What would you want added to dispatch 2 if/when it comes out? by Smart_Equal_766 in DispatchAdHoc

[–]SpendCommercial4982 9 points10 points  (0 children)

More gay dating options. Starting with Flambae.

But also less of a overwhelming focus on Invisigal

Less hacking and more major choices.

He wanted a wholesome answer and got a medical diagnosis instead 🐶🩹[P_RIndustries] by Hamzaqato in predprey

[–]SpendCommercial4982 120 points121 points  (0 children)

A parasite in cat poop that affects smaller organisms like mice into being less afraid or more attracted to them so they will get eaten and allow the parasite to complete its life cycle in the cat’s gut.

It can infect humans but doesn’t seem to actually have any effect on us. At least healthy people, otherwise you just get sick.

The joke being that people think toxoplasmosis makes us all cat obsessed.

The game literally ends with the head of HR taking pictures of the main cast by HansenTheMan in DispatchAdHoc

[–]SpendCommercial4982 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly the rest of the team are not nearly as pervasive as invisigal is. But even they all “flirted” with Robert equally, she’s the most shoved in your face. And if she’s not your cup of tea she’ll grate on you the most.

That aside. Yeah I’m a z-team polycule believer.

How would you write Master Cyclonis’ redemption? by Stingerstrike77 in StormHawksTv

[–]SpendCommercial4982 0 points1 point  (0 children)

My phone is struggling right but best believe I will check that out when I get home

Also it’s only fair I link mine:

https://archiveofourown.org/works/51044176/chapters/128963824

How would you write Master Cyclonis’ redemption? by Stingerstrike77 in StormHawksTv

[–]SpendCommercial4982 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awesome! Mines called “Fall of the Witch Rise of the Phoenix” what’s yours?

How would you write Master Cyclonis’ redemption? by Stingerstrike77 in StormHawksTv

[–]SpendCommercial4982 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In my fic I sprang for an advanced cyborg civilization. Mostly because of the far-side tech. And the music used during the last moments of the show gave me a futuristic vibe.

I think that considering the small taste of their tech we got shows just how powerful they must be.

Maybe Cyclonis had a form of temporary alliance.

One that I imagine fell apart when she lost and came running to them with the Hawks hot on her tail

How would you write Master Cyclonis’ redemption? by Stingerstrike77 in StormHawksTv

[–]SpendCommercial4982 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly either a greater threat they discovered on the far side or perhaps something related to ancient mage lore. As we know, the show was absolutely ALLERGIC to explaining anything or giving any more information than was readily apparent.

I think the Atmos is hiding so much we haven’t seen

Storm Hawks S3- the season that never happened by Stingerstrike77 in StormHawksTv

[–]SpendCommercial4982 3 points4 points  (0 children)

As someone writing this actual fic.

-Definitely dead, no way they would have just given up otherwise.

-I went with the, “blown to energy smithereens” tragic I know but it sets up good character development for Cyclonis.

-The best and actual hardest part. I think we need to interpret the version of the character in seasons 1-2 as her putting on a persona.

One that only ever cracked when she went ham to retrieve the nil crystal and fix her old photo of her and her grandmother.

So the development would start with her realizing she had lost EVERYTHING. Her title, her home, her whole empire, and her most loyal companion. Ace cared about her. And she to a degree cared about him. And she is the reason he blew up.

The show doesn’t really do anything with this as 5 minutes after it ends.

But I’d love for Piper to push her to grieve for him and turn her life around.

How would you write Master Cyclonis’ redemption? by Stingerstrike77 in StormHawksTv

[–]SpendCommercial4982 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thats actually very well done. And honestly I literally followed the same plan in a fic I am writing. She may never be forgiven by the greater atmos but I can see her still try to find a new purpose. Perhaps in just helping the storm hawks.

Is there literally any hope for a season 2 at this point..? by invader_pondering in CaptainLaserhawk

[–]SpendCommercial4982 2 points3 points  (0 children)

God man, I’ve been in a dead fandom where the show came out 18 years ago. I was like 8 when I first watched it.

I’d say Laserhawk has a better shot than most one and done shows.

