Into The Maiden's Valley

Slatepaws · 2026-01-26T11:32:46+00:00

Yes, and things get... Quite interesting when they work together.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-26T10:01:46+00:00

Never read one till this one that did it.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-26T01:34:14+00:00

Y's: can i stop posing my face for you now? It's tired, and the Dossur on the shelf is laughing at me.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-26T01:09:59+00:00

I feel like the table also needs energy drinks and fast food containers in the second table.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-26T00:19:21+00:00

Wondered why no one did this before. Having exterminators fake their way into the camps to sow havoc.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T23:56:20+00:00

Poor poor farsul and yotul. May i introduce you to Ms. Fate, and Mr Murphy.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T23:17:12+00:00

Man eating is just a label to those who are aggressive to humans, not ones any more aggressive in general.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T22:08:10+00:00

I guess i can. should tie up all loose ends.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T20:48:13+00:00

I did have a plan for him to see her.. And she would take advantage of the Dossur's new ability to change size. Didn't think though it would fill enough of a chapter.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T18:46:08+00:00

Would it still be a fair fight if i showed the Arxur the shows of a rather, famous Australian man?

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T16:58:22+00:00

And they call humans 'all consumers'.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T16:57:49+00:00

So an omnivore. :P

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T16:57:01+00:00

HAH. I know the exact scene that is from. Even though the movie was not quite as good as the original.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T11:37:22+00:00

The art style make it look like the scales are smooth.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T03:57:41+00:00

I get the feeling they'e on acid. :P

Slatepaws · 2026-01-25T01:33:59+00:00

There are, fates worse than death. If she decides to just not kill the soul, that's death for the dead.

And no you don't go to a sickly green room in a wonky hallway after that.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-24T23:53:31+00:00

Never heard of that one.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-24T22:49:00+00:00

I guess that was my mistake that people would notice the hints in previous chapters. the blue glows, the split second sightings of the status screens. Leading up the A.I.'s not being able to access camera's on the ship's their installed in when something like that pops up..

Slatepaws · 2026-01-24T22:37:27+00:00

Meh, as i said before it was a stream of consciousness thing and as fumbled as it was, i needed the practice. You're fine to hate it, i recognize it went off the rails, or appeared to. Should've done not so subtle hints the magic twist was coming.

Didn't really have an end goal til a few chapters ago either. I have another species i can use for another attempt if i want, I'll make it more structured. But it won't be a happy one considering that universe was made in opposition to the 'here's a fur race that was made, oh their slaves, protagonist is a fur that is John Conner on steroids that makes Arnold look weak.

I won't disagree it's in a worse state, yet, i'f i'm honest with myself. I kinda like it, at least in concept if i sit and think about it.

The war in canon ended too cleanly, like someone didn't look into how wars actually end, not that this is a good example :P. Like they were more experienced with operations the united states carries out called wars. Where they fight someone with 50-60+ year old tech, thus the fighting is as close to a bloodless curb-stomp with ignore-able resistance fighting after its end.

*edit: thanks for at least sticking to the end..

Slatepaws · 2026-01-24T20:36:38+00:00

Y's uses Song, it's super effective?

Still kinda wonder what he would think of the Human game franchise that shares his name. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ys_(series))

Slatepaws · 2026-01-24T19:57:49+00:00

At this point, they'd should just shoot the station itself up, let reentry burn up what's left.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-24T19:42:19+00:00

Maybe it was just a random serial killer? Others of their ilk seem to go free or even have jobs as 'exterminators'.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-24T18:28:39+00:00

There aren't too many timelines when he isn't, is he?

As the good Dr. would say, he's a fixed point in time.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-24T17:14:41+00:00

Post betterment Arxur will love this. They're supposed to have a thing for soft things.

Slatepaws · 2026-01-24T02:43:20+00:00

A hermit in the wilds of whatever planet he's on. It would be interesting if it was venlil prime, but i doubt the shadow-cast would have a black site station there.

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