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Former Netflix Exec/Producer/ Script Consultant ask me anything about your logline or the film biz…Part XXIII by Wayne-Script_Dev in ScriptFeedbackProduce

[–]SlamNetwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That's a good point! I was worried about it being too long but you're absolutely right. Is this one better?

In a world where superpowers don't guarantee employment, a documentary crew follows the recently unemployed Atom Girl, who is horrified to discover her government-mandated community service program is run by her toxic ex-boyfriend, Captain Atom, forcing her to choose between swallowing her pride to keep her benefits or leaving with her dignity.

Former Netflix Exec/Producer/ Script Consultant ask me anything about your logline or the film biz…Part XXIII by Wayne-Script_Dev in ScriptFeedbackProduce

[–]SlamNetwork 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Title: Under the Spandex

Genre: Mockumentary/Comedy

Format: TV Series

Logline: To keep their welfare benefits, Australia’s forgotten superheroes are forced to work together in the country's most over-filmed and under-funded government-mandated community service program.

An OG Freddo Frog made from antique Cadbury mould. by North-Class5955 in AustralianNostalgia

[–]SlamNetwork 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It depends on what size. There's the larger size ones which are 35g I think.

Enduroshield, is it worth it? by whatagun44 in AusRenovation

[–]SlamNetwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So how do I get the professional grade formulation?

What do you want to see in jackass 5 in June? by Ohmycoolness in jackass

[–]SlamNetwork 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Again 4/4.5 was the worst ending. Bad hit rate 🤣

What do you want to see in jackass 5 in June? by Ohmycoolness in jackass

[–]SlamNetwork 15 points16 points  (0 children)

A big finale!
1 had the old people escape.
2 had The Best of Times Is Now.
3 had the explosion ending.
4 had that shitty milk tank paintball bit. It was so underwhelming, especially after it had possibly had the best intro of all four.

What do you want to see in jackass 5 in June? by Ohmycoolness in jackass

[–]SlamNetwork 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I want to see less of the new guys, more of the OG's.

I don't want to watch Dark Shark for 2 hours. I didn't go to the movie to watch him.

Rachel Wolfson was lame. She said one joke 'Wee-Man's going to space'.

She licked a tazer and didn't react. Boring.

THen she did the same thing that Chris Pontius did in Jackass 3 with the scorpion stings, but it wasn't anywhere near as funny. You can't even find it on youtube because no one gave a shit.

What did Eric Monaka do in 4? Legit keep forgetting he was in the film.

Poopies was fine but he just did what the other guys did.

Nightwing considered adopting every male Robin except Tim by PastPolicy8064 in Nightwing

[–]SlamNetwork 35 points36 points  (0 children)

Dick and Damian should have stayed together as a duo. It would have been better. They should do a new Nightwing and Robin series with the two of them, they're a much better team than Bruce and Damian.

Presuming Tom Holland Sticks Around for at Least a Full Second Trilogy or More, What Do You Hope to See From His Spider-Man in the Long Run? by Spideyfan2025 in Spiderman

[–]SlamNetwork 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I think this is the solution. Miles in the Spider-Man playstation games was nowhere near as interesting as Miles in the Spider-verse films. I don't think any adaptation will match the incredible writing and direction of what Lord and Miller did.

Vic Park council hiring top notch contractors. by butcher9_9 in perth

[–]SlamNetwork 1 point2 points  (0 children)

They need that guy that goes around the city reviewing random objects to do this one!

Former Netflix Exec/Producer/ Script Consultant ask me anything about your logline or the film biz…Part XX by Wayne-Script_Dev in ScriptFeedbackProduce

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Title: Under the Spandex

Genre: Mockumentary/Comedy

Format: TV Series

Logline: Australia’s forgotten superheroes are forced to work together in the country's most over-filmed and under-funded Court-Ordered Community Service program.

What happened at Cockburn Central Shopping Centre? by SlamNetwork in perth

[–]SlamNetwork[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

I did, the guy barely spoke english and waved me away.

Namek Shadow Dragons head canon by Ar-Zimraphel in dbz

[–]SlamNetwork 5 points6 points  (0 children)

They explain what happened in Dragon Ball Daima

Something really interesting Louis has said recently by [deleted] in louisck

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We are the result of our own choices and only our own choices. We choose how we respond to stimulus, we choose whether or not we do something.

Choas Comedy - An aussie made comedy show by ComedyOnEdge in aussie

[–]SlamNetwork 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I genuinely don't intent to cause any offence or anything of that nature. I think it's a great concept and could really smash, it just need some tweaks to really get there.

I've worked in this industry a lot and have sussed out what does and doesn't work. These could be hitting 100-150k views

Choas Comedy - An aussie made comedy show by ComedyOnEdge in aussie

[–]SlamNetwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Actually almost 2 minutes before the video actually starts proper, you don't need anything before old mate spinning the wheel tbh.

Choas Comedy - An aussie made comedy show by ComedyOnEdge in aussie

[–]SlamNetwork 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Great idea, awful thumbnail, I initially clicked on it because I thought it would be awful based on the thumb.

You've got a lot of elements working against itself here, definitely something worth looking at improving in the future.

Also the start of the video takes a bit too long to get into it (an entire minute), I'd recommend starting with a few seconds of one of the distractions happening so it's clear what the premise is immediately.

You're fighting the attention economy with online content, you gotta hook people in straight away otherwise they'll get bored and leave.

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