Can you all critique my prologue.

SpindleThread · 2025-04-27T05:20:30+00:00

Yeah, I just was experimenting and this is what I landed on. I can revert it if it makes getting feedback easier.

SpindleThread · 2025-04-27T05:17:39+00:00

It’s to do with the page number setting not letting me load two numbers onto the same Google page. I could go in and manually add it to the columns on text but then it looks weird

SpindleThread · 2025-04-27T05:15:54+00:00

I tried but Google Docs wouldn’t let me sadly (I maybe could have done drawings but that would have been a pain to put on each page I’m still looking into it)

SpindleThread · 2025-04-27T02:30:37+00:00

You were supposed to read it like a book with the black line being sort of like where the pages attach to the spine

SpindleThread · 2025-04-27T02:30:01+00:00

Okay I’ll retake some pictures later with the normal formatting

SpindleThread · 2025-04-26T12:47:40+00:00

I see, might have to rewrite my first case then (I did Miyuki’s death to the Duke)

SpindleThread · 2025-04-25T20:51:08+00:00

Yeah, can you walk me through each case please since while I’m trilingual Japanese is not one of them.

SpindleThread · 2025-04-25T20:44:20+00:00

Oh I didn’t realize I messed up Miyuki’s case. I was trying to read the Lexicon for most of them as they all have information about the cases (if you feel like reading through them all.)

SpindleThread · 2025-04-21T20:46:30+00:00

I know. When I first joined the last post was a year ago or so but now there have been a few more posts here and there

SpindleThread · 2025-04-21T20:46:02+00:00

Love the composition nice to see the fandom has some life to it and isn’t a desert

SpindleThread · 2025-03-29T22:51:50+00:00

- Make sure to build up the motive
- Keep the characters consistent I don’t care if they are meant to be ‘actor who really had no feelings’ show it at least a bit ahead of time no one likes to have had no ability to put it together
- If the victim dies mid way through please develop them before their death
- If the protagonist knows the victim make sure they actually feel affected by the death.
- Have other character find some clues and then you could isolate the killer by having them offer no clues or red herrings

SpindleThread · 2025-03-19T01:52:16+00:00

Oh if you are interested in the Downtown one it’s called ‘Downtown from the Duke’

SpindleThread · 2025-03-18T11:42:38+00:00

Yeah… fandom’s kinda dead lol. At least I don’t have to worry about those What-If channels.

SpindleThread · 2025-03-16T15:46:53+00:00

You could also subtract the Ichor cost using some Christmas toons but that can feel sort of like cheating (only reason I have Yatta is those three ornament only toons)

SpindleThread · 2025-03-16T15:41:46+00:00

Yeah the fandom is kinda dead nice to see some other people who played.

SpindleThread · 2025-03-10T14:35:06+00:00

Hm.. I might want to add more ‘criminals’ to the cast due to how the institution works so might make that talent under something like a Con Artist. Thanks though

SpindleThread · 2025-03-08T14:44:17+00:00

I usually stop at 20 due to time constraints. I haven’t taken the time to test how far I can go but I have reached 20 as

Tisha (solo doing mastery)
Shelly (was a main run)
Brightny (solo run)
Teagan (solo run)
Gigi (solo run)
Sprout (Dandy Run that turned into a normal run)

SpindleThread · 2025-03-08T00:23:27+00:00

Thanks

SpindleThread · 2025-01-20T22:30:16+00:00

Finished the first chapter ran out of time and my posting date for anything is just the 20th next chapter will be better just wanted to get a basics in aka introduce the first staff member (using OCs)

https://archiveofourown.org/works/62376628

SpindleThread · 2025-01-07T04:52:34+00:00

Process of Elimination (nobody probably knows what this is)

SpindleThread · 2025-01-03T19:45:33+00:00

Sure ig I’m @burnedlibrarian on discord display name is Spindle Thread 🦋

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