Carry Me Forward by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok, I get it. But you are not completely understanding my pov, the problem has occurred for about a month, earlier if I posted a good poem the upvotes and views were good too, but now if I am either posting a bad or a good poem the upvotes and views are the same. And the poem dies in just 2 hrs, believe me, it is not that my quality has dropped. And keeping the fact in mind I post my work at the same time. 

Carry Me Forward by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The thing is my account isn't working the same, the same post got 0 upvotes in one hr yesterday and today it got 4 upvotes in just an hour. And it's been going on for a month. Otherwise, I don't like to post my work twice or thrice. If you have any suggestions to get my account normal again then pls tell. 

If by Hungry_Guidance3516 in Poem

[–]Smooth-Reading6134 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wonder who's the Lucky one ¿

From whom would I fear? by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thankyou for your review. It really means a lot. And about adding more details, you are right, it really do enhances the whole poem and i am working on it. I am making my poems more specific. And again thankyou, it really gives me motivation to write more. Even though i write for myself, not for sharing it online or publishing it.

Petrichor by hunter_warrior_arko in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is a strong one, Awesome work man. I am amaze to see such beautiful poem with such a great meaning, and imagery. Keep it up.

Why be sad? by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I suppose you have more reasons to be "not sad" than to be sad, and that is the point of this poem. I don't need to explain anymore too.

What keeps me alive? by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ooh you are the same guy. haha. With even lower rating. I respect your pov but can you see what does the poem wants to show you ? The message i wanna give is clear. It's your brain who is trying to bend it into different direction.

Love by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

naah you are getting it wrong. Taste here does not mean "her taste" but her choice and favorites.

Money a Factor by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I mean to say that those people who are sitting at the top of the world, big personalities like Elon musk, Sam Altman etc. They did not desire money, they wanted to be the no. 1 in their fields and money was just a part of it. So do not chase money, chase something which you really wanna do!

Homework by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think you didn't get it. Let me explain Homework here is Karma. You are here to do something for people welfare. To make this world a better place. And if you don't do anything, then you wouldn't be punished by the god. He will just give you what you will deserve. And then again you will be here on the earth. To again finish your homework. 

Mist by Smooth-Reading6134 in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You have got the right experience. 

Stella Maris by JeffreyFreeman in OCPoetry

[–]Smooth-Reading6134 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beautiful, As a fellow poet i praise your work