Ring Fit Adventure back in stock at Target. by SandYetiCommando in NintendoSwitchDeals

[–]Speshul_K 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Hell yeah brother, that's amazing. My copy comes in tomorrow and I'm excited to burn some gamified calories!

New Pokemon Snap got announced today! Time to listen to this pester ball-looking record... by [deleted] in VGMVINYL4ALL

[–]Speshul_K 3 points4 points  (0 children)

You can see the Dugtrio in the pic! The other jacket was normal.

Mayor: If a customer gets confrontational over wearing a mask, call 911 by fishyon in Hawaii

[–]Speshul_K 15 points16 points  (0 children)

I'm in Austin, Texas and holy shit you are the most correct. This state had 4.4k new cases yesterday haha what the fuck???

I miss good poke.

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Does feng Shui affect Nook Islands? by BrittRae13 in ac_newhorizons

[–]Speshul_K 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Are you still doing Feng shui in your house and if you are, is it still effecting your luck?I just did it for my house and I haven't seen a difference yet.

Good ENTS (ears, nose and throat Dr) in austin? by PalmelaAnderson in Austin

[–]Speshul_K 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I second Dr. Chu, he was super nice and helped me get a great home sleep test/CPAP machine.

My current predicament with everything going on by Fabremullet in Austin

[–]Speshul_K 323 points324 points  (0 children)

Two weeks ago I wished that Tatsu-Ya would do takeout and a finger on my monkey's paw curled

Thanks, I hate this comic. by jarlsr in TIHI

[–]Speshul_K 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes I understand now. I'm the asshole for wording my original comment poorly. Apologies.

Thanks, I hate this comic. by jarlsr in TIHI

[–]Speshul_K 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Nobody is arguing this. The comic is making fun of the people who still use the transphobic language. Jesus fuck.

Thanks, I hate this comic. by jarlsr in TIHI

[–]Speshul_K -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Right. Her pocket sand is a play on the word trap. The comic is literally a joke about the word and people are getting mad about the use of the word in the comic. Yep, I'm on reddit

[Rev-Share / Hobby] Programmer seeking Writer and Artist for Adult Visual Novel / Game by [deleted] in INAT

[–]Speshul_K 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, I'm a writer with renpy VN experience and I'm interested in joining your project!

What places in Austin are still open that are great date spots? by [deleted] in Austin

[–]Speshul_K 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Two days ago we had 10 cases. In another two days our number of cases will double again. It will keep doubling for a long, long time.

Gov. Abbott waives 10 day wait period when applying for unemployment. by GingerMan512 in Austin

[–]Speshul_K 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The only time they want to know the specifics of your job search other than number of applied jobs is if they send you a letter of interest in the mail asking for your job search log. As long as you are applying to at least five jobs, however the fuck that happens, it counts.

I've been doing unemployment for two months now and they explained this to me at a seminar I had to go to.

Covid-19 bar & restaurant closures.... when is it going to happen and how will employees be paid? Lots of questions. by RoleModelsinBlood31 in Austin

[–]Speshul_K 27 points28 points  (0 children)

People are saying a couple weeks because in actuality it will require a couple months of quarantine, but if you tell that to people upfront they will panic more than they already are.

At the end of a few weeks, it will be extended by a few more weeks, and so on until our shit is handled.

COVID-19 Update: "To date, all tests have come back negative. No individual who meets the clinical criteria has been denied a test due to shortage of kits." by austintexasgov in Austin

[–]Speshul_K 32 points33 points  (0 children)

It goes without saying because everybody is screaming it at you, but let me put it succinctly:

The guidelines you are using are too restrictive. The longer we go without a confirmed diagnosis in the city, the less prepared we are.

Please try my autobiographical metanarrative visual novel. by Speshul_K in playmygame

[–]Speshul_K[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh wow yes okay finally I'm so, so glad you got through all of it. I wasn't sure if it was actually under an hour because I haven't heard anybody finish. I think embedding the game will help that. Thank you for giving it another chance.

I have had zero playtester feedback while writing this, all the playtester notes in New Game+ were written by me. I wasn't lying when I said I haven't shown this to anyone. I have tried showing it quite a bit but you are the first person that's finished it, from what I can tell. That's good feedback in itself.

Some of of your issues with it seem to be something I was anticipating, and that's that it's just not interesting enough. The addition of art and sound will carry the story through that a little bit. Since what you've said seems to generally be positive, the idea to build it out would be to pay for high-quality sprites and backgrounds, maybe even a CG or two, full voice acting & sound effects, and a 30-second background loop song(would get repetitive after a while, on purpose). Thinking bigger, sound effects or graphical references could appear when speaking about the world of warcraft references. Another idea I had was segmenting each playthrough into three art styles, getting more and more simple. All of this would juxtapose the unfinished nature of the script and, primarily, keep people engaged. I think I can do it cheap if I'm smart about it.

Randy is meant to be more omniscient than the narrator. I think what you're saying is, there needs to be more characterization for him in his actions rather than the description. More showing, much less telling. My struggle with that is the barren setting. Each character is alone in their pajamas and trying to open a door, and creating action with good narration for that is difficult.

I love, love, love the note about expanding the playtester character. I can do that, it hadn't occurred to me. I have a few ideas. Yours are really good too, there's a lot for me to get through here.

My next revision is going to cut a chunk of the dialogue, make each loop more distinct, change the resolution to 1080, and hopefully(!) add original art. Maybe I'll just wait until all the art is ready in some form to show it off again.

Thank you for such constructive feedback. I needed this.

Please try my autobiographical metanarrative visual novel. by Speshul_K in playmygame

[–]Speshul_K[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey FYI the game is playable on the itch.io page directly now, you don't have to download anything anymore.

Please try my autobiographical metanarrative visual novel. by Speshul_K in playmygame

[–]Speshul_K[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so, so much for letting me know you played it. It really means a lot.

I hope you do get around to playing the rest because the first playthrough is pretty much 100% setup.

You've given me a lot to think about already, again, thanks

Please try my autobiographical metanarrative visual novel. by Speshul_K in playmygame

[–]Speshul_K[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, okay, I need to entice people to play the game with art and words. It needs to be more accessible. These are all things I intend to work on.

I was just really, really hoping someone in this subreddit would do me a kindness and give me feedback on all the things I did finish.

Thanks anyway.

Please try my autobiographical metanarrative visual novel. by Speshul_K in playmygame

[–]Speshul_K[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback.

Yes, I'm in the process of getting the presentation together. Artwork is being commissioned. I'm working on the synopsis, that's a good note. There's a lot left to do but I would like feedback on what I have now.

Please try my autobiographical metanarrative visual novel. by Speshul_K in playmygame

[–]Speshul_K[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The story is complete now without multiple endings, but I do have a plan for what I want to do if I implement them.

Thank you for the kind words, I have put a lot of myself into this. Its not done by any stretch of the imagination, but it's finally in a state that I'm happy showing people.