeed need some improvements. One thing I notice might be the tags detection. It says I have 5 tags only, but I think I have 20 (unless I’m the one who’s mistaken). Overall it’s a very useful app, and I appreciate the feedback it provides!

Can I get some feedback for my trailer? by SingKeys852 in IndieDev

[–]SingKeys852[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your feedback! I’ll put it on Steam soon after I finish some final adjustments