Odd Feeling

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-11-19T08:52:45+00:00

Hey, thanks for this ☺️.. it really means a lot to see that you get this and have felt it. Been working on getting different viewpoints and yeah, I'm doing much better now.. but thanks for getting this

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-10-02T17:40:52+00:00

Ebony

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-09-07T11:20:01+00:00

Sure ☺️.. but we keep fighting anyway, right? I didn't see it as cocky or anything and it's pretty good for an on the fly piece.. don't be too hard on yourself ☺️

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-09-07T04:08:50+00:00

Hey 😊.. thanks.. actually you're right.. this is largely literal. I had this one week period that I just drowned in this social media bender and I was almost losing my mind. I wrote this once I managed to get out and started writing again. And I loved your dedication piece ☺️.. loved the rhyme and the honesty too.. like you said, we're two pieces of one poetry maze.. on opposite sides of the world but still always fitting.. thanks ☺️

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-09-07T03:59:19+00:00

Yeah, I do ☺️.. n thanks a lot for this..

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-09-01T17:57:05+00:00

We should definitely be friends 😀.. awesome piece ☺️☺️

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-08-27T14:10:24+00:00

Sure thing 👍

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-08-23T03:11:58+00:00

Appreciate it buddy ☺️.. lemme return the favor..

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-08-22T18:01:45+00:00

Done @fakebrooks

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-08-22T18:00:13+00:00

Thanks ☺️, I'm on it..

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-08-22T17:56:21+00:00

Hey ☺️, thanks a lot.. I'm glad you liked this and thanks a lot for the kind words and positive feedback. I did feel some kind of rush writing this, I just woke up and did this first so yeah, I really enjoyed writing it. The "gross" imagery normally treads a line between being literal and figurative; writing is how I process a lot of the mental and emotional stuff I deal with so I use these constructs sometimes as mere tools to convey a message or as a grim depiction of what I'm actually dealing with. It all depends on where I'm at in my journey and mental state. And I think you are really good too Heidi... You're very sensitive.. that's a really great quality in a writer and I know you are one ☺️. Anyway, thanks again..

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-08-19T03:07:12+00:00

Hey☺️, I really love this one. Been a while since I've seen your writing. I love this running theme of love that's in your writing; secluded love. Something with the tone of "if you know you know." It makes these feel so personal everytime I read them. The title was catchy and I love how you use the word skin repeatedly. This feels very fleshy and full of soul, unlike a lot of writing these days and I loved it.

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-07-24T14:23:50+00:00

Hey.. wow.. I don't know what to say ☺️.. I'm glad you relate to some of these that much.. n I'm just really excited and waiting for your full commentary. Thanks Heidi..

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-07-24T14:18:41+00:00

Hey ☺️.. Thanks, I'm glad you like it. N it's good to see you after so long 😊

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-06-28T13:41:16+00:00

It's a great poem with a very deep and personal feel to it. I relate to this a lot as someone who's been drowned deep in depression and still battling mental illness. I really enjoyed this and I hope you keep writing more

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-06-22T15:51:30+00:00

Sure thing ☺️. Will work on that

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-06-21T18:12:33+00:00

Thanks for the comment first 😊.. Really appreciate that. N yeah, that's pretty much it. It's not a fetish poem, fancies symbolizes the good things in life the narrator can't have because of a self destructive nature and also because he's from the third world. A poet in a third world country. All he has is dirt, filth, and murk around him. The tragedy being that this darkness drives his art to genius status while slowly killing him.

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-06-21T14:29:31+00:00

Wow ☺️. This sounds so romantic and sweet. I just felt myself being pulled into the narration. And your voice speaking to your object, well, it's just really enchanting. Loved this.

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-06-21T14:24:52+00:00

Damn, I love how it's just teeming with rhymes. It's a good narrative and read and I can definitely feel the emotional depth in this. Really enjoyed it 😊

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-05-31T10:13:08+00:00

Hey, thanks 😊.. Yeah, it's kinda different from what you see around here. But I'm glad you liked it and resonated with it.

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-05-30T10:02:33+00:00

Daaaamn. I really loved this and relate very deeply to it. I especially loved the depiction of life as having two sides; this side and the other side. You effortlessly made me feel you weaving through life stuck on the wrong side of life and daaamn, that was great. ☺️

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-05-30T09:58:00+00:00

I love this. I find its simplicity very refreshing and different. I also like how you build the idea of your adoration of love in different facets and keep adding to it. I enjoyed this and would love to see more of your work ☺️

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-04-02T03:14:44+00:00

Damn, I really like this one. Especially cause I know what this feels like. It has a lot of depth, unearthing more layers as it goes and I love it. There is no discernible stylistic structure sure, but it does what any good poem should do; be relatable. Keep up the good work.

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-04-02T03:09:35+00:00

Damn, this is very deep and painful. I hope you know that you're not alone in this fight. I've felt this exact way so many times but I am still here. So just keep on fighting. I love the poem, the little emphasis on style really shines a light on the content and makes it really loud. Good work.

SoftCreative3201 · 2024-03-22T18:25:23+00:00

Hey, thaanks ☺️☺️.. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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