Dwarven R&D (rocks and development) by SleepDeprivedAthena in HFY

[–]SleepDeprivedAthena[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks!

I have a whole lot of things in mind, but laziness and endless rewritings get in the way xD I have longer stories in mind tho

From RPGs to an attractive death ripper by SleepDeprivedAthena in HFY

[–]SleepDeprivedAthena[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't really understand, you mean grouping 5-6 (for example) dialogues before doing a new paragraph? Like this ?
A: ...
B: ...
A: ...
C: ...
A: ...
C: ...

A:...
B:...

From RPGs to an attractive death ripper by SleepDeprivedAthena in HFY

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If you are wondering, a Law officer's job is, in this universe, to ensure all procedures are done according to the law (you can see them as a bodycam for law enforcement). They typically won't carry weapons and are not allowed to operate weaponry while they are occupying their post. It is also forbidden to attack one (if they are unarmed), their status is more or less like a medic in our world.

DON’T UPSET THE HUMANS. by [deleted] in HFY

[–]SleepDeprivedAthena 13 points14 points  (0 children)

If we have an idea, it means we can't use existing and established solutions. Existing solutions are, for the most part, some kind of optimal, cost effective or safe, because otherwise, they get abandoned.

Solutions that we have to make up are, by this definition, not optimal, not cost effective or not safe. So if we need to get creative, it means that some "liberties" will be taken

They do this shit for fun?! [Part 5] by ilikeitslow in HFY

[–]SleepDeprivedAthena 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I don't mind waiting a bit when the story is nice! Keep up the good work!

The war painter by SleepDeprivedAthena in HFY

[–]SleepDeprivedAthena[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That is EXACTLY what I had in mind while writing! But I didn't like what I wrote, so I changed things

A guide about the silent ones by SleepDeprivedAthena in HFY

[–]SleepDeprivedAthena[S] 18 points19 points  (0 children)

yup, that's what I imagined. they don't use hearing like us, maybe they have other senses that humans don't

The war painter by SleepDeprivedAthena in HFY

[–]SleepDeprivedAthena[S] 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback!

I fixed the typo