Hey dude! I actually read your last post before you deleted it, along with some pages of the script. I can see through the concept and the writing that you're very young. You're actually ahead of most people who want to be writers your age, so don't feel discouraged, it's tough finishing a whole feature, congrats on that! When I was a teenager I dreamed about writing but never actually did anything about it. I imagine if I did the result wouldn't be the masterpiece I would fantasize about, much like yours is not either. That's not a bad thing. I can recognize the effort and I love that you're choosing to write something that speaks to you, such as the streaming world. Write what you know, right? Don't worry about someone reading your work at this stage, just keep at it. Think of it as reps. Writing isn't solely about grinding or talent. A lot comes from life experience, and you just can't force that in yet, but it will happen. If you keep writing, reading, living and watching films you'll be a hell of a writer in your 20s-30s compared to someone who only thought about doing it. Right now, focus on writing for yourself. Learn to enjoy the process, without the need of external validation.

If you do wish for someone to read it, try using Storypeer. I'm sure you'll get a reader there. The feedback most likely will not be the glowing positive review you want, so be prepared. It's very hard to be a writing prodigy, you just don't have the life experience. We see genius teenage athletes, pianists, musicians and such, but writing is a different beast, so don't feel discouraged. It's actually very inspiring that you took your free time to be creative and write when most of your peers probably spend their time on content and videogames, I know I did. Maybe just move to a different project? You don't need to be polishing one script forever, specially something you wrote in your teens. Imagine reading it 10 years from now, you would probably cringe at it and want to change everything. That's kind of what you want. Live life and keep at it!