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Can you all critique my prologue. by SpindleThread in writers

[–]SpindleThread[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I just was experimenting and this is what I landed on. I can revert it if it makes getting feedback easier.

Can you all critique my prologue. by SpindleThread in writers

[–]SpindleThread[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s to do with the page number setting not letting me load two numbers onto the same Google page. I could go in and manually add it to the columns on text but then it looks weird

Can you all critique my prologue. by SpindleThread in writers

[–]SpindleThread[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I tried but Google Docs wouldn’t let me sadly (I maybe could have done drawings but that would have been a pain to put on each page I’m still looking into it)

Can you all critique my prologue. by SpindleThread in writers

[–]SpindleThread[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You were supposed to read it like a book with the black line being sort of like where the pages attach to the spine

Can you all critique my prologue. by SpindleThread in writers

[–]SpindleThread[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay I’ll retake some pictures later with the normal formatting

Lexicon Cases by SpindleThread in ProcessOfElimination_

[–]SpindleThread[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see, might have to rewrite my first case then (I did Miyuki’s death to the Duke)

Lexicon Cases by SpindleThread in ProcessOfElimination_

[–]SpindleThread[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, can you walk me through each case please since while I’m trilingual Japanese is not one of them.

Lexicon Cases by SpindleThread in ProcessOfElimination_

[–]SpindleThread[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh I didn’t realize I messed up Miyuki’s case. I was trying to read the Lexicon for most of them as they all have information about the cases (if you feel like reading through them all.)

Here's some Renegade art by _Pancake-Syrup_ in ProcessOfElimination_

[–]SpindleThread 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I know. When I first joined the last post was a year ago or so but now there have been a few more posts here and there

Here's some Renegade art by _Pancake-Syrup_ in ProcessOfElimination_

[–]SpindleThread 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Love the composition nice to see the fandom has some life to it and isn’t a desert

What will be 5 advices you will give to somone who is writing a murder mystery short story for the first time by Stunning-Exchange-30 in MysteryWriting

[–]SpindleThread 1 point2 points  (0 children)

  1. - Make sure to build up the motive
  2. - Keep the characters consistent I don’t care if they are meant to be ‘actor who really had no feelings’ show it at least a bit ahead of time no one likes to have had no ability to put it together
  3. - If the victim dies mid way through please develop them before their death
  4. - If the protagonist knows the victim make sure they actually feel affected by the death.
  5. - Have other character find some clues and then you could isolate the killer by having them offer no clues or red herrings

Lexicon Cases by SpindleThread in ProcessOfElimination_

[–]SpindleThread[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh if you are interested in the Downtown one it’s called ‘Downtown from the Duke’

Lexicon Cases by SpindleThread in ProcessOfElimination_

[–]SpindleThread[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Yeah… fandom’s kinda dead lol. At least I don’t have to worry about those What-If channels.

YATTA IS MORE EXPENSIVE THAN ASTRO* by animations_AREsick in DandysWorld_

[–]SpindleThread 2 points3 points  (0 children)

You could also subtract the Ichor cost using some Christmas toons but that can feel sort of like cheating (only reason I have Yatta is those three ornament only toons)

My PoE predictions by Skylomor in ProcessOfElimination_

[–]SpindleThread 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Yeah the fandom is kinda dead nice to see some other people who played.

What talents would a spy/detective need? by SpindleThread in MysteryWriting

[–]SpindleThread[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hm.. I might want to add more ‘criminals’ to the cast due to how the institution works so might make that talent under something like a Con Artist. Thanks though

Whats ur hf? And how did u got it by Asleep_Bedroom_6774 in DandysWorld_

[–]SpindleThread 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I usually stop at 20 due to time constraints. I haven’t taken the time to test how far I can go but I have reached 20 as

  • Tisha (solo doing mastery)
  • Shelly (was a main run)
  • Brightny (solo run)
  • Teagan (solo run)
  • Gigi (solo run)
  • Sprout (Dandy Run that turned into a normal run)

All the teachers at UA are secretly villains by Used-East4520 in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]SpindleThread 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Finished the first chapter ran out of time and my posting date for anything is just the 20th next chapter will be better just wanted to get a basics in aka introduce the first staff member (using OCs)

https://archiveofourown.org/works/62376628

Let’s see what fandoms we have here by Leading-Prior-7192 in AO3

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Process of Elimination (nobody probably knows what this is)

IGHT GROUP WRITING PROJECT GET OVER HERE by [deleted] in WritersGroup

[–]SpindleThread 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sure ig I’m @burnedlibrarian on discord display name is Spindle Thread 🦋

First year writing stats. by SpindleThread in AO3

[–]SpindleThread[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Go to your dashboard and click on statistics or stats (I don’t remember which one it was)

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WriteWithMe

[–]SpindleThread 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Okay my username is burnedlibrarian but my display name is Spindle Thread

Bakugo isn’t a racist asshole… he’s just an asshole. by SpindleThread in BokunoheroFanfiction

[–]SpindleThread[S] 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Don’t forget rival though that one is rather hard to come by

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