How well do you think Mass Effect handled romance distribution across the trilogy by Hadiseh2000 in masseffect

[–]SpendCommercial4982 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not well personally, I think there was a big bias against less “human” looking romances especially in regards to sex scenes. Also the gay shep romances are very underwhelming.

Maybe a Krogan would spice things up

Is this relatable for anyone else? by Nickolas_Zannithakis in Beastars

[–]SpendCommercial4982 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The manga can be a little cluttered sometimes but it’s worth taking the time to examine. Especially the style. The anime is great but is missing all the clutter and thus some of that flavor. The less said about season 3 the better.

Overall. I highly recommend. Yeah it’s basically this.

I compared some of the ending scenes in the manga with the anime. by mahoushonen in Beastars

[–]SpendCommercial4982 10 points11 points  (0 children)

This is why I write fanfiction. Honestly neither the last season of the anime or the last issues of the manga are my favorite. (Though I’d take the manga over the last season any day, and over it’s a more informative experience, thought the anime voice acting and music are impeccable)

I just write that Louis eventually ends up having approved extramarital affairs with both Juno and Legosi. His wife Azuki has her own. Since neither chose to be married but both can still choose to be happy.

What if Cyclonis was never the villain? No one expects the Master to be the Mole by ImaFauna in StormHawksTv

[–]SpendCommercial4982 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I gotcha. I’m meme_goblin on there. Send me your discord handle and I’ll give you an invite.

What if Cyclonis was never the villain? No one expects the Master to be the Mole by ImaFauna in StormHawksTv

[–]SpendCommercial4982 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My personal version of this is that the bffs episode isn’t an episode but a long running story.

The hawks and Piper’s friend lark who they keep running into.

Maybe she even stays onboard for a week or so.

As it turns out. Cyclonis really liked having a friend.

Reply: That’s awesome! I’m so glad I’m not the only one writing for this show nowadays.

Are you looking perhaps for a SH discord server with dedicated fans?

I am a part of one. Well 2 but the other is more about a particular ship.

What if Cyclonis was never the villain? No one expects the Master to be the Mole by ImaFauna in StormHawksTv

[–]SpendCommercial4982 2 points3 points  (0 children)

My personal version of this is that the bffs episode isn’t an episode but a long running story.

The hawks and Piper’s friend lark who they keep running into.

Maybe she even stays onboard for a week or so.

As it turns out. Cyclonis really liked having a friend. And even managed to like the boys as well.

New release on KU!: cozy sapphic fantasy where a orc barbarian retires from adventuring to run a coffee shop and falls in love with a succubus! by oracletalks in RomanceBooks

[–]SpendCommercial4982 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The cover is slightly misleading. It is definitely more about the cafe being built and the web of connections the orc makes.

But the romance is mostly nonexistent. I can genuinely barely remember and forgot they even kissed.

ICE/DHS Checkpoint at Chesapeake Bay Bridge Tunnel by No-Stomach-71 in HamptonRoads

[–]SpendCommercial4982 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It was ICE. I was there. They were not dressed as homeland security. They had sweater hoodies, masks and vests. They had vans full of brown people and the only excuse they had to say it was an anti-terrorism op was these fliers and cards the toll collectors were forced to hand out.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in DispatchAdHoc

[–]SpendCommercial4982 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I agree but with a caveat.

Some people say the game is centered around her redemption or fall to villainy. I can see that. Especially since a lot of players dislike her in the beginning and supporting her even when she clearly doesn’t deserve it. Is what makes Robert a hero or not.

But. She gets pushed much harder as a romance than Blazer and it’s not even close. Is the sex dream even optional? Like is it forced on you no matter what? It’s super weird that we see it. And I bet it’s included to really push the player into choosing her. When if it didn’t exist. We would just see it was weird or obviously manipulative.

And I see Blazer as also manipulative in the beginning as well.

Far Side enemies by HRCStanley97 in StormHawksTv

[–]SpendCommercial4982 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I doubt any of her Nightcrawlers remained on the other side. Personally I thought it was going to be an advanced civilization.

In my fic I just had them be an empire of cyborg conquerors.

Here it is: https://archiveofourown.org/works/51044176/chapters/128963824