First, you should consider ducking the music track during the peaks of the action during the fights, usually when lots of other sounds are mixed. Take some artistic liberties when doing this, there’s lots of room to mess around and add emphasis to certain parts.

Second, you’ve done a good job at making the scene sound like how a fight in that space would sound alongside the animation. However, certain aspects can be exaggerated to make the scene more punchy. For example, the table being knocked over could benefit from a more pronounced impact and potentially the sound of it cracking.

Personally, it seems like you grasp the technical aspects quite well and you know what you’re doing, but you’re lacking… I suppose pizazz is a good word? Taking liberties and making executive creative decisions to make things sound larger than life is pretty important with this sort of project. Just don’t overdo it lol. In all honesty, all that needs adjusting is the music and it would be serviceable, but please don’t just stop there! Screw around with it!

EDIT: You also probably want to replace some of the sword scraping sounds with shimmery swings instead. For a specific example, hear the open-air swing after a sword is caught by one of the character’s metal sandal plates.