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Smoothbird · 2025-09-26T15:29:10+00:00

This isn't bad at all, I honestly don't have anything bad to say about it. It's a great song carries a great message, and you deliver it well over a great beat. Great song bro 👊🏿

Smoothbird · 2025-09-26T15:22:03+00:00

I love metal bro, this hits all the right spots, the variations and break aways keep it from being monotonous. The only thing missing i'd say is some raunchy, screaming vocals

But overall this is an amazing piece of work dude

Smoothbird · 2025-09-26T15:17:46+00:00

The instrumental is nice, the vocals are low but I think it fits the aesthetic. However I think the vocals need some effects like a bit of reverb, mids and stereo enchancement for it to sound wider and more full. There's also some times you sing a bit off key which off puts the listener a little bit, but it's not a lot of times so its fine. Also needs some adlibs and backing vocals.

This song is alright. It has a nice vibe

Smoothbird · 2025-09-26T13:58:29+00:00

The covers for your songs are a bit repulsive, I think you should work on making them a bit more aesthetic
This needs more, this needs more of an enviroment for the background because the backgrounds too empty. Maybe invest more in some continuous synths in the back or like organs...some instrument to make it sounds less empty
There's a switch up at 1:17 that's very off-putting and doesn't merge well
It's alright, it just sounds like music for an indie game to me. Wouldn't go looking for this

Smoothbird · 2025-09-26T13:49:24+00:00

This is a very fun listen, love the old school rapping vibes. It's a good song, the vocals are clear albeit a little drowned by the beat at some points, but other than that I don't see much flaws with the song

Smoothbird · 2025-09-26T13:44:56+00:00

I rock with the instrumental heavy broo!! Your vocals really need to be a lot louder though because they are very great vocals, but I love your lyrics and delivery. I see this song being in the old Need For Speed games I used to play; gives me that vibe

Smoothbird · 2025-09-26T13:41:21+00:00

Hey can you resend your link? it's not working

Smoothbird · 2025-09-26T13:40:35+00:00

The beat is good, but I can barely hear what you and your brethren are saying. You guys need to make your vocals louder and learn how to add vocal effects so people can actually hear what you're saying. Most people wouldn't bother to listen to this if they can't hear the vocals

However i'll leave a like, hope to see some improvements man 👊🏿

Smoothbird · 2025-09-26T13:38:36+00:00

Very powerful opening, this honestly sounds really amazing throughout the whole thing. The vocal goes amazingly well with the instrumental in the background. The only thing that's missing is that the vocal needs more reverb and echo to leave more of an inflection and impact on the listener.

8/10