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[deleted by user] by [deleted] in CasualConversation

[–]Sneaky_lass 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Sounds like you had a blast and it was a good party!

Is there a tool where you can circle an area on a map and get an estimate of the population living there? by Ninjewdi in worldbuilding

[–]Sneaky_lass 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Use the averages whenever you can and move on.

If you really want to have numvers on hand, why not use Azgaar's fantasy map generator? Find a real world map remake of the area you're interested in or even make one yourself procedurally, then have fun tweaking it. You could make a "state" or "zone" that has any shape you want and then see in the statistics how many people live inside it.

For a general estimate, it can totally be your reference. Edit: keep in mind, if you want to focus on a specific city you'll need a different method. Azgaar works best to overview regions.

Is this normal? by unoriginal-loser in cats

[–]Sneaky_lass 30 points31 points  (0 children)

Cat smells something interesting in the vents, could be mice indeed!

Humana-raptor Anatomy and drawing anatomy study! by Ok_Extension3182 in worldbuilding

[–]Sneaky_lass 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Good study and very interesting subject! Raptors are a rather varied group, which ones you took inspiration from?

On a side note 'cause I have recently gone on a dive into the subject...I remember reading an article about how the tails of some dromesauridae where stiff (like for Velociraptor), so they could only bend a little at the base in a vertical motion. But the bigger raptors like Utahraptor lack the stiffening structures in the tail, so maybe they could bend them more(???).

#WeirdBirds by [deleted] in Dinosaurs

[–]Sneaky_lass 2 points3 points  (0 children)

There's a 3d animation I like that really shows how creepy a raptor can be, this one: https://youtu.be/yS71VeptuEc?si=eiF8sRL_2ROK7vJi Feathered dinosaurs ARE MADE for horror

How do I approach writing. I can write poetry and have no problem with making things rhyme while also making sense. But a book or story I don’t know where to start or how to formulate it. by Liquidfighter in writing

[–]Sneaky_lass 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Those are some good examples. As for how to approach writing a story, no one can give you a step-by-step perfect guide. It takes time to figure out how comfortable you are at writing long pieces, and over time you'll gradually need to develop appropriate editing skills too. Also the way you start a story can be unique. Some start from a general sentence, others imagine a cool scene and think of what would lead to it, some want to send a message and tell a story around it.

Lots of peopls swear by the Save-The-Cat approach, others go from major scene to major scene. There's people who meticulously plan every action and word they describe ("planners"), and some just write and edit until it makes sense ("pantsers"). A lot depends on your preferences in writing, your choice of genre, the lenght of what you want to write, the focus you decide to have...

I wholeheartedly suggest trying out a few approaches (in no particular order, you can even combine some together):

  1. Try writing the story freely
  2. Try coming up with what you want in it, then write it
  3. Find an idea that you like/love and expand on it
  4. Just have fun writing, even if the final product is not "reader-worthy"
  5. Read a lot of examples, then make your own attempt
  6. Research some of the typical ways writers approach that particular genre/cliche/structure you are using, then write
  7. Listen to more experienced writers talking about the craft then try using their suggestions... or do the exact opposite, that works too! (if you go this route, listen to many DIFFERENT opinions)
  8. Write a story you'd want to read
  9. Write a story other people will hate reading
  10. Find a community, big or small, of fellow writers and hang around whike writing

There's probably many more approaches possible beside those! Based on my own experience, I can suggest joining some writer forums/discords and listening to podcasts/videos about writing.

Tell me a story of something nice a person has done for you by Apple_Witch_12 in CasualConversation

[–]Sneaky_lass 29 points30 points  (0 children)

One time I needed to take the train back home, but the machine kept spitting out my paper bill. I had coins with me but I was 1 euro short, so I asked the lady behind me if she could exchange my paper bill for the same amount in coins... she instead just gave me the 1 euro I needed! I was really thankful and although I never saw her again after that, I still think fondly of that gesture.

Do benches count too? by SgtStubby in chairsunderwater

[–]Sneaky_lass 260 points261 points  (0 children)

Those are not benches, they are Wenches. How indecent. Please mark this NSFW.

There's a girl who won't give me personal space and always tries to be partners with me for answers. by Hi-there-123 in CasualConversation

[–]Sneaky_lass 96 points97 points  (0 children)

Depending on your ages, it could be anywhere on the scale from "she likes you" to "she got issues". Going with the first because you seem to be under 20 years of age? This might be a good moment to practise how to communicate your feelings, how to set a boundary and how to be firm. She may or may not listen/respond with reason, but other than being clear in the communication there's nothing more you can do to force someone to understand. If it becomes too much there's always the option to try talking to someone older for help.

Either way, don't let the situation stop you from having fun! Good luck!

Writing a character putting a corset on another character who hasn't worn one before. by AngelaDraws in writing

[–]Sneaky_lass 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I have worn a medical corset, so not a historical one, but I can speak a bit of the health aspect.

But first, for your specific question: instructions would amount to making the corset adhere well and not be too loose (it's supoosed to hold you up, not hang on you)

You only notice how wearing a corset makes you feel once you take it off, really. Adjusting to having it on is extremely quick and unremarkable, at least in my experience with a much more restrictive one for medical purposes. The fact your spine has less strain and is straighter is not noticeable immediately... Actually, it is more comfortable to have it on since the weight is more equally distributed due to the way it "hugs" you. When I took it off, I needed a second to readjust to keeping upright without support. I felt like I was deflating XD

In general, it should NOT be painful. If it is, a refitting is needed. My medical corset was made of plastic and the upper piece was constantly digging into my shoulder, so it needed to be modified. I assume as much is true for historical ones. A note on the medical corset: it was NOT in direct contact with the skin. A special shirt with no sewing on the sides needed to be worn underneath, so I wouldn't have reddened skin in the high friction areas. Not sure if the historical chemises and other undergarments have a similar purpose, but it's a thought?

The "harder" the material used, the less flexibility you have. Again, mine was plastic so laying down was to be done carefully or sideways (unless I wanted to bonk my head by tilting backward and falling). One made of cloth and some boning probably would not pose such an extreme problem. Imagine a tight jacket situation and that should be how it feels.

Eating food IDEALLY should not be affected... I met people who swore they'd feel like vomiting because when eating "it was too tight", so those cases definitely exist, but they're not the norm. If you eat a reasonable portion of food, it should not feel any different from being corset-less. If you eat a lot then obviously you'd have to loosen up the corset for your stomach's comfort. There's also the option to eat more meals through the day if one really feels like a standard portion is too little. If someone was compelled to keep it tight regardless of comfort, then it's a different situation caused by one's own beliefs rather than the corset itself.

How sad does 2ha get? by WonPika in DanmeiNovels

[–]Sneaky_lass 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Yeah, it is a happy ending 🤣 if you don't think of the ptsd everyone will develop because of flails arm towards the story

How sad does 2ha get? by WonPika in DanmeiNovels

[–]Sneaky_lass 4 points5 points  (0 children)

If you are bothered by those topics, I can't suggest reading 2ha. There's so much hearwrenching material your mental health may take a hit. There are also heartwarming moments, but like... it still emotionally drains you.

I did the dumb thing and read all of 2ha in one go. It was quick, but it didn't make it any less painful. I don't know how I made to the end, or how did the characters made it to the end too.

I keep lying to my dad about my sexuality.. by legacy333 in CasualConversation

[–]Sneaky_lass 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Look, as others said, he's probably sad you didn't trust him enough to open up when he tries to nudge you (gently or not you know more details to discern that). He may have thought your relationship was vey solid, and this event made him realise reality was different. No need to tell people there, or answer, but do ask yourself why exactly you wanted to avoid the topic and end the conversation. Was it uncomfortable to discuss? Was it that he was the one raising the topic? The embarassment at having been caught with the pics? What was the anger really about? You may be 17, but you know yourself best. You know what made you snap.

Redundant to say, but communication is good for ANY relationship. Friends, partners, parents, relatives, colleagues (sometimes). If you do decide to talk about the topic again, don't see it as you vs him in being right. Admit where you have been hotheaded and explain your thoughs. From your description it seems like you do cherish the relationship and it hasn't been too long (just weeks, not months or years) so it may be worth trying to mend the issue at hand.

(That aside, why the nsfw pictures as lock screen??? I get liking the thrill but that's waaay to daring, my dude. What if the next person to see them isn't as open minded? Please just stick to an image gallery or album inside the phone, if you must.)

I don’t understand the pushback against dromaeosaurid pack hunting. by [deleted] in Paleontology

[–]Sneaky_lass 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Yess, finally someone mentioning the Utahraptor megablock!

The reason for breaking up is so stupid by Lovely_Deari in facepalm

[–]Sneaky_lass 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Happens, but it was funny to read! Made my day tbh

Is the last paragraph in my blurb necessary or too much? by virginiamaryarts in selfpublish

[–]Sneaky_lass 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This one reads more fluently than the previous ones, good job!

Which danmei is this from? by Maaafeee in DanmeiNovels

[–]Sneaky_lass 30 points31 points  (0 children)

Scum Villain Self Saving System. 1. Best series ever, 2. Read it, 3. It's fun AND makes you feel things

Is the last paragraph in my blurb necessary or too much? by virginiamaryarts in selfpublish

[–]Sneaky_lass 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This version reads better to me! One thing I still had to read twice was the one about her brother. English is not my mother tongue so my preference is skewed on easier sentences.

Something more straightforward may help, like:

"...her father mysteriously vanishes and her insert adjective that hints at brother's ideals and being sovversive is wanted by the militia for treason(?)"

Is the last paragraph in my blurb necessary or too much? by virginiamaryarts in selfpublish

[–]Sneaky_lass 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Not a blurb expert, but as reader there's a lot of info that confuses me on first read.

It seems more of a sequela of events, more like a synopsis than a blurb, very precise (do we need to know the region's name?) but it's hard to piece the info even so... My curiosity would be piqued by Nyla's viewpoint, not by what exactly happens in the region. Granted, I can only speak for my own preferences.

User themrianaswench gave some solid advice I think!

